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My Emotions' Cry Symbolic Standards of the Spiritual Realm

My emotions need straight answers that need no deciphering
that can be interpreted in only one way in earth's second
God and the spiritual realm, let me get to the point of the words my emotions speak
i'm getting sick of you speaking to me all the time symbolically
won't you use plain english for a change

Always having to decipher your code is getting tiring
i'm not a newbie to your lingo (standard)
but dang my mind's had enough
i'm dropping out of Spiritual Realm's Standards class for now
how you like that?!
won't you just give me a simple yes or no
i ask my questions simply
though taking at least 20 minutes putting one together
so that you answer the right question
like i-robot one must know the right question to ask
or they'll get the wrong answer but the right one
to the question that's still right
but just wrong
dont confuse it
if you want to know the answer to "Is [name] right for me, right now?"
(which still needs some tweaking)
then don't ask the question: "Is he/she/name right for me?"
as close as it may look, its two entirely different questions

speak to me in plain english
so i won't interpret your symbolic code incorrectly
having me acting on incorrect information
can't blame you like i want to because to you it's simple
while i'm messing up its interpretation.
at least sometimes --
yes i want to get a quick response
not one that has to be analyzed like those darn story math problems.
Give me simplicity on my level
sure I want to go higher
but when it comes to questions that have me emotionally attached
man i need something easy to comprehend
like to me 1+2=3
but to you maybe it's cat+dog = catdog
leaving 1+2 totaling 12

my mind is overloaded and it's throbbing my head; giving me headaches
i write down what you all say to me
"don't read it from the left," you say
"start from the right then halfway through start from the left, interchange the first and second numbers"
you continue telling me
"MAN just give it to me straight!"
have me feeling like I'm doing surgery.
dissecting a sentence with predicates, subjects all out of out order
subjects and verbs not as they are to mean
according to english standards
webster definitely wouldn't help in defining things

i know you follow a different code
where 'show me your black' means naked
and 'be back in goat minute' means to be back quickly
that's just to name a bit of your most simplest phrases
don't twist the vine those reading
this lingo is nowhere near slang
you ought to see the most complex phrases and "sentences"
where pauses are punctuation marks
you think color means red, white, black, blue etc.
naw it's something completely different
webster dictionary would definitely need to be completely done over

back to you (spiritual realm),
you speak like poetry just on much higher levels
one not heard of; way above shakespeare
the bible is so basic compared to how you speak to me
Yahusha's parables - what a breeze
i'm graduating levels you throw at me
but geez God and you spirits
when i want a now answer, just give it to me straight
i know you can speak to me using earthly standards
yea i'm learning a new set of standards but can't you see my emotions are tired
because when i have questions, i want a quick answer
to those questions i'm emotionally attached to
while others it's fun learning
it's nice to know the standards of speaking of another world
because surely it's not how us earthly people speak
you combine standards of all languages and top it off with your own flavors and "twists"

when you aren't controlled by earthly standards, you can do as you please
not really caring what people think nor my complaining emotions.
but i thought i'd express it anyway
and let others know how you (God & the SR) speak to me.
the funny thing,
they may experience something totally different.

-end

I know my poetry is long. But it's how I choose to represent my journey.

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Wow, marvolous! I really love the words you used, I was interested in you're poem by the title first. Then I read you're poem, it's awesome. Keep up the good work..


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Originally posted by Disturbing13
Wow, marvolous! I really love the words you used, I was interested in you're poem by the title first. Then I read you're poem, it's awesome. Keep up the good work..


Well, thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. big grin

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Your very welcome.


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