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SIC_666
You Made Me....
Gender: Male Location: Oblivion |
Forbidden love
This is a poem i just wrote tell me what you think
Forbidden love
I saw you commin' from a mile away
Your look attacked me with a pretty face
I could tell just by lookin' youd been burned and used
poor little heart was black and Brusied
Then all you needed was a pick up line i bet you've heard 'em all a thousnad times
I got up to you and there was nothin' i could say
You were this close i was afraid
my heart said it was right
I thought it was wrong
But i couldn't do anythin'
It aches now
it breaks Now
It takes my breath away now
That although ive fallen in love with you
Ive tried , tried , tried to get around the truth
But i don't wanna beg
My heart just wants a break
And i don't wanna make the same mistake
But its to late...
You flew away like a dove
And stood there shatterd by forbidden love.
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"My god..The House of Ribs..Gone"
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May 10th, 2005 04:56 PM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
I thought it was good
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May 10th, 2005 11:47 PM |
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Tassie
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Nice^^ You can really feel emotion in it.
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May 11th, 2005 08:42 PM |
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SIC_666
You Made Me....
Gender: Male Location: Oblivion |
Thanks its rly a song more dan a poem! Thank u guys! I will continue to write!!!! lol!
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"My god..The House of Ribs..Gone"
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May 17th, 2005 03:48 PM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Yes please do!
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May 23rd, 2005 03:32 AM |
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