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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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great stuff, K. Good stylizing with the freedom in your poems. bring on the morrow and more of em!
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May 18th, 2005 06:53 PM |
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Kharhmah
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No.8 a.k.a. Wincing.
Under floor,
and bloody bones will crack,
under pressure from drowning seas,
that submerge themselves underneath the world and follow,
the death that comes across and sees us laughing,
undying if not,
only distinctively foul and elusive,
though we are all living,
if not quietly,
undecided and not willing to comply,
with feelings met by another,
unwitting soul,
of which their lives eat,
but not consume,
the only vacant one will come and let you loose on the Earth,
you must run if you desire to live,
to see the next hour alive you must die alone.
No.9
Slip into the mud under my shoes,
your already decomposing,
dont cry at me,
beg me to cease,
the relentless suffering,
tears help no one,
but let me see them once,
before you go,
I need to know your pain,
you make me smile as you writhe,
dont be scared,
I've always liked the blade with which I hurt,
I'll not loosen the ropes,
till your gone,
you'll leave me here as I laugh,
I have not lost it yet,
but soon it shall be gone,
as you also will be,
call me what you like,
kick and scream at me,
dont suppress it,
watch me carefully,
as the fire goes out,
and the sun goes down,
I like it when you scream,
I like it when you cry,
I like it when you bleed,
I like it when you die.
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May 25th, 2005 03:21 PM |
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Wow those poems are deep, loved No.9, tell me how long have you been wrighting poetry?
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May 25th, 2005 03:35 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Thanks. I wrote No.9 on the spot just before I posted.
I think I've been writing for a little over two years.
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May 25th, 2005 03:40 PM |
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peterKSL
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Nice work!!! Can you tell me how long have you been wrighting poetry?jm 
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May 25th, 2005 04:08 PM |
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peterKSL
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^ LOL
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May 25th, 2005 04:09 PM |
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BeachBunny
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nice nice ^^
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May 27th, 2005 11:14 AM |
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the're kool!they r all on pain,suffering,or lonliness.so much emotion!
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Jun 1st, 2005 07:16 PM |
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Kharhmah
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I'm not so sure about this one. 
No.10
A cavalcade of waterfalls,
drop down and blow asunder,
the bleeding hearts,
and dreary starts,
of one left by another,
the hate will flow,
and pain will follow,
death's not far behind,
the sun will set,
upon life's doorstep,
I'm leaving you alive,
I wish to leave you here,
you have no more to give.
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Jun 10th, 2005 06:03 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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very awesome K.
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Jun 10th, 2005 09:11 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Thanks 
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Jun 10th, 2005 09:14 PM |
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Kharhmah
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No.11
Only four hours of sleep last night,
I have one heart to break,
conversed with my father,
my best friend too,
on what they suggest,
this poor fool to do,
cant write an email,
too afraid to say,
what on this earth made me feel this way,
I did not intend for this to continue,
this rose has just wilted,
the penny has dropped,
if you are reading this,
I wish it would stop,
I don't know how to tell you,
I don't love you anymore.
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Jun 10th, 2005 10:25 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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^^^ ouch. yeah, not that easy. ^^^
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Jun 10th, 2005 11:29 PM |
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Coldfire
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These poems are all so awesome..... yeah and in that last one, that can't be easy at all...
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Jun 19th, 2005 07:01 PM |
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Kharhmah
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The last one served its purpose.
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Jun 19th, 2005 07:58 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
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Did it now?? Well that's good... I think...
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Jun 19th, 2005 08:07 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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hahah well, if it works, use it...
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Jun 20th, 2005 01:12 PM |
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Dante Vlada
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WOW Kharhmah. GOOD stuff!!
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Jun 20th, 2005 09:49 PM |
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Kharhmah
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Jun 20th, 2005 09:52 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
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More please  
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