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Harry Potter and the Rise of the Phoenix
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jlee17xoxo412
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very short, nice though


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So guys are the most confusing thing ever on earth


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Slowly each Weasley trudged off to bed, the kitchen was empty before long leaving only Ron sitting at the dinner table. He sat still staring at the place where Harry had been sitting, thoughts of hatred for the boy who once was his best friend swirllig around in his head. All his life he had been in the shadow of his brothers,then he went to Hogwarts, thinking he was free,but instead he fell into the shadow of Harry Potter! He felt his blood begin to boil, he thought of all the times him and Harry had done stuff and it had been Harry who had got the praise. Then finally he beat Harry to something,the one love of his life, and he even had to steal that. Then a thought entered Rons head, if Harry was dead he would have Hermione, this thought flew around his head for ages, before his head hit the table. Drifting into the world of sleep,all his thoughts suddenly made more sense, he knew would he must do!

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i hope u ppl know that harry WILL die in the 7th book. yes


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HPRox90
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Nooooo, Ron!!! Don't do it! LOL!


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its a sad story but good keep going

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cole2005
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im sorry ihavent been posting more reguarly,but im really busy in evenings now,but i will try and post a big block,this week

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sorry bout taking so long and for the last post being crap!

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The sun began to rise over the hills surrounding the Burrow, the light of the sun rays bouncing of the dew sodden grass, making the fields sparkle like diamonds. The morning was picturesque of the countryside, a house with the backdrop of glistening fields and hills, however one thing stood oout, the noise of business filled the air surrounding the Burrow. Men and woman in the strangest attire were bubbling in and out of the backdoor, although nothing could be seen as far, the business of the people meant that something amazing would soon appear. 'BILLLLL!' the shriek of a womans voice filled the air,drowning out all other noise. A plump red headed woman rushe dout of the door, 'Bill get in here now, you shouldn't be out there this is your day, don't help!', she forcably grabbed a tall man wiv long red head and dragged him indoors, suprisingly easily. Outside all sorts of chaotic scenes were ensuing, men were running around making sure chairs and decorations were in place,women were putting the final touches on the flowers.

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This is really great!!! Please post soon!


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The sun rose further into the sky as midday approached the air of nervousness became evident over the Weasley household. Bill was standing inhis kitchen staring out at the pure white marble alter which stood at the foot of the garden, the day could not be better,he thought to himself as the small tailor finally managed to secure the final strapping of his wedding robes. Harry wlkaed into the room ad the robes on Bill were like nothing hed ever seen before,dressed in robes as white as the fur of a unicorn, he had gold straps runing across his chest and down to his feet. The glare they gave off lit up the Weasley kitchen. The wedding was set for 1 o clock and as midday came and passed, the weasleys became more aggitated. Slowly each of them changed into their dress robes and began to welcome guests as they turned up. Harry stood by thewindow of the basement, as several people he knew turned up,more or less the whole Order had appeared, Mad-Eye and Kingsely arrived together. Mad-Eye giving Harry an astute thumbs up. Then as 1 o clock approached Hermione burst into the basement,dressed into the most gorgeous bue robes, Her hair was put up and she looked amazing,'Harry we have to go come on we need to get seated,' she grabbed Harry by the hand and rushed him up into the garden. They took there seats in the middle, next to Tonks and Lupin who looked very much in love. Slowly Bill began to move towards the front of the gathering,accompanied by George and Fred, who looked rather smart for once. Then a loud fanfare roared out into the countryside, several goblins dressed in gold, stood alongside the white carpet leading to the alter. A calm music began to play over the land, as several carriages flown by the most amazing horses began to descend over the land. The first few landed in the orchard and relativs and friend sof Fleur began to rush down into their seats. Mrs Weasley stood and greeted the more senior members of the family which included Fleurs granmother,who Harry remebered was Veela, and as soon as she wlaked past Ron his mouth dropped at the sight of her! Then the music began to get louder and the light of the sun began to shine brighter, over the hills a white carriage came into view, flown by two enormous white horses. It landed at the start of the white carpet. Out of the door, emerged Fleurs sister who at sight of Harry began to blush incredibly, then out stepped presumably Fleurs parents, each dressed in robes of a dark emerald colour, matching that of Mr and Mrs Weasley. Then the first movement form the carriage as Fleur long blonde hair whipped out into the sunshine, her long white gown, billowed in the light breeze. The diamond tiara placed upon her head shone like a thousand suns in the daylight. She stepped down onto the white carpet and slowly made her way down between the chairs,gasps of disbelief at her beauty could be heard.

