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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

mad... south by southeast

Since someone close to me is revealing themselves here... I figured I should as well... here's some of my work... whatever's handy, I'll find more later...

outing

Paintings
still-life windows
the snow fell
-how life is frozen!
Solids inside canvas,
watching from outside,
seeing this winter landscape
from a reflection on glass,
I realize something
is reflecting in front of
the blowing snow, larger,
and full of life. Me,
remembering all the icy
days of the past.


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

procrastination

one of these days
I will get up off this chair
step out into the daylight
where events, like birth,
marriage and death,
take place besides on paper
or in my head,
things will be different
-I will be different

one of these days
I will take a chance
in white-water rapids, upon a
mountain or in the sky
and see if I could
if I would, should I?
maybe, just maybe
in a day or two
perhaps

I will be different
one of these days


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

How could I?

How can I hold my tounge?
Not say too much of love
to a cold, deaf ear that
has only heard what it wants to hear.

How can I hold my gaze?
Not see too much of this
a horrible sight that no
one should ever witness.

How can I hold my step?
When I want to run and
hold you in my arms, never
letting you slip away into the mist.

How can I hold my nose?
When this may be the last
time I smell you and your sweet
fragrance, that has forever
held me captive to you.

How can I hold my breath?
Not scream and let you know
that this last has upset my being
and forever altered my consciousness.

How could I?


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I love the last one. yes


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and now I die..

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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

Haiku


The morning alit
upon the pansies, until
a dog blocked the sun.


more later....


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kimmeh
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Originally posted by yoda ledbetter
How could I?

How can I hold my tounge?
Not say too much of love
to a cold, deaf ear that
has only heard what it wants to hear.

How can I hold my gaze?
Not see too much of this
a horrible sight that no
one should ever witness.

How can I hold my step?
When I want to run and
hold you in my arms, never
letting you slip away into the mist.

How can I hold my nose?
When this may be the last
time I smell you and your sweet
fragrance, that has forever
held me captive to you.

How can I hold my breath?
Not scream and let you know
that this last has upset my being
and forever altered my consciousness.

How could I?


Greatness!!


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

ebb

A fat,noisy
street, outside my apartment
door, I consider-

The day crescendo,
noon, promising no dwindle,
only the sweet moment,

Now. The night happens
by and decrescendoes the
day, as life in times.

Hustle and bustle
replaced by the Cricket
Symphony and frog's burp.


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

the play

My powerful play is over.
The curtain's been dropped before me,
with no one else on this dusty stage.
My verse was gibberish, spoken only to
myself, incomprehensible mutterings of a
second's thought. These lines wound and
wound to ultimate triviality where there
is only black silence.
My role was meaningless,
capturing no one's attention.
A performance where I stand
naked to my self, with only
a blank expression.
The stage lights dimmed, and
curtain calls taken, I am on
a final bed, covered in
blackness. I lay solemn and
forget my achievements. The
only thing I know is that now
loneliness leads to emptiness.


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Gender: Female
Location: sweat & groove

quote: (post)
Originally posted by yoda ledbetter
the play

My powerful play is over.
The curtain's been dropped before me,
with no one else on this dusty stage.
My verse was gibberish, spoken only to
myself, incomprehensible mutterings of a
second's thought. These lines wound and
wound to ultimate triviality where there
is only black silence.
My role was meaningless,
capturing no one's attention.
A performance where I stand
naked to my self, with only
a blank expression.
The stage lights dimmed, and
curtain calls taken, I am on
a final bed, covered in
blackness. I lay solemn and
forget my achievements. The
only thing I know is that now
loneliness leads to emptiness.




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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Wow... great use of emotions happy I think my fav so far is How Could I? smile


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

beside myself

Never thought I would
be here... inside myself,
beside myself...
questioning every decision
every thought that lead to
what I've become, begun...

All events colliding at once...
a Big Boom of the Soul...
explosions one after another...
no quiet time to reflect...
only more backfires, treacheries
and betrayals...

Why was I blind to what
stared me in the face?
My focus only on one
reality, but
the murk in my eyes
clouding the future...

"Miss you," he told
her, but
I was broken, when she
said back, "Love ya."


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

Here is a song I wrote a long time ago... it has an opening incantation I included from Jim Morrison....

"At night the moon became
a woman's face.
I met the Spirit of Music."
-Jim Morrison from Wilderness

dances with the moon

Come my love, 'tis a glorious evening!
The moon is full, there's a million gleamings.
Let's get ourselves to an open field and lie,
kiss and wander through the bright-black sky.

