CherryPop
I'm Bringing Sexy Back
Gender: Female Location: California Sexually: Frustrated
Great job Mario!
I love your poetry
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Jul 18th, 2005 08:39 PM
Raelin
XoXo
Gender: Female Location:
quote: (post ) Originally posted by SimpleSeduction
Great job Mario!
I love your poetry
i know i do too, tis kool beans...lol.
Jul 18th, 2005 09:38 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
Jul 18th, 2005 09:54 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
For so long I have held on to what wasnt true
Clinging to lies just to feel
Misguided in my search to be whole
Something more than this
A creature without purpose
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen...
For so long I have held on to what wasn't real
Clinging to a false hope
Running blindly in search of the attainable
That something I lost not so long ago
A love that died when you left me here
Looking back on things
Never could I forseen...
For so long I have held on to memories of us
memories you have chosen to forget
Still, there I was searching
Slowly dying with each breath I took
Alone I excepted death as my only truth
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen,
How things would end.
Jul 18th, 2005 09:55 PM
Raelin
XoXo
Gender: Female Location:
yeah depressing. good. but depressing.
Jul 18th, 2005 10:06 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
cool man.
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Jul 18th, 2005 10:13 PM
Vanity
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: Wisconsin
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Oiram62205
For so long I have held on to what wasnt true
Clinging to lies just to feel
Misguided in my search to be whole
Something more than this
A creature without purpose
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen...
For so long I have held on to what wasn't real
Clinging to a false hope
Running blindly in search of the attainable
That something I lost not so long ago
A love that died when you left me here
Looking back on things
Never could I forseen...
For so long I have held on to memories of us
memories you have chosen to forget
Still, there I was searching
Slowly dying with each breath I took
Alone I excepted death as my only truth
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen,
How things would end.
sad... and very depressing... but really good!
Jul 18th, 2005 10:25 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
quote: (post ) Originally posted by RaeRox
yeah depressing. good. but depressing.
I told you it would be
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Commando Queen
sad... and very depressing... but really good!
thnx I was going for something sad
Jul 18th, 2005 11:52 PM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Oiram62205
For so long I have held on to what wasnt true
Clinging to lies just to feel
Misguided in my search to be whole
Something more than this
A creature without purpose
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen...
For so long I have held on to what wasn't real
Clinging to a false hope
Running blindly in search of the attainable
That something I lost not so long ago
A love that died when you left me here
Looking back on things
Never could I forseen...
For so long I have held on to memories of us
memories you have chosen to forget
Still, there I was searching
Slowly dying with each breath I took
Alone I excepted death as my only truth
Looking back on things
Never could I have forseen,
How things would end.
Wow..... just about made me cry there lol. I loved that one
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Jul 19th, 2005 02:27 AM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
I didnt mean to bring anyone to tears
Lying here in the dead of night
lost in a cold dark silence
whispers echo through my mind
promises of what might have been
grasp and pierce my heart
still the tears inside me
they refuse to fall
Jul 19th, 2005 03:03 AM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
Well I didn't quite get there so it's all right Oooo I like that muy much
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Jul 19th, 2005 03:50 AM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
Just like you
Jul 19th, 2005 02:54 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
I have slightly modified the following poem, but hopefully its still good.
again i stand in front of you
so many thoughts racing through my mind
and yet words elude me
I try so hard to speak
but am unable to utter a sound
If my eyes could be read like an open book
Your heart would never doubt my sencerity
The real me is right in front of you
All you have to do is see that the walls have fallen
Though I pretend to be numb from the things around me
I cant deny that you affect me
honestly--It scares me
But the possibilty that you will see whats true
Gives me the hope that words couldnt begin to describe
And though my thoughts are scattered
They all lead to the same place
A place that I dont have the courage to admit
All I can do is pray that someday
you see whats behind the eyes that love you so
Jul 19th, 2005 05:18 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
I'm glad you love it!!
Jul 19th, 2005 05:41 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
DILEMMA
How many times in our lives has the unintentional happened?
How many times have we let ourselves do things we know we shouldn’t?
For most of us, probably more times then we’d care to admit.
Is there a certain situation when it’s okay to do the wrong thing?
For my sake I hope so.
You see I’ve fallen in love with someone, that by the rules of friendship,
I shouldn’t even be talking to.
The typical excuses apply.
“I didn’t plan any of this.”
“It-it just happened.”
But how true is any of that?
I was completely aware of what I was doing.
Is it bad that I don’t regret what I’ve done?
It’s kind of too late to question my actions now isn’t it?
All I can do is see things through and hope that finding the love of my life,
Doesn’t lose me the best friend I’ve ever known.
Jul 19th, 2005 09:13 PM
Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days
Gender: Unspecified Location:
TYPICAL
I know I should have been totally honest from the start
But I don’t think I’ll ever be able to love you with any of my heart
I am sorry if this seems to be coming from out of the blue
It’s just that the things we often promise don’t always turn out to be true
I thought that one day there could be a you and me
But my feelings proved that was a lie, obviously
I am sorry for doing the things I promised I would never do
But I couldn’t help being the typical guy when it came to you
I want to be able to say that I wish you all the best
But then I’d be lying just like all the rest
So instead lets just say our final good-byes
And take a step closer to what is next in our lives
Jul 19th, 2005 09:14 PM
Vanity
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: Wisconsin
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Oiram62205
I have slightly modified the following poem, but hopefully its still good.
again i stand in front of you
so many thoughts racing through my mind
and yet words elude me
I try so hard to speak
but am unable to utter a sound
If my eyes could be read like an open book
Your heart would never doubt my sencerity
The real me is right in front of you
All you have to do is see that the walls have fallen
Though I pretend to be numb from the things around me
I cant deny that you affect me
honestly--It scares me
But the possibilty that you will see whats true
Gives me the hope that words couldnt begin to describe
And though my thoughts are scattered
They all lead to the same place
A place that I dont have the courage to admit
All I can do is pray that someday
you see whats behind the eyes that love you so
awww!
i love all of your poems!!
Jul 19th, 2005 09:27 PM
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