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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

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Originally posted by SimpleSeduction
What Do They Know


I face the world with a smile, no one knows what is hid inside.
They see only happiness, they cant see the tears I've cried.
When I am alone I hurt, because here I do it well.
In front of all the watchful eyes my heaven turns to hell.
The judge and jury awaits me, everyone has a say.
In a life that hangs suspended for yet another day.
Who are they to judge if what I have done is right or wrong?
In the end I gave him up, but inside still sing his song.
I don't know how to find the strength I thought I had.
If only I could play tough it wouldn't be so bad.
They say that life goes on and someday I'll smile again.
But, how do they know my pain without being where I've been?
I've traveled so far from home, and can't find my way back.
Somewhere along the way I must have jumped the track.
I saw him just today and his smile is still the same.
He looked at me so sweetly, but never spoke my name.
I wonder if he remembers me, It hasn't been that long.
He may have forgotten me, but I still sing his song.

sweetie I will give you happy memories to write about

YO PROMISA!!

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CherryPop
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Location: California Sexually: Frustrated

Thanks smile


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Syren
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by SimpleSeduction
What Do They Know


I face the world with a smile, no one knows what is hid inside.
They see only happiness, they cant see the tears I've cried.
When I am alone I hurt, because here I do it well.
In front of all the watchful eyes my heaven turns to hell.
The judge and jury awaits me, everyone has a say.
In a life that hangs suspended for yet another day.
Who are they to judge if what I have done is right or wrong?
In the end I gave him up, but inside still sing his song.
I don't know how to find the strength I thought I had.
If only I could play tough it wouldn't be so bad.
They say that life goes on and someday I'll smile again.
But, how do they know my pain without being where I've been?
I've traveled so far from home, and can't find my way back.
Somewhere along the way I must have jumped the track.
I saw him just today and his smile is still the same.
He looked at me so sweetly, but never spoke my name.
I wonder if he remembers me, It hasn't been that long.
He may have forgotten me, but I still sing his song.


That's gorgeous Ash yes


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Nerdanel
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ilike thesepoems...But i really dontlike the person who wrote them


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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

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Yea I dislike her, but it's her fault. erm

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fantasy2dexire
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They are good...very sad and full of pain....screaming to be understood! I liked them...you should write more from the place you are at in this stage of your life...can see you growing as you read through the stages.....i love writting too! have lots not posted...might think about it...one day...#smileszzzzzzz*

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FrozenSeduction
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those are really good yes


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CherryPop
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Thanks everyone! I haven't really written anything in a looong time. I'll have to get back on it! big grin


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Miharu
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I guess it doesn't really matter since you haven't posted anything on here in over 3 years.

But I just find it a little odd...I saw a poem in Poetry Personified titled "No Longer Pure"

Gorgeous poem.

Then I got on your poetry thread, BEAUTIFUL poetry.

Funny thing though...I'm almost positive I've seen several of these on a poetry message board by several different people...So either you took their work...or they took yours erm

PS...Kind of weird you had my Screenname. I didn't know we could change our usernames

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Wow... amazing...

Very good stuff here big grin


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Nice stuff!


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