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Cory Chaos
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"Expired" - by Cine

This is a little piece I was inspired to write up. It's basically a personal piece about how the opportunities for happiness you want go ignored, but finally catch up with you. It's called "Expired".




What once drove you to be, snuffed out...
Extingushed.

Stone cold soul assassin, the culprit and victim...
Synounymous.

What's left, a vapid shell, its permanence astounds you...
Why?

So ****ing detatched, as always, conveniently passing the buck..
Surprised?

Who should care if you don't, words to live by, an adage of conceit..
Bastard.

Oblivious to the league that once loved, you turned a blind eye...
Scared?

Opportunity knocked, and your door, my friend, had no hinges..
Go figure.

Your endless brooding, from twisted serendipity, like you're grateful...
Poseur.

Well, cherish your moroseness, soak in it, bathe in it...
So bemired.

It's time, your waiver on happiness, your solace, your frailty, all these...

Expired.

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That was good Cine! Nice use of words to make the poem.... stand out... I guess


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I like it. Please post more.


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Cine you gonna post some more poetry soon??


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Re: "Expired" - by Cine

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Originally posted by Cinemaddiction
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Opportunity knocked, and your door, my friend, had no hinges..
Go figure.



oohh, great line!!


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This is fantastic... I really think you should share more with us big grin


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This is fantastic... I really think you should share more with us big grin

I so totally agree big grin


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