Come spirits fill our breath with rose reeds.
Leave us here to soak in splendor of moon beams.
In Night's tender arms let us be wrapped,
me and my love, because my love
materials me affection in earthly stuff.

step in...slide into some light shoes
hold on...rest your hand on my balloon
launching...lifting off for better views
soon we...we'll be dancing on the moon

my love...my one true love,
she sings o'er the dunes
velvet...a velvet blanket
she dances with the moon
dances with the moon

Oh! my love, I'll never love one
more than she, the Night.
She holds me forever
in her celestial-glow eyes,
but she hides so far away,
this untouchable She,
so don't worry, for I'll love you,
as long as moon beams soak me.

you sing...into the soft winds
hold on...keep in mind always this tune
launching...lifting off for never-ends
then we...we'll be dancing on the moon

my love...my one true love,
she sings o'er the dunes
velvet...a velvet blanket
she dances with the moon
dances with the moon

my love...my one true love,
she sings on sad tunes
she know's...know I'll never
fill her moon's shoes
when she...awakes her Spirit
she dances with the moon
dances with the moon


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yoda ledbetter
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Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

Another song....

why we continue

we walk alone in a world of gloom
thinking nothing must get in our way
times have been hard for us to handle
but of us dreams have been made

keep thinking thoughts of greatness, yeah
deep in our minds we've set the track
is there a way to change destiny
by looking forward instead of back

why we continue
in a world that's not our own
why we continue
in thought of coming home
maybe we'll reach it
maybe we won't
but if we start slowing down
our minds will say "Don't!"

hearts of fire keep smoldering
in a body of self and mind
when our past confronts our future
then it shall be our time

rising above our darkened souls
we seek shelter in ourselves
thinking thoughts that go way beyond
not conscious knowledge but in wealth

it's not always the richness of texture
lifestyle matters most
but if we end with a beginning
then our souls are sure to ghost

why we continue
in a world that's not our own
why we continue
in thought of coming home
maybe we'll reach it
maybe we won't
but if we start slowing down
our minds will say "Don't!"


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

Here's a poem, sad one really, about eclipsing the age of my favorite poet and the loss of my 3-month old son...both died too young... sad

Keats

The beauty of truth
lies in that old Urn,
Keats brought to life.

Oh! John, where have you gone,
you left us only with you're
beautiful words that will
be with us always.

Your departure was too early,
you left us with a promise of
so much beauty to come, although
what we have is enough,
we are still wanting more.

Now in the here, I am
at the age of your death.
What have I done? Have I
brought truth into the world?
Have I brought beauty?

Yes, yes I have, for I have
been a father, an accomplishment
that you, John, during all your excellent
readings and writings never
achieved. I helped bring beauty
into this world in the form of my
child, and I witnessed the sad
truth of his early departure.

I have tried all my life
to be a Poet, the likes of
you, John, a great wordsmith
for all the ages. I am not
sure my ragged verse comes
close to yours, but I
know one part of my life was
great, beautiful and true.


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

random verses....

illusions

seep, tears cloud passion
joy-making fondness
liquid dreams
fattening bits of sweetness
love's an illusion
when you're in love
the further away, the better

sing, notes drip slowly
feet-pounding daisies
oceanic views
descending supplies of dandies
sight's an illusion
when you see clearly
the closer you are, the less you see


works

"What is your soul?"
you ask.
"It's David's Michelangelo!"
I reply.

The statue of the maker,
holds the maker to the statue.
Your works inside,
inside works you.

Bathe my hair in blood,
drain my helpless memory,
steer my driving thoughts
away from what has left me.

Off with lights! Off with fans!
We'll need no more of these hands.

Prop up my memory,
concentrate my powers,
hold me up to
my finest hour.


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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by yoda ledbetter
Here's a poem, sad one really, about eclipsing the age of my favorite poet and the loss of my 3-month old son...both died too young... sad

Keats

The beauty of truth
lies in that old Urn,
Keats brought to life.

Oh! John, where have you gone,
you left us only with you're
beautiful words that will
be with us always.

Your departure was too early,
you left us with a promise of
so much beauty to come, although
what we have is enough,
we are still wanting more.

Now in the here, I am
at the age of your death.
What have I done? Have I
brought truth into the world?
Have I brought beauty?

Yes, yes I have, for I have
been a father, an accomplishment
that you, John, during all your excellent
readings and writings never
achieved. I helped bring beauty
into this world in the form of my
child, and I witnessed the sad
truth of his early departure.

I have tried all my life
to be a Poet, the likes of
you, John, a great wordsmith
for all the ages. I am not
sure my ragged verse comes
close to yours, but I
know one part of my life was
great, beautiful and true.

Omg I'm so sorry to hear about your son sad

Great stuff hun smile


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Very very nice work. have you put the songs to music, or are they someone else's?


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yoda ledbetter
in my rearviewmirror

Gender: Male
Location: up here in my tree on Dagobah

embarrasment Thank you guys for the compliments!! I'm touched. embarrasment


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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Very very nice work. have you put the songs to music, or are they someone else's?



Actually for the songs I posted, I do have music for them....which is shocking because of the 30-40 song lyrics I've written I only have music for a handful of them.... roll eyes (sarcastic)

Guess I better get to work... eek!


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
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dang skippy! haha put on the tunes, mon! I'd love to hear the songs.


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Coldfire
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Originally posted by yoda ledbetter
embarrasment Thank you guys for the compliments!! I'm touched. embarrasment





Actually for the songs I posted, I do have music for them....which is shocking because of the 30-40 song lyrics I've written I only have music for a handful of them.... roll eyes (sarcastic)

Guess I better get to work... eek!

You'd better do that eek!

I'd love to hear the songs as well big grin


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