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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
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Whoo!!! hahahaa! Hey man, that is great. Course, pretty much describes life for me way back when to a T also. hahha. Hopeless Romantics Unite!
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Jun 8th, 2005 12:29 PM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
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YEA!!!!!!!! thanks....ill post something soon......maybe........lol
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Jun 15th, 2005 01:48 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Hahahahah !
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Jun 15th, 2005 02:13 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Yes yes post soon cuz I wanna read more
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Jun 15th, 2005 05:52 PM |
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twin_soul
Fire & Ice
Gender: Male Location: United States |
Yeah, you've got plenty more dont ya? I always did like I Care, even though you never really did... I still think its one of your best lol, well keep writing and I will too... I just need some damn inspiration... argh!!
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Jun 22nd, 2005 05:19 AM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
Gender: Male Location: Stark Tower |
ok......ive been out long enough....heres one: (first one ever)
What is Love?
You don’t know it,
but some nights
I sit on a hill
under a blanket of twinkling stars
and I wonder:
What is love?
Can it be tested?
Can it be measured?
Can it be defined with words
other than “love” itself?
What is love?
Is it an emotion,
where your heart beats faster
and you want virtually no space
between you and that special someone
and when you’re together
time and space seem to stop
and the cosmos explode with a multicolored hue?
Or is it a thought,
where you catch yourself daily
thinking of that person?
Is it where your thoughts
consume you in a shock of sensations
and you have that special moment
when you were together
tucked away in your heart?
So what is love?
It’s a lot of things.
Some known
and some unknown,
but the question is:
will you let me in your heart?
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Jun 24th, 2005 01:40 AM |
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twin_soul
Fire & Ice
Gender: Male Location: United States |
wow... hey, I've never seen that one before? When'd you write it? That was great
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Jun 24th, 2005 03:58 AM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
That one was good! I did one called What Is Love? as well, and its got lots of the same ideas as yours But I liked your wording better I think
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Jun 24th, 2005 04:57 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
cool one. more please!
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Jun 24th, 2005 02:36 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Yes yes write more please
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Jun 25th, 2005 05:51 AM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
Gender: Male Location: Stark Tower |
thanks you guys....and twin (shadow) youve seen it.....of course youve seen it...ill post more later....again thanks.....
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Jun 26th, 2005 05:45 AM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Post more post more
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Jul 1st, 2005 01:38 AM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
Gender: Male Location: Stark Tower |
ok here goes.....a darker theme than most but here it is
In the Dark
The darkness is overwhelming
taking control,
comforting with its peace.
The darkness within has grown
yet not fully manifested.
My soul is now
neither white nor black
but the darker part of gray.
I stay in the darkness
because the world has
left me alone
and it soothes me.
Watching from the darkness
forever in darkness I stand.
I am but a man
and yet I stand,
not against the light
though light darkness does most fear.
I stand for nothing
and no one.
Though I stand,
I stand alone
where no one can see me.
I wear a mask
in hopes that if light ever comes
no one will know me.
With this mask
I know not who I am.
I am anyone who you want me to be.
The eyes are the windows of the soul,
yet I cover them
with the mask
letting no one know my own soul.
If you find me
I will be not me
but whoever you want me to be,
for the mask reflects
whatever you wish me to be...
I stand alone against no one,
hiding from everyone,
In the darkness I stand...
eternally alone.
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Jul 2nd, 2005 11:33 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
haha..... cool. and very reminiscent of my own darker walk....
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Jul 3rd, 2005 02:31 AM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
Gender: Male Location: Stark Tower |
really? I havent been able to read everyone else's poems, been to busy in the comic section.....Ill post more later....
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Jul 5th, 2005 12:58 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
check out Tassie's and Coldfire's, Syren's, Justjakk, and especially guys like Karmah. great stuff all around!
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Jul 5th, 2005 03:44 AM |
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canadian_girl45
Willow's b*tch
Gender: Female Location: Ontario, Canada |
Your poems have alot of depth to them. It's simplistic yet brilliant. Great work
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Jul 5th, 2005 11:44 AM |
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Blair Wind
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thank you....
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Jul 5th, 2005 04:10 PM |
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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger
Gender: Male Location: Stark Tower |
must....post....more.....here.....goes.....
a poem I wrote for Mothers Day:
Love of a Mother
I call you Love
For you are a mother
The initiator of emotions,
The person that creates close bonds,
The one people rely on,
To pull them through life’s obstacles.
From the elderly lady with grown child
To the young woman with newborn babe
The love of a mother surpasses all.
Love can be shown,
In so many ways,
A grin, A glance, A word.
A mother does all these
With protecting hands
And working feet
You have shown a
Love that can
Fill the emptiness of space.
When you wanted a time of
Momentary grace
I gave you none
Yet when I wanted the same
You gave me some
As I take a breath that fills my
Lungs with the space between
Two moons
I remember....
You sang me songs to put me to bed
Then prayed with me to put me to sleep, again.
With oceans, swirling, filled with your love
I thank God for the person He gave me as Mother...
This boy with many laments has no regrets
When it comes to his Mother
Truly you area guardian angel, in disguise.
Mother, loved and cared for you will always be
Because you first loved me.
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Jul 16th, 2005 11:48 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Cool man.
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