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Harry Potter and the Rise of the Phoenix
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cole2005
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sorry its not more,im just tired,and bloody england are losing aginast northern ireland!

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write more it will keep your mind off of England's crap performance

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'Its Malfoy,he killed...he killed my parents.' Hermiones head sank even further into Harrys chest,'Stay here Miss Granger do not go anywhere,you will receive further instruction by owl,' with that she disapparated,for what seemd like an eternity Harry and Hemrione sat on his floor,Harry turned to Hermione, looking at here he felt extremely happy that she had come to him yet this happiness turned into guilt as it hit him that none of this would have happened had she not been friends with him. He looked down at her,she had fallen asleep against him,there was nothing he could do now till morning,slowly Harry drifted into sleep.
As his eyes closed shapes began to form in front of him,an indistinct sound began to come into hearing
,'....Draco this is the second time you have failed to do what I asked of you and as for you Bellatrix you got outsmarted by a school girl.I will deal with you later,but as for you Draco,this is the last time I will accept your failure,you are to serve with Snape on what I have sent him to do as punishment. Bellatrix oyu are wondering why Im not killing him

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sorry have to stop now am being kicked off computer

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good story keep going

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well,Bellatrix my support is not as large as i orginally thought,the ministry have amassed a huge number of supporters,Draco here is one of my followers,I need his help in ridding the world of purebloods. Draco leave me you wiull go in the morning!' Slowly the shapes began to fade from Harrys mind and the horrible buring sensation had returned in his head kicked in. He awoke all of a sudden and sweat was pouring from his face,although the pain had been no worse than before,but he felt somewhat different,he felt physically weakened by what had happened. He sat for some time pondering what he had just seen,Voldemort was angry,extremely angry at Draco and Snape. He looked at Hermione and felt a huge surge of pride,she had managed to escape Bellatrix and for this Voldemort was angry at Bellatrix. Harry leant back against the edge of his bed and began to close his eyes,he was brought back to the world by a distant tapping noise. He looked over to the source of the noise ad saw a huge brown tawny owl perched on his window sill. He carefully guided Hermione off of his chest and moved to open the window. The owl hoppd in and Harry took the letter from its leg:
Dear Mr.H.Potter and Miss.H.Granger,
Firstly Miss Granger you have my deepest sympathys for your loss. No person deserved what happeed to your parents. I promise you that the culprits will be brought to justice.
Secondly Harry, I know of your intentions to leave Hogwarts and continue your work for Dumbledore,however being the keeper of his will this is not what he wanted,you are to remain at Hogwarts for at least half of your final year,from there the Order can assist you in your task. All details of his will, will be given to you upon return to Hogwarts. Also in his will he asked that I give you his most prized possesion,which he keeps in his vault,you will also receive all contents of this vault. Access to his vault will be granted when we meet. Members of the Order will arrive the day prior to your birthday to escort you to the Burrow for the wedding. From there you will be moved to Hogwarts for the remainder of your holidays. Hermione will accompany you to the BUrrow and also back to Hogwarts.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Professor.M.McGonagel Headmistress of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Harry reread the letter twice. He had not wanted to return to Hogwarts, yet reading this letter, it seemd he had to go. There must have been something Dumbledore wanted him to do at Hogwarts, and his most prized possesion, what could it be?

