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Sassy
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Sblomie's Reality

Most of the poetry I write is dedications, this one however is about me




Her Smile

What if you could see behind her smile,

Would you want to see the truth?

Do you want to see her pain?

Behind the fake smiles are tears,

Tears she's been holding back all of her life.

She can't let go of them.

The tears are a part of her,

but they don't define who she is.

Behind her smile she keeps the truth,

the truth you can't see.

If you look a little closer,

you might see the tears in her eyes,

the fake in her smile,

the cuts on her wrists,

the pain in her heart,

If you just glance at her,

all you see is a smile.




tell me if you like it and i'll post more


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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xLiNdS x 622x
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Location: OH-HI-OH

AWESOMENESSS.....that was one spesh poem wink



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Sassy
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thank you darling happy


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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Pantera
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Nice, such a " spesh " poem


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Sassy
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decided to post another, not by influence *cough* linds *cough*



Liars

Backstabbers, liars, betrayers,

I am surrounded by them.

You think you can trust them,

You think you can tell them your secrets,

but all they do is stab you in the back.

They betray you,

They make up lies about you.

And now they want to know why.

Why are you acting this way?

Why dont you believe me?

Why are you such a horrible friend?

Wasn't i always there for you?

You were never there,

You betrayed me.

You stabbed me in the back.

You lied to me.

How can i befriend a liar?

That is what you are.

A shallow, egotistical, liar


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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xLiNdS x 622x
Boom shakalaka

Gender: Female
Location: OH-HI-OH

niiice..thumb up

YOU ARE MY HERO!


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Sassy
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Gender: Female
Location: LOST

last one for the night

Trapped

I'm trapped inside a world I cannot escape.

Is this really my fate?

I dont want to be here,

I am in a constant state of fear.

All i know is that I'm scared,

What I needed, was someone who really cared.

Is it too late to go back,

to the world that all I did was slack?

I'm not happy here,

I am supposed to be over there.

When i reached out,

all i recived was doubt.

Is this where I am destined to be?

I have to break free.

I have to break away,

I can't stay.

What seemed to be reality,

was just fake charity.


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Nice works all around. And now you hopefully have care, and never recieve doubt or lies, but truth and hope from those you meet. Heck, Ya got one at least. My word as a knight.


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Sent from heaven to raise some hell.

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Coldfire
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Beautiful sblomie!! big grin I'd like to hear some more yes


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thanks hun! just transfering some more to the computer happy


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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yeah i think u are awesome.....keep them coming plizzzz thumb up thumb up thumb up thumb up thumb up thumb up thumb up


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Sassy
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thanks happy


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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I like your poems Sarah. I wish there were more (hiny hint).

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Sassy
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this one is for my friend Kate, before she killed herself she was the one i could really depend on. a couple weeks after she died herself i wrote this.

Thank You

Thank you for always being so strong,

Thank you for showing me when I was wrong.

Thank you for being there when I was hurt,

Thank you for being the one to console me first.

Thank you for being by my side,

Thanks to you, I am satisfied.

Because of you I'm okay,

You were there for me every single day.

You actually cared,

I am no longer scared.

I was afraid of myself,

Thanks to you, I got help.

Thank you for helping me through the pain,

I am no longer alone in the pouring rain.


__________________
So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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This one's really short, but i like it that way

Behind Closed Doors

Behind Closed doors the tears come out,

I leave the phony smile behind.

Behind closed doors the true me comes out.

The me that I've been hiding from you.

If you're brave maybe I will let you see,

a glimpse of the lonely girl who lives inside of me.


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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thumb up sooo good


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thanks happy


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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alright this is the last one for now, maybe i'll post more later.

this was for a guy that i was in love with, i know he loved me too, he was just too afraid to admit it.

after i moved on from him he realized that he loved me, but it was too late- i actually wrote this before he came to this realization


Too Late

Is it too late to tell you that I care?

Am I too late to say that I'm scared?

I don't want to loose you.

Now I'm stuck here feeling blue.

It is too late to tell you I miss your touch,

I just miss you so much.

You like someone different now,

All I can ask myself is, how?

How did I let you get away?

This is the price I have to pay.

Am I too late to say I want you back?

Is there something I lack?

Does she have something I dont?

I can't tell you this, I wont.

Am I too late to tell you i still love you?

My feelings for you will always be true.


__________________
So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by sblomie545
alright this is the last one for now, maybe i'll post more later.

this was for a guy that i was in love with, i know he loved me too, he was just too afraid to admit it.

after i moved on from him he realized that he loved me, but it was too late- i actually wrote this before he came to this realization


Too Late

Is it too late to tell you that I care?

Am I too late to say that I'm scared?

I don't want to loose you.

Now I'm stuck here feeling blue.

It is too late to tell you I miss your touch,

I just miss you so much.

You like someone different now,

All I can ask myself is, how?

How did I let you get away?

This is the price I have to pay.

Am I too late to say I want you back?

Is there something I lack?

Does she have something I dont?

I can't tell you this, I wont.

Am I too late to tell you i still love you?

My feelings for you will always be true.

OUR LOVE

A love that promises to never break your heart

A love that will never die no matter how long we’re apart

A love that is yours for as long as you want it

A love that thinks of you and will not quit

A love that completes you and takes your breath away

A loves that continues to want you night and day

A love that most others wish they could see

A love that could only be shared by you and me

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Sassy
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Location: LOST

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Mistah DEVIL
OUR LOVE

A love that promises to never break your heart

A love that will never die no matter how long we’re apart

A love that is yours for as long as you want it

A love that thinks of you and will not quit

A love that completes you and takes your breath away

A loves that continues to want you night and day

A love that most others wish they could see

A love that could only be shared by you and me


blink ookay??


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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