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Forbidden love
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SIC_666
You Made Me....

Gender: Male
Location: Oblivion

Forbidden love

This is a poem i just wrote tell me what you think

Forbidden love

I saw you commin' from a mile away
Your look attacked me with a pretty face
I could tell just by lookin' youd been burned and used
poor little heart was black and Brusied
Then all you needed was a pick up line i bet you've heard 'em all a thousnad times
I got up to you and there was nothin' i could say
You were this close i was afraid

my heart said it was right
I thought it was wrong
But i couldn't do anythin'

It aches now
it breaks Now
It takes my breath away now
That although ive fallen in love with you
Ive tried , tried , tried to get around the truth
But i don't wanna beg
My heart just wants a break
And i don't wanna make the same mistake

But its to late...

You flew away like a dove
And stood there shatterd by forbidden love.


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Coldfire
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I thought it was good


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Nice^^ You can really feel emotion in it. smile

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SIC_666
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Thanks its rly a song more dan a poem! Thank u guys! I will continue to write!!!! lol!


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Coldfire
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Yes please do!


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