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love poems
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Puddin Pop
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
aw thanks LOL

im outta ideas for now but like ive got a bunch of stuff brewin cuz wow! life really sucks
Aww life can only get better. Wow I sound like my mom. We make more soon I'll be waiting!

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Coldfire
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Originally posted by Puddin Pop
Aww life can only get better. Wow I sound like my mom. We make more soon I'll be waiting!

Me too


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black_goku#1
Codac lord of underverse

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wow i been gone awhile sorry ive had a tight schedule anyway life is unjust and hears my poem to reflect on that aspect



My Tears

My tears are not enough,
to wash away the pain
to cast away this Feeling
to purify this stain
My tears are not enough
to take away the hurt
to grant a bath of Healing
to drive away the dirt
My tears are not enough
to tell you that in lost
to make me more Appealing
to melt your heart of frost
my tears are not enough
to help me with the grief
i here am Kneeling
with sudden disbelif
My tears are not enough..........

((hmm lost my train of thought but hope you like it i just feel it doesnt quite capture the feeling im looking for. Oh guys im getting published! isnt that awsome?!!!!))


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Old Post Sep 11th, 2005 08:22 PM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

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Originally posted by black_goku#1
wow i been gone awhile sorry ive had a tight schedule anyway life is unjust and hears my poem to reflect on that aspect



My Tears

My tears are not enough,
to wash away the pain
to cast away this Feeling
to purify this stain
My tears are not enough
to take away the hurt
to grant a bath of Healing
to drive away the dirt
My tears are not enough
to tell you that in lost
to make me more Appealing
to melt your heart of frost
my tears are not enough
to help me with the grief
i here am Kneeling
with sudden disbelif
My tears are not enough..........

((hmm lost my train of thought but hope you like it i just feel it doesnt quite capture the feeling im looking for. Oh guys im getting published! isnt that awsome?!!!!))

awww.... I love it

((You are?? Awesome!! eek! ))


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black_goku#1
Codac lord of underverse

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Location: im surprised you care

im sorry guys i am running on empty


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Jana lovevince,chris,coldfire

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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
im sorry guys i am running on empty

Don't worry hun, I am too smile


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snehin
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some good work

writers block tis not easy im stuck in my book too


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Coldfire
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It's sucking soooo badly right now I have half a dozen unfinished poems lying around that I can't seem to finish....


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black_goku#1
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oh dark pit
lake of torment
thy soul so cold and bleek
what horrid presence
what ghastly curse
has caused you to wax and wane
can the frost around thine heart be thawed
the void that consumes thy breast be filled


((ok i quit but i hope that strikes someones fancy its aboot me so im like talkin to myself))


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Jana lovevince,chris,coldfire

Old Post Nov 9th, 2005 02:52 AM
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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
oh dark pit
lake of torment
thy soul so cold and bleek
what horrid presence
what ghastly curse
has caused you to wax and wane
can the frost around thine heart be thawed
the void that consumes thy breast be filled


((ok i quit but i hope that strikes someones fancy its aboot me so im like talkin to myself))

eek! Hey!!! I missed seeing ya around!

And I love the wording of that piece!


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black_goku#1
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i missed all of you too ug i have been going through so much crap did you really like that poem? It was very different for me. im still runnin on empty although


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Coldfire
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i missed all of you too ug i have been going through so much crap did you really like that poem? It was very different for me. im still runnin on empty although

Yeah I really did like it


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black_goku#1
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ok ive got nothing that rhymes so how about a sortof journal thing would you guys mind reading a little journal of my life for awhile until i get more poetry ideas


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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
ok ive got nothing that rhymes so how about a sortof journal thing would you guys mind reading a little journal of my life for awhile until i get more poetry ideas

Sure, that works for me happy


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black_goku#1
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Location: im surprised you care

nov 12 2005 2:22pm

so i have spent the last two days at home right? theres like a "bird flu?" going around my school and i finally caught it. I hate being sick i never get sick and i have learned that nyquil* is the enemy!!! i have had nothing but time to go online and go through all my emails (432 to be exact) and i came across this chain letter. it was cute and then it said if i didntt send it to five people in 20 mins i would have a cursed love life for the next ten years. i dont believe in these things but i didnt need anymore bad luck so i sent it quick. igot a response that said good job the woman you love will realize how much she loves you tonight. dudes and dudettes i kid you not the girl i care most abodumped her boyfreind and asked me out. ofcourse i said yes. now it could be a coincidense but im happy! isnt that crazy???


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Coldfire
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wow that is pretty crazy, but awesome at the same time! big grin


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black_goku#1
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sorry internet down for awhile but have a happy chrismahonakwanza solstice everyone smile okie day i gots ta go but i love ya all


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Jana lovevince,chris,coldfire

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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
sorry internet down for awhile but have a happy chrismahonakwanza solstice everyone smile okie day i gots ta go but i love ya all

And I was gone when you came back... darn... ah well... Love ya too hun


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midneight
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((its still blackgoku#1 hi hey any idea how to get your old account when you lose your old password and dont have the same email address?))


A forbidden Path

I traveled down a lonely road and steered towards the right
a lovely little forbidden path full of happieness and delight.
A voice called out so soft so sweet to guide me to the door
She took my hand my arm my heart and made me crave much more
i walked this road indeed my friends with a smile ear to ear
for this special girl you see gave me nothing to fear
An inner strength i felt inside a swelling pool of pride
as i walked down this path my lover at my side.
"i love you" said i in disbelif of my pleasnt surprise
"i love you too" said she tears flowing from my eyes
"i never thought id end up here with someone as great as you. you gave me strength you shed me light when i thought my life was through"
To this a simple smile and kiss and my feelings then they grew.
for in my heart rest a start to a life so grand so new

A shadow crept up this path one i wish never again see
For when this thing this curse this hell came it took her away from me
and now i search this lonely road and i wander towards the right
for chance to find the one of a kind
little forbidden path of delight

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black_goku#1
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Gender: Male
Location: im surprised you care

((ok my poetry thread has been sleeping for awhile time to revive))

tap tap tap on a door made of solid wood
a heavy strudy barier
between what i cant and what could
i budge i push i ram i pound
but this door to salvation knocks me to the groung
my fists are bloodied
my face is blue
with all ive studied
i cant open you.


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