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write more, you are really good.

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This is amazingly great!!! Post soon!


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The music began to lower as Fleur approached the alter,slowly Bill turned his head to face her,his jaw began to drop as his eyes met hers. A smile flicked across Fleurs nervous looking face as she slid up beside Bill. The elderly man dressed in blue robes, began to speak. Harry wasnt paying much attention to what was being said, he kept looking around at the mass of people that had come to see. He was simply amazed. The wedding drew on for alomst an hour before finally the cheers of celebration brought Harry back to reality, multi coloured sparks began to rise around the couple standing at the alter, as they embraced. Some of George and Freds fireworks were erupting in the background, as music began to blast out across the grounds of the Weasley house. The most amazing array of food appeared on tables across from where the guests were sat. Harry could sense the happiness in the people that were there, these people were the hope of the war. As long as there was happiness and love,Harry felt no matter what happened they wouldn't lose,slowly he begn to make his way back to the house, thoughts of his parents hanin in his mind.

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Post soon!!! It's really good!


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cole2005
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I have a really amazing idea for the final battle between Harry and Voldemort abd really wana write it,which means im gona try post much much more in the coming week

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well get on with it and stop keeping us waiting

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Harry was aowken on his last day at the Burrow by loud movements from above. It was still very early the sun had yet to rise over the Weasleys house. As Harry began to come into focus the loud movements turned into loud voices, he could clearly hear that the voices were that of Mr and Mrs Weasley and he knew it was about him. Slowly he crept out of bed and moved towards the staircase that led up to the main part of the house, the door was slightly open so Harry perched himself on the top stepand sat listening to the argument. "I don't see why he can't stay here!" the forceful voice of Mrs Weasley floated down to Harry, "I've told you more than once Molly he has to go back to Hogwarts there are things there he has to find out, Dumbledore was clear in his plan!" Mr Weasley for once seemed to be taking control of the situation. " I know Dumbledore was clear,but the thing is he can't say whats happening any more, if Harry goes back to Hogwarts,it'll be him and Hermione in there for 3 weeks!What will they do?" Mrs Weasley seemed to get more emotional saying this, "Molly isten to me,when Harry wakes up he will go to Hogwarts and buy his stuff then he will go to Hogwarts where Dumbledore has left instruction for him and him only, what this is about none of us will know except maybe Hermione or Remus. There is nothing else we can do to protect him until the time comes," with them words Mr Weasley turned his back on his wife, signalling this was the end of the issue. It was these words that reminded Harry of what was to happen tomorrow, in the letter he had received from McGonagel, he would go to Diagon Alley tomorrow and retrieve Dumbledores most prized possesion from his vault. Harrys mind began to wander, how long he sat there he didnt know,but by the time he came back to the world the sun was blazing into the basement.

