thanks coldfire, glad you like my poem and you agree with me. i'm only in 9th grade but i'm sure i'll figure out that the higher the grades are, the much harder it is by next year. i just can't wait to get it over with. i already have a whole bunch of homework.
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I always thought that 12th would be the best. I still have 3 more years to figure that out though. Any way here is that poem i promised.
I just got back from a pool party man
you should take a look at my dark new tan
i can't even walk in a line that is strait
i feel bad cause' i just got dropped from my date
oh wait, i can't feel
I'm head over a heal
when i walk i feel dizzy
i tried calling my house but the phone line's to busy
hold on, where did i park
i can't see in the dark
oh yea, there's my car
why does it seem so far
wait i don't remember buyin two red cars
i looked to my my left, i looked to my right
then i crossed sayin to myself that party was tight
i go up to my car door and open it
then i just hop in and sit in it
what happened i can't think
then i look at myself through the view mirror
hey my face is turning pink
oh no, here it comes, i try to open the door
but oh great i couldn't, it's all over my floor
i can't remