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Xia's Song?

Somthing I wrote a year ago, dont know if it counts as poetry though erm

"In the light of the steel sun that passes through the divine wind of my own nameless intervention, I call to thine soul of the moon and the sky to bless the everlasting want of freedom from the damnable despots of our human concepts. Nay, to thee, for I am lost in my own silent contemplation? No, for I am XIA!"

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Originally posted by Neo_Communist
Somthing I wrote a year ago, dont know if it counts as poetry though

"In the light of the steel sun that passes through the divine wind of my own nameless intervention, I call to thine soul of the moon and the sky to bless the everlasting want of freedom from the damnable despots of our human concepts. Nay, to thee, for I am lost in my own silent contemplation? No, for I am XIA!"

no, no it doesn't. more like poetic proses that borders on madness and insanity which is a very good thing.

word of advice...no love poems and you'll do great!

Aug 11th, 2005 04:04 PM