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DreamingWarrior
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Very nice poems, Twin. Bring some more !


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Old Post Jun 20th, 2005 12:51 PM
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Coldfire
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Originally posted by twin_soul
Thanks here's another ^_^

Show Me the Way

There you were,
Just standing there.
I saw you and I wanted to reach you.
My hand went out to take yours.
I was so close, but then you were gone.
Every time I saw you, I tried to reach you,
But something came between us.
I realized that I had been distracted
By a friend that needed help.
I had to forget my desires
To handle this problem,
A problem that was not mine.
My desires became insignificant
As I had to put them on the shelf,
Because first I had to help out a friend,
To tackle someone else’s situation,
Then I could get back to my own.
Compassion, a word so few people know,
Yet something the whole world needs.
Some day I hope to reach you.
I just wish you know what I knew.
I wish you knew what you meant to me.
A twisted soul, looking for a way to you.
You are the only one that can help me
Find the way.


That's a very nice poem yes


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Old Post Jun 20th, 2005 06:34 PM
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twin_soul
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Thanks you guys! big grin


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Old Post Jun 22nd, 2005 04:15 AM
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twin_soul
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Heh, Cold, goin through your thread inspired me to post this poem, cuz I dont really like it. Geez, I wish i had been here a while ago, cuz tryin to go through all these long threads is insane.

Invisible

I sit and watch, and I start to think.
Why do I feel so alone?
Surrounded by people,
yet I feel so alone.
This feeling, like no one can see me,
like no one cares.
They care, I think…
but why can’t I see it?
I think they see me, but for some reason
I can’t tell…
They just pass me by…
like I’m… invisible.
Invisible… that’s me…
But why me? Why not someone else?
I sit here,
watching and thinking.
Why can’t I speak?
So many words I want to say,
but I can’t get them out.
I never get to express myself…
at least, not how I’d like to.
I always miss my chance.
“Later,” I say…
But later is always too late.
I missed my chance… again.
So what do I do now?
I continue to wait,
watching and thinking.
Watching people pass me by.
I feel so alone.
Why am I so alone?

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Hey Dream, I would go through your thread, but it's kinda long... I'll get to it one day big grin and I guess I gotta get to yours too blair, eh?


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Old Post Jun 22nd, 2005 04:19 AM
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twin_soul
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Gender: Male
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Yeah, this is kinda old but...

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Originally posted by Coldfire
That was very well done happy I tried doing a sonnet once, lmao, and it turned out horribly stick out tongue big grin


Heh, I say keep trying... well, I guess you can't force it. Mine just kinda flowed out big grin


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Old Post Jun 22nd, 2005 05:21 AM
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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

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Originally posted by twin_soul
Heh, Cold, goin through your thread inspired me to post this poem, cuz I dont really like it. Geez, I wish i had been here a while ago, cuz tryin to go through all these long threads is insane.

Invisible

I sit and watch, and I start to think.
Why do I feel so alone?
Surrounded by people,
yet I feel so alone.
This feeling, like no one can see me,
like no one cares.
They care, I think…
but why can’t I see it?
I think they see me, but for some reason
I can’t tell…
They just pass me by…
like I’m… invisible.
Invisible… that’s me…
But why me? Why not someone else?
I sit here,
watching and thinking.
Why can’t I speak?
So many words I want to say,
but I can’t get them out.
I never get to express myself…
at least, not how I’d like to.
I always miss my chance.
“Later,” I say…
But later is always too late.
I missed my chance… again.
So what do I do now?
I continue to wait,
watching and thinking.
Watching people pass me by.
I feel so alone.
Why am I so alone?

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Hey Dream, I would go through your thread, but it's kinda long... I'll get to it one day big grin and I guess I gotta get to yours too blair, eh?

haha hey, to see my poems, just click my name and check my posts. is easier to just walk through there and then you can get past the many hi's and hello's that got on the thread. haha or, just sit at the comp for an hour and checkit all out! make sure to read Syren, Tassie, Prince of Blades, Coldfire, and Karmah's stuff too! some of my personal faves.


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Old Post Jun 22nd, 2005 04:57 PM
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Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by twin_soul
Yeah, this is kinda old but...



Heh, I say keep trying... well, I guess you can't force it. Mine just kinda flowed out big grin


Yeah I haven't really had time to try recently, but I will once I do have the time yes


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Old Post Jun 23rd, 2005 03:43 AM
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Coldfire
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha hey, to see my poems, just click my name and check my posts. is easier to just walk through there and then you can get past the many hi's and hello's that got on the thread. haha or, just sit at the comp for an hour and checkit all out! make sure to read Syren, Tassie, Prince of Blades, Coldfire, and Karmah's stuff too! some of my personal faves.


Lol yeah there seems to be a lot of chatter on our threads eh? stick out tongue big grin Tis fun tho lol Happy Dance


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twin_soul
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Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol yeah there seems to be a lot of chatter on our threads eh? stick out tongue big grin Tis fun tho lol Happy Dance


Lol, just a little bit, but yeah, you're right. It is fun big grin So, here's another...

