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Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings. stick out tongue

I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black

That's all I have for that one erm

Feb 20th, 2006 08:30 PM

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings.

I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black

That's all I have for that one

Ooo me likes so far! And I know that feeling all too well, unfortunately.

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Feb 21st, 2006 04:05 AM

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Ax3l
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Gender: Male
Location: Imagination Pavilion

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings.

I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black

That's all I have for that one

Exellent and dark. I love poetry

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Mar 8th, 2006 03:20 AM

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

I love poetry too

Speaking of which, got any more Lea? stick out tongue

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Mar 16th, 2006 07:21 AM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
Exellent and dark. I love poetry

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
I love poetry too

Speaking of which, got any more Lea?

I've got a few more unfinished ones but I seem to have misplaced my notebook. erm

Mar 16th, 2006 09:20 PM

Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck

I've got a few more unfinished ones but I seem to have misplaced my notebook.

Oh I did that... made me soooo mad... hope you find it soon!

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Mar 17th, 2006 06:30 AM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

Found it

It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...

I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care

I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine

Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

Mar 29th, 2006 02:12 AM

Null
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Location:

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
Found it

It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...

I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care

I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine

Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

That was so sad

. it was really good but so depressing

*Hugs lea*

Mar 29th, 2006 02:24 AM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

Mar 29th, 2006 02:25 AM

Null
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Location:

Apr 14th, 2006 05:32 PM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

I'm working on it. stick out tongue

Apr 14th, 2006 06:03 PM

Null
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Gender: Unspecified
Location:

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I'm working on it.

Lol do Poem Fridays mad

About dreams mad

Damn you lea eek!

Apr 14th, 2006 06:06 PM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel. stick out tongue

Apr 14th, 2006 06:08 PM

Null
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel.

Apr 14th, 2006 06:11 PM

Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
Found it

It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...

I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care

I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine

Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

Nice one!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel.

lol I used to be like that too, but now it gives me a challenge to work under pressure and to be given a couple limitations stick out tongue

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Apr 14th, 2006 06:12 PM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ritoshi

Maybe

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Nice one!

lol I used to be like that too, but now it gives me a challenge to work under pressure and to be given a couple limitations

Thanks

I don't do well under pressure. stick out tongue

Apr 14th, 2006 06:17 PM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

I'm thinking about doing drawings to some of my poetry

Apr 14th, 2006 06:22 PM

Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I'm thinking about doing drawings to some of my poetry

hey, that's a good idea big grin

I tried doing that, except drawings with a story I was working on... but the drawings sucked stick out tongue

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Apr 14th, 2006 06:48 PM

Ladyluck
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Gender: Female
Location: Canada

Aww.

I just wouldn't know what poem to do. stick out tongue

Apr 14th, 2006 06:56 PM

miss-allycat
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Gender: Female
Location: Stay Alive

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
I hate you when you're sober
I hate you when you drink
I hate you more than anyone
Way more than you think

The pain you've caused is going to stop
I can't take anymore
I'm leaving and never coming back
I'm walking through the door

These eyes won't shed another tear
These wrists won't bleed another drop
I'm through with you and your drunken ways
All this nonsense has to stop

My bags are packed it's time to go
I never will return
I'm leaving you forever and ever
From this I hope you learn.