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Kharhmah
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 Poems for thee.
This is the first time I've shown my poems to the public. I just want to know the honest truth about what you think of them. 
No.1
Unannounced and breeding,
unknown quadruped,
silenced by the beating of its own hand contained heart,
solemn and unmoving,
lost within the rain-clouds in the purple sky,
fifteen years since you emerged,
it rings throughout your body,
final breaths and last heartbeat escapes you,
body and soul depart forever,
under watchful eye dark shadows consume your form,
moves in,
without sound,
lifts you high,
whispers to your ear,
how long did you last alone?
no more will you need
to suffer,
be still.
No.2
The Universe goes round my head,
what’s alive and what is dead,
what is past what's yet to come,
time is wasting,
I am undone.
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and now I die..
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May 7th, 2005 09:48 PM |
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Kharhmah
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No.3
I dont understand,
why hand in hand they separate,
and leave us bleeding,
undoubtless sorrow,
needless pain,
mounts,
creeps upon,
surprising and unnerving,
I want to go and hide,
sobbing stops,
but restarts soon,
unbeknowst to one who dies,
resurrection is far from close.
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May 7th, 2005 10:10 PM |
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Kharhmah
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No.4
Dont stare at me,
just leave me alone,
inside my head,
I need to breathe,
legs are lead,
hold me back,
left alone,
in freezing cold,
and night to dark,
for me to see,
cloudy vision,
sacrificial piece of dirt,
I am unknown,
I knew the sacrificed.
No.5
Underground,
cant see where I'm traveling,
blinded by the darkness,
reflected,
evil breeds evil,
being followed,
slowly will it catch,
me,
slipping into slime,
bury me,
without you,
dont watch me,
let me sleep,
please,
let me leave,
I need to be,
alone.
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May 7th, 2005 10:26 PM |
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Coldfire
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Ooooo..... Those had some real good imagery in them 
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May 8th, 2005 05:25 AM |
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Kharhmah
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Thankies.
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May 8th, 2005 12:59 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Its always nice to see that people show an interest.
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May 9th, 2005 08:34 PM |
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Jackie Malfoy
Jacks
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Neat poems you are really gifted.How long have you been writing poems?jm
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May 10th, 2005 09:12 PM |
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BeachBunny
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ey Kharhmah! 
i don't know much about poetry but yours is nice to read...
my fav 'til now is the No. 5
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May 10th, 2005 09:13 PM |
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Kharhmah
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May 10th, 2005 09:36 PM |
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BeachBunny
Creme De la Creme
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Yay! keep writing!
was a good idea to open your poem thread, i'll check it
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May 10th, 2005 09:50 PM |
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Kharhmah
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No.6
Five minutes 'till the bell,
dont worry go to hell,
then you'll be right unless your wrong,
and do not know of all,
the things that boil inside,
you cannot hide,
the pain will be inside,
forever,
undying sorrow,
only hate will bring it back,
underneath the fate and glory,
bugs of love will die,
in agony,
above itself,
translucent glow engulfs,
you cannot tell if you dont know,
what the hell is wrong,
I need to leave now,
need to hide,
from everything that grows inside,
the pain will mount and then envelop,
entomb and so devour,
you,
or me and anyone can see,
that if you bleed,
you bleed and die alone and,
wondering if you should live,
or if the world should let you breathe.
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May 10th, 2005 10:24 PM |
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BeachBunny
Creme De la Creme
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is perfect for a lyric ^^
i like it
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May 14th, 2005 10:49 PM |
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Coldfire
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I like it too
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May 15th, 2005 12:55 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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Nice work K. bring on the rest!
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Sent from heaven to raise some hell.
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May 15th, 2005 03:57 PM |
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Tassie
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Nice stuff, I really like. No. 3's my favourite.
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May 15th, 2005 05:01 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Thanks guys.
No.7
Unable to proceed,
I need to leave,
I have to vacate,
my own head,
I might be dying,
might be dead,
without knowing,
I have bled,
to many times,
to count,
closing down,
I wont return,
you wouldn't miss me,
I realise,
I wish I could,
but I dare not.
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May 15th, 2005 05:15 PM |
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Coldfire
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Ooo nice
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May 15th, 2005 07:14 PM |
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Very good poetry I must say.
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May 17th, 2005 04:04 PM |
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BeachBunny
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Nice ^^
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May 17th, 2005 05:17 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Thanks you.
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