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Harry stepped out of the fire grill in Diagon Alley, knowing this could be the last time that he saw the Weasley family. They made their way down towards Gringotts,Harrys heart beating harder and harder the closer they got, he was literally minutes awy from receiving something very valuable, they ascended the marbe steps of Gringotts and walked into the large reception area. Harry pulled his letter he had received from McGonagel out of his pocket and headed over to the nearest free desk. "Erm.. excuse me.. erm I'm here to transfer all of Albus Dumbledores things into my vault, I have a letter." Harry added rather nervously looking at the way the goblin was looking at him, "Let me see that" the goblin grunted out, "Ahh yes, Mr Harry Potter yes, come with me you are to retrieve the one item from his vault the rest will be moved into your vault within the next week," the goblin hopped down from his stall, "Thank you," Harry said as he followed the goblin down the hall, "You are permitted to bring two people with you," the goblin told Harry as he jumped into the cart, Harry turned to the crowd of people behind him,normally he would have chosen Ron and Hermione,but Ron was being strange and Hermione had gone off with Mrs Weasley to do some shopping. "Erm... Tonks and Mr Weasley could you come with me please?" Harry asked them, they didnt answer they simply jumped into the cart and sat behind Harry, the cart raced off on the maze of tracks,heading deeper and deeper into the Earth. Harry had only been this far once before, when he was in his first year, they had gone in this far to retrieve the Philosophers Stone. Then without warning the cart stopped almost sending Harry toppling over the edge, "Mr Potter we are here, as you may or may not be aware vaults at this depth do not operate on keys, more advanced security is in force here," with that the goblin stepped forward and stroked the door, the door that had seconds before looked incredibly stable, began to disintegrate in front of Harrys eyes. The room before Harry was very large, however it was very uninviting, the room was decked out in a cold grey stone, there were various strange objects as well as piles and piles of gold, however the thing that caught Harrys eye and seemd to attract the attention of Tonks and Mr Weasley was the pedestal in the middle of the room,much unlike the rets of the stone attire of the room this was made of pure gold, and designed in the shape of a phoenix. Sitting on top lay a handsome leather book, it wasn't very thick but there was something that seemed to tell Harry this book contained a unbelievable amount of power, "Mr Potter the item of which you are required to take is that which sits upon the pedestal. If oyu would kindly take it then we can make our way back to the surface," Harry snapped back to reality ad moved forward towards the pedestal,it was at that moment that a blaze of red sparks flew past his face, "Idiot boy,how could you miss him!" Harry recognised the voice instantly, his memory flashed back to the tower, "Snape," Harry said his voice full of anger. Harry went to turn but was too slow his wand flew out of his hand landing against some glass balls at the back of the vault. "Give us the book Harry, I will not kill you," Snape said in a voice of menace, Draco was also standing with Snape,but was only a shadow of his former self. "You killed Dumbledore, I will kill you!" Harry replied to Snapes request, Harry could feel his anger rising, "Potter, you don't know anything which happened that night. Powerful, very powerful magic took place that night. Such power has never been seen, especially when used in the name of good. He Who Must Not Be Named, knew what happened the instant it occured. Now give me the book and I will be on my way!" Snape asked Harry very calmly, Hrry could feel himself calming down, "How did you get down her? Wheres Tonks and Mr Weasley?" Harrys eyes began to scan the surrounding area for any sign of a body, he could find none. "Ah yes Harry, surely oyu can tell whats gone on here, seeig as you used the potion in your second year! Polyjuice Harry, amazing isnt it. See we knew you and Ron had fallen out and we managed to convince Mrs Weasley to take Hermione away. Doing this we knew that you would chose the only two people here who didn't hate you!" Harry stood there amazed at just how much they knew of what had happened. "Now Harry the book please,I don't want to hurt you but will if totally necessary!" Snape began to close in on Harry, Draco remained at the entrance to the vault. Harry began to back away until he had backed into a chest that was resting against the wall. Harry was preparing himself for the worst when suddenly the light disappeared the room was shrouded in complete darkness. Then rays of red light shot around the room, seconds later the light had reappeared. Standing in the doorway were, Moody, Shacklebot and Lupin and lying at their feet was Draco Malfoy, Snape it appeared had disappeared from the room. "Harry,are you ok?" Lupin raced across the room, "Yeah,yeah I'm fine, you need to find Mr Weasley and Tonks they were attacked by Snape. They could be hurt." Harrys mind was racing, what had Snape just said, powerful magic had occured. "Harry, Harry its ok, we found them, it took us some time to get down her. We need to go grab the book Harry you will need it,now lets go." The last remark was mmore of an order, Harry grabbed the book, which gave him the same feeling as Fawkes did when ever he sung. Harry felt his heart lift, they climbed aboard the cart and were quickly transported back to the surface.

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is anyone actually reading this?could you tell me if you are coz i dont wana write this if no1 is reading

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im reading it

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