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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

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Originally posted by Mistah DEVIL
OUR LOVE

A love that promises to never break your heart

A love that will never die no matter how long we’re apart

A love that is yours for as long as you want it

A love that thinks of you and will not quit

A love that completes you and takes your breath away

A loves that continues to want you night and day

A love that most others wish they could see

A love that could only be shared by you and me

beautiful yes


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xLiNdS x 622x
Boom shakalaka

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Location: OH-HI-OH

Sassy those are awesome thumb up


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Sassy
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Location: LOST

annonmously dedicated, i personally think this is one of my best pieces yet eek!

Untitled

She sits alone in the dark and lonely corner,

All she knows is that she can't make it on her own.

What she needs is for someone to hold her,

She feels a shiver running up and down her bones.

Why can't she find somewhere she belongs?

She wants someone to hold her tight.

She needs someone to hold her strong.

I wish i could hold her with all my might,

and show her what is wrong...and what is right.

She won't listen to me,

Everything I tell her I truly mean.

She wants to fly away and be free.

She feels like a regular ordinary teen.

She wants someone to show her light,

As of now, she is trapped in darkness.

No longer, does she wish to fight.

She's made mistakes in the past.

But she carried them with her, wherever she goes,

She's growing up too fast.

She's miserable from her head to her toes,

If only she knew what I've been through.

Maybe she wouldn't feel so alone.

These feeling to her are new,

If only she could see how much she's grown,

and see the places she's flewn.

If only she could see how much I relate.

She feels all alone now,

All she's going to do is wait.

She wants her life to be over in one last bow.

If only she knew tha pain I see in her eyes

was the same pain I felt.

She wants to get it, she tries.

What did I do? I learned and I delt.

I dont want what happened to me to happen to her.

If only she knew how much I care,

My feeling for her are nothing but pure.

I wish she would be open and share

the feeling she locks inside.

If she let go of the pain, you would see,

A person who no longer wanted to hide.

She could be, who she was destined to be.



rolling on floor laughing rolling on floor laughing rolling on floor laughing


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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xLiNdS x 622x
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OMG i think that was the best one you've written!...that was really good..i'm serious


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Sassy
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Location: LOST

quote: (post)
Originally posted by xLiNdS x 622x
OMG i think that was the best one you've written!...that was really good..i'm serious


thanks! happy and i didn't edit it at all

i have written better stuff, but it gets a bit personal and i dont rele feel like posting it on kmc

it was really dark and morbid and stuff, when i was going through hard times
that one i just wrote, just now and came and posted it!!


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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Cherrywild
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Location: Gainesville, FL

wow! your so good at this! happy as you can see form my profile, i cnat write poetry at all... but yours is rly good!

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BornToRule
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Location: Sweden!!!!

very good thumb up thumb up thumb up


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Dante Vlada
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Originally posted by sblomie545
blink ookay??

I didnt mean anything by it. I just thought it fit. sorry.

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Sassy
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Gender: Female
Location: LOST

i know i was just confused as to why you posted it


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So don\'t go away. Say what you say. But say that you\'ll stay forever and a day in the time of my life. I need more time just to make things right.

I dont wanna be there what you\'re coming down.


I dont wanna be there when you hit the ground.

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Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Oiram62205
I didnt mean anything by it. I just thought it fit. sorry.

It was very good. I like your new name by the way yes big grin


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Dante Vlada
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Originally posted by Coldfire
It was very good. I like your new name by the way yes big grin

thnx. I am still me. Nice to meet you Coldfire. Have we met officially b4?

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