Realization

No one told me how to fall in love.
Only that when I did, I would know.
Every time I looked at you, I started to think:
Maybe this is what they meant, but I wasn’t sure.
I realized too late that I love you.


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Old Post Jun 24th, 2005 04:03 AM
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twin_soul
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Location: United States

And here goes another.

My Love

I’m not really sure
What I am,
But I wish I could be
The only thing you’d need.
I may not be with you,
But I wish I could.
If only you knew
What you meant to me.
I wish I could be with you.
You’re the only one
That can make me laugh like that,
Smile that way.
You’re the only one
That can take my breath away,
Hold it and make me lose my head.
What would happen if I told you so?
If I had one wish,
It would be for you;
To hold you forever,
But would that make you happy?
You hold my heart.
I wish I held yours,
But I can wait.
I have nothing else to do.
Should I wait?
Or am I just wasting my time?
But I don’t know what else to do;
I want to wait for you.
As long as I can make you smile,
I will be happy.
As long as I can make you laugh,
I can sleep peacefully.
If I ever make you cry,
I hope that is the day that I die
So I’ll never hurt you again,
But would that hurt even more?
I may never know,
But as love is, so I will be.
I will be patient, kind.
I won’t get jealous.
I will love,
Though I may never be loved.
My love will always be here,
As will I.
I won’t be angry.
I will continue to love.
Anger consumes,
But through love comes life.
Love must be.
Love is what holds us together.
When the love ends, so does this world.
For we cannot survive without love.


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Old Post Jun 24th, 2005 04:06 AM
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Coldfire
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..... That was wonderful... Lol I'm such a hopeless romantic stick out tongue big grin


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

very enjoyable.


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Coldfire
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Geez that poem made me cry this time....

I would like to see some more twin yes


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Blair Wind
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Twin, hurry up and post before I hit you up side your head (u know I will too)


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twin_soul
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Wow... i havent been here in a while... geez Blair... I gotta rewrite that poem... but anyway i found a poem.. well 2 poems, that i don't remember writing...

The first one I call Alone

They left me alone.
Ha... I don't need them.
Or do I?
It's pointless.
What could they ever do for me?
I don't know...
It's useless.
They were just a waste of time.
Or maybe... I'm useless.
It's hopeless.
They'll never come back.
They left me... they don't need me.
But I'm so lonely.
I feel useless...
Hopeless... pointless...
I find myself looking for them.
Watching, waiting.
Will they come back?
Somebody help me...
But how?
No one can help me...
I'm hopless.
Somebody need me...
But for what?
I'm useless.
Somebody give me a reason...
Reason to exist.
But why?
I'm pointless.
I sit alone in the shadows.
No one notices me.
I am invisible.
Is that why they left?
There they go...
They pass by me.
They don't notice me.
I run after them,
But they don't see.
They leave... again.
I never noticed before,
But I wanted them.
I don't want to be alone.
The tears... they sting.
I wish they didn't.
I wipe them away.
Crying is pointless.
It's hopeless, useless...
I return to the shadows.
I sit, waiting... but for what?
It seems like ages pass.
But then...
I feel a tap on my shoulder.
Is it them?
I look up...
No, it's not them.
It's someone else.
Someone... new.
He smiles at me.
I turn away.
I don't want to be with anyone...
Or do I?
He taps me again,
But I don't respond.
He sits next to me.
I don't understand.
Why doesn't He leave me,
Like the others had?
Inwardly I smile.
It feels nice
Not to sit alone.
I look at Him.
I see the same smiling face.
I smile back.
Suddenly I feel different inside.
Maybe I'm not so pointless.
Maybe He's my reason to exist.
Maybe I'm not so hopeless.
Maybe He can help me.
Maybe I'm not so useless.
Maybe He needs me.
Things have changed.
I have this feeling that He won't leave.
I know I won't.
I will stand by Him forever.


This one I don't remember when or why I wrote this one, and it has no title. So, here goes...

I thought that I
Knew you.
I felt like I
Loved you.
I tried to
Give you my heart.
But it felt like you
Ripped it apart.
Now I feel like I've
Wasted my time,
So I put together
This rhyme.
I thought that we'd be
Happy together.
I thought I would
Love you forever,
But I guess we'll be
Together fornever.
I'll always remember
How I used to feel,
But now I realize that
It coulda never been real.


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Blair Wind
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nice...never seen those before....good job!! big grin


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Coldfire
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Those are great twin!! big grin


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DreamingWarrior
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good job!


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Blair Wind
The Iron Avenger

Gender: Male
Location: Stark Tower

aight since twin is a duck who comes on forums then quits like two weeks into it, i will be posting his poems here....whenever i get the time...just bumping the thread right now....


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DreamingWarrior
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laughing out loud ok . hahaha


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