wow i been gone awhile sorry ive had a tight schedule anyway life is unjust and hears my poem to reflect on that aspect
My Tears
My tears are not enough,
to wash away the pain
to cast away this Feeling
to purify this stain
My tears are not enough
to take away the hurt
to grant a bath of Healing
to drive away the dirt
My tears are not enough
to tell you that in lost
to make me more Appealing
to melt your heart of frost
my tears are not enough
to help me with the grief
i here am Kneeling
with sudden disbelif
My tears are not enough..........
((hmm lost my train of thought but hope you like it i just feel it doesnt quite capture the feeling im looking for. Oh guys im getting published! isnt that awsome?!!!!))
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oh dark pit
lake of torment
thy soul so cold and bleek
what horrid presence
what ghastly curse
has caused you to wax and wane
can the frost around thine heart be thawed
the void that consumes thy breast be filled
((ok i quit but i hope that strikes someones fancy its aboot me so im like talkin to myself))
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i missed all of you too ug i have been going through so much crap did you really like that poem? It was very different for me. im still runnin on empty although
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ok ive got nothing that rhymes so how about a sortof journal thing would you guys mind reading a little journal of my life for awhile until i get more poetry ideas
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so i have spent the last two days at home right? theres like a "bird flu?" going around my school and i finally caught it. I hate being sick i never get sick and i have learned that nyquil* is the enemy!!! i have had nothing but time to go online and go through all my emails (432 to be exact) and i came across this chain letter. it was cute and then it said if i didntt send it to five people in 20 mins i would have a cursed love life for the next ten years. i dont believe in these things but i didnt need anymore bad luck so i sent it quick. igot a response that said good job the woman you love will realize how much she loves you tonight. dudes and dudettes i kid you not the girl i care most abodumped her boyfreind and asked me out. ofcourse i said yes. now it could be a coincidense but im happy! isnt that crazy???
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((its still blackgoku#1 hi hey any idea how to get your old account when you lose your old password and dont have the same email address?))
A forbidden Path
I traveled down a lonely road and steered towards the right
a lovely little forbidden path full of happieness and delight.
A voice called out so soft so sweet to guide me to the door
She took my hand my arm my heart and made me crave much more
i walked this road indeed my friends with a smile ear to ear
for this special girl you see gave me nothing to fear
An inner strength i felt inside a swelling pool of pride
as i walked down this path my lover at my side.
"i love you" said i in disbelif of my pleasnt surprise
"i love you too" said she tears flowing from my eyes
"i never thought id end up here with someone as great as you. you gave me strength you shed me light when i thought my life was through"
To this a simple smile and kiss and my feelings then they grew.
for in my heart rest a start to a life so grand so new
A shadow crept up this path one i wish never again see
For when this thing this curse this hell came it took her away from me
and now i search this lonely road and i wander towards the right
for chance to find the one of a kind
little forbidden path of delight
((ok my poetry thread has been sleeping for awhile time to revive))
tap tap tap on a door made of solid wood
a heavy strudy barier
between what i cant and what could
i budge i push i ram i pound
but this door to salvation knocks me to the groung
my fists are bloodied
my face is blue
with all ive studied
i cant open you.
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