ok heres a really rough draft of a poem i started and never finished....I wanted some suggestions...once your read it you'll know what to say but can you think of anymore topics that I could cover??? well here goes what I have so far (and it has no ending...)
I'm Tired
Im tired of life
and its hypocrisies
of presidents
dropping bombs in the middle east
girls gettin raped on the streets
and gang wars that go from west to east
of terrorists attacks
hijacked planes
and bombs on trains
when the only motivation for it is to create pain...
Im tired of guns being acceptable
pornography respectable
the notion that vodka will make you happy
that crack and weed are worth the money
of women who sell their bodies on street corners
for $100 an hour
and get STD's like
Herpes and HIV
of the first amendment always being violated
of censorship being put on everything
that talk of God, creation and prayer are outlawed
on the halls at schools,
thrown into the same category as Castro, Hitler, and Saddam Hussein....
and I dont know what to talk about after that...any thoughts???
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Oct 25th, 2005 12:34 AM
j/k...
oh baby would i! 
ohhhhh man.... sorry blair... 
