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Shakyamunison
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Originally posted by debbiejo
Mine fate was not so clear...my love was near, with you....
you clung to my breast...
My deepness gold....
A god and goddess eternity.

OH...how you loved to unravel me....thrown down at your feet.
Surprised were you not when you slay me...

Bewitched were you not by me?......my jeweled navel, my haunting deep eyes, my charm, my lips of sweet honey and wine....

You I had, you I enticed....you I gathered into my web.
But, OH..you....oh you....my warrior charm....entered my web and destroyed it......you like a spider my King...

Wrapped me round....Your feet I kiss, my breast you hold.....
Endless tales of stories you told.....you kept me tucked within your heart.

Let them not know.....let them not see....Our future will hold an asp for me ....

Mine own heart doth sing to you, my glory....a treasure...none have won over it...not many....Let it not....let it not end with sorrow.....

careful, oh my love.....Abundant flowing with gods pleasure ..you my divine.
OH come to me again after siege....I wait I wait I wait....

I wait, I wait, I wait...


I wander who you are talking too.


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debbiejo
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It's historical......don't know???????....OH how I love metaphors.

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DreamingWarrior
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Very cool. love the ancient feel to these works. haha ancient poems for an ancient heart, eh? what a match. big grin more please!!!


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Coldfire
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Very cool. love the ancient feel to these works. haha ancient poems for an ancient heart, eh? what a match. big grin more please!!!

laughing out loud So that's where ya got your dA name stick out tongue hehehehe

But I, too, would like to hear more


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DreamingWarrior
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laughing out loud So that's where ya got your dA name stick out tongue hehehehe

But I, too, would like to hear more
heh. well, that and an old poem of mine, that I can never post... yes, more!!!


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debbiejo
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should of been born when strangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigilant...so mighty....
Integrity...loyalty of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain demise..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protector of all that's mine...yes mine fragile.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.Olympus I've seen you...you misplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....find...find......Lillie's of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........

what we were once were....hangs inside my soul forever.

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DreamingWarrior
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should of been born when stangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigulant...so mighy....
Integreity...loyality of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain destroction..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protected of all that's mine...yes me.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.olimpos I've seen you...you missplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....of Vurtue....Lillies of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........

Very very nice. Reading these is almost like hearing soft whispers of a lover at night.


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Coldfire
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heh. well, that and an old poem of mine, that I can never post... yes, more!!!

Mysteriousness O.o lol stick out tongue
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Originally posted by debbiejo
should of been born when strangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigilant...so mighty....
Integrity...loyalty of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain demise..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protector of all that's mine...yes mine fragile.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.Olympus I've seen you...you misplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....find...find......Lillie's of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........

what we were once were....hangs inside my soul forever.

wow.... that was really good! big grin


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debbiejo
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Ok a new one.....I love nature....and I love metaphors...so here it goes.

WINDS

The deepest woods
smell of leaves, maple and oak.
Oh deepest kind, there I sit in your splendor and grandger.

Hearing, calling, awakening me.
The voice of what is.....crisp and intoxicating.
Winds blowing fragrance unknown to to see, but me.

There I sit inhaling deeply,
Feelings flowing over whelm me....
Where?......Can you indulge me?
Fill me. Breathe me in as I do you....

There I sit in my affections....waiting...

I am moved, oh so with you
Carry me away, oh wind.
Take me so and place me where I should go.

There I sit...my eyes closed.

Swirl oh winds and pull me, draw me near,
as I do you. How my heart sorrows.
For I can't feel you, not for so very long....

There I sit, there I feel,
there I dream of going with you................

Oh swirl around me oh winds.
My fingers feel you.....you touch them.....

Oh winds you slip through me......
Oh winds.........

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DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by debbiejo
Ok a new one.....I love nature....and I love metaphors...so here it goes.

WINDS

The deepest woods
smell of leaves, maple and oak.
Oh deepest kind, there I sit in your splendor and grandger.

Hearing, calling, awakening me.
The voice of what is.....crisp and intoxicating.
Winds blowing fragrance unknown to to see, but me.

There I sit inhaling deeply,
Feelings flowing over whelm me....
Where?......Can you indulge me?
Fill me. Breathe me in as I do you....

There I sit in my affections....waiting...

