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My Last Nightmare
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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

My Last Nightmare

I closed my eyes to the pain of the day
Hoping it would all just fade away
But that is impossible even in dreams
Even when sleeping I still hear screams

Trying to escape this torment I feel
I go to a place where dreams are real
There is no escape except to come here
Where tears flow and there is only fear

I dream of a place where pain is fake
Smiles are real and it's easy to take
A place where you can breathe with ease
Do whatever you wish just how you please

Wishing I could stay here and never go back
I realize my reality is only cold and black
But the only way to stay here is to die
It would be easier for the tears that I cry

My heart is so empty and my blood aches
Scars are tearing from what it takes
My painful dreams will never tell
Where I have gone cause I'm now well

But the morning will never come for me
Cause this is the way that it had to be
And this is all that I could do to get away
Because this had become my only way

They'll know in the morning when I won't wake
My pain was just too much for me to take
With my wrists flowing the blood of my pain
This was my last nightmare dripped from each vein


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shoe-freak
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cool, wish i could do something like that.


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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Why don't you try?


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Wow that was good.... loving the emotion in it


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kimmeh
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omg that was awesome .. seriously F*CKIN GREAT


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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Thank you.


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Morose suffering in the clenches of reality. The poems ok, just try to find a less cliche theme for your next poem.


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Don't be offended now, I'm merely trying to help your creative juices flow, it's obvious you can compose a well written poem, now spur on into lands of prose unconquered by your comtemporaries.


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Originally posted by Disturbing13
I closed my eyes to the pain of the day
Hoping it would all just fade away
But that is impossible even in dreams
Even when sleeping I still hear screams

Trying to escape this torment I feel
I go to a place where dreams are real
There is no escape except to come here
Where tears flow and there is only fear

I dream of a place where pain is fake
Smiles are real and it's easy to take
A place where you can breathe with ease
Do whatever you wish just how you please

Wishing I could stay here and never go back
I realize my reality is only cold and black
But the only way to stay here is to die
It would be easier for the tears that I cry

My heart is so empty and my blood aches
Scars are tearing from what it takes
My painful dreams will never tell
Where I have gone cause I'm now well

But the morning will never come for me
Cause this is the way that it had to be
And this is all that I could do to get away
Because this had become my only way

They'll know in the morning when I won't wake
My pain was just too much for me to take
With my wrists flowing the blood of my pain
This was my last nightmare dripped from each vein

again... I love it stick out tongue

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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Thanks!


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