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Harry sat by his window,for how long he sat there he did not know but by the time he moved the sun had risen over the houses opposite ad the misty carpet had reappeared across the ground. He turned towards his alarm clock and saw the digital time flick onto 7:00,the same time every morning the Dursleys would stir. First Uncle Vernon would awake and go and get the paper,then Petunia would wake up and get breakfast ready, Dudley wouldnt wake till about 10! A usual the same routine occured except this morning, Vernon had awoke but instead of getting the paper and returning upstairs to get dressed, Harry saw him stride across the drive get into his car and drive off without a backward glance. For any normal teenager this may have disturbed them but Harry didnt really care, true the Dursleys had been far nicer this year, but Harry still didnt have the feelings for them he held for the likes of Sirius or Dumbledore. Harry simply returned to his thinking not giving a second thought as to what he just saw. Petunia did not stir until about 8 that morning, Harry feeling hungry wandered down about 9, careful to not wake the sleeping Hermione as he passed. He walked into thekitchen to find Petunia sitting at the table in tears, 'Err aunt,erm... are you ok?' Harry asked feeling rather uneasy,'Oh Harry,Im ok,its nothing,just tired,dont worry bout it,' Petunia said between sniffles. 'Erm.. would it have anything to do with Vernon leaving this morning?I saw him driving off,' Harry said feeling rather guilty,he knew that recently they had been fighting because of him, had he driven a family that was full of love apart. Harry found himself shocked at the mere thought of this,'Well actually it was harry,Im not even going to pretenmd that you havent heard us arguing because I know you have, and as by now you have probably guessed it was about you. He didnt want to keep you here, but I insisted you had to stay,he didt understand why,but you had to. Harry theres something you need to know, you need to know why I've been so hard on you,Im so sorry Harry,

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theyl be more on tomorow!

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I never meant for you to hate me,I wish I had been more of a family to you,ut its hard you know. I cant stand to look at you, you.. you remind me too much of Lily. We were close Harry,me and your mother, virtually inseperable as we grew up. Your mother and I Harry we were twins, so alike in everything, whatever she did I did and the same for her. Then she got that letter, she went away to Hogwarts and it broke my heart. I was bitter,I didnt understand why shed gone! Of course mum and dad loved it,all there attention went onto her and I was pushed aside. Over the years she was gone I found myself hating her more and more. But as much as I despised what she had become I still loved her.' Petunias eyes were glistening with tears, Harry was fixed on every word that she gave him, he felt something for his aunt,something he thought hed never feel for her,it was love, he saw his mother appearing in her. 'Then one day in the summer, she was 16 she invited that boy home, I think his name was Severus, I got on with him very well, he seemed to like the same things as me. Any way we continued to swap letters, and I thought hed come back next summer, but he didnt return instead your father came round. We didnt get along, he was extremely arrogant but I could see he made my sister happy so I pretended to be happy for them. Harry do you wonder how I knew about You-Know-Who and Dementors and the killing curse?' Petunia stared at him, her eyes were full of guilt, 'What did you do?' the words emerged form Harrys mouth before he had time to think.

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'Harry i am so sorry, I think I grew jealous of your mother,slowly we drifted apart. My life was in turmoil, I had no one,then one day Lily came home and told me she was going to disappear for several weeks and that if I wanted to contact her I should speak to a man called Peter,anyway I totlly forgot about it until Severus visited me, he kept insisting I tell him where Lily was, eventually I cracked I told him to speak to Peter Pettigrew the next thing I heard was Peter had died and your parents were... were dead. I sold your parents out Harry,thats why I took you in, I felt obliged to look after you, and I did at first like you were my own. Then as you grew up I saw so uch of your father in you and your mother,you just reminded me of her. All the resentment I had towards her reappeared, I hated you Harry.' Petunia sank lower in her seat, Harry felt something he didnt expect boil inside of him,not anger,but pity. He looked down on his aunt, she sat there tears falling to the table. He moved the seat back and wlaked ou of the room, his head was spinning,he trudged back up to his room,and lay on his bed. Slowly he drifted into sleep.

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Chapter 4

The darkness began to lift on the streets of London, and slowly it was replaced by the silvery blanket covering the floor. A greasy haired crook nosed man rose form the confines of a shop doorway, and stepped out into the quiet street, he looked around,nobody to be seen. He sat aginast the wall of the shop and began brushing the dust off his,torn and battered clothes. He looked very odd, but then most homeless people did, he was wearing what appeared to be ablack robe.

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keep going your good

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