I am moved, oh so with you
Carry me away, oh wind.
Take me so and place me where I should go.

There I sit...my eyes closed.

Swirl oh winds and pull me, draw me near,
as I do you. How my heart sorrows.
For I can't feel you, not for so very long....

There I sit, there I feel,
there I dream of going with you................

Oh swirl around me oh winds.
My fingers feel you.....you touch them.....

Oh winds you slip through me......
Oh winds.........



dang.... this makes me feel like a woman is holding me whilst her hands caress my chest and hair, and her kisses flutter upon my neck and face... haha wow.... very very nice.


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Coldfire
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dang.... this makes me feel like a woman is holding me whilst her hands caress my chest and hair, and her kisses flutter upon my neck and face... haha wow.... very very nice.

Wow got imagery from first debbie's poem then from you Will haha stick out tongue

Good stuff girl happy


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debbiejo
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laughing out loud

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DreamingWarrior
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Just call it like it feels ladies... hahaha...


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debbiejo
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SOULS

Inside a soul triumphed waits
For spirit never hesitates...
She listens to the wind........

It longs to live and flow so free
never in captivity.
She touches with her hands..........

Eternal questers touch force with light
No one can capture her delight...

Never can a soul be forced...
Never never to remorse
Never can it be unlinked...
Unless she desires it so........

A soul is always free..Blissful through the eyes that sees.

For time is only eternity....
Beyond this time, beyond this thought,
A spirit holds not what it ought....

It flows, It's free, sparks life from me....
Enters layes deep with thee....

How many souls and spirits free,
Find your own, and join with me..

You think you might to capture mine,
Ah....you might if you're divine!

Touch the wind, and you touch me..
Feel the sun, the warmth on thee...

Embrace the earth, the goddess whole,
enjoy the fruits of all untold....

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debbiejo
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QUEST

You can not forsake me...no never could
The key is with not me though........

Oh what shall we do.....OH,

Gone and away, on quest that he may,
many a year he goes....

OH dearest mine longs to sing of thy songs...
but though has forgotten of me???..Yes?

The tower is dark, And I fail to see....
What's to become of me....

Chasity belt so locked and so felt,
OH, how I do wish You'd unlock me.....

Ah...but the truth of thy youth has taken you.
Just as my tower holds me soooooooo....

My heart be with you my knight ship....
Unless you triumphed show....

The guilds and guards can see only a glimpse
Of a damsel in castle not known....

Don't fret my knight of me here so,
For my dwellings do never do hold...

Forget me not, for immortals don't stop,
I leave when ever I please....


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DreamingWarrior
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You can not forsake me...no never could
The key is with not me though........

Oh what shall we do.....OH,

Gone and away, on quest that he may,
many a year he goes....

OH dearest mine longs to sing of thy songs...
but though has forgotten of me???..Yes?

The tower is dark, And I fail to see....
What's to become of me....

Chasity belt so locked and so felt,
OH, how I do wish You'd unlock me.....

Ah...but the truth of thy youth has taken you.
Just as my tower holds me soooooooo....

My heart be with you my knight ship....
Unless you triumphed show....

The guilds and guards can see only a glimpse
Of a damsel in castle not known....

Don't fret my knight of me here so,
For my dwellings do never do hold...

Forget me not, for immortals don't stop,
I leave when ever I please....


I


ok.... the last 2 are great, but i got some personal questions on this one.... so plz answer the pm quickly... ha..


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debbiejo
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OK....I guess...we do have similar poetic thoughts....yes....Me do not copy....Nope...write from real life experiences....and throw in history...just love that....Learned that writers have to feel to write....took a course in that...writing that is.....but no poetry class. big grin

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OK....I guess...we do have similar poetic thoughts....yes....Me do not copy....Nope...write from real life experiences....and throw in history...just love that....Learned that writers have to feel to write....took a course in that...writing that is.....but no poetry class. big grin
hahaha yeah. not accusing you of copycattin, just... well we discussed it. hahaha no need to drag it out here.


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debbiejo
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Well....send me yours...Love to read it...really....

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DreamingWarrior
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ha.... cant... i am ok to be vulnerable in all but this one poem. never shared it prolly never will. sorry. nothin against anyone just.... only the woman who haunts my dreams knows the poem. i wrote it in a dream, and she read it. it is meant for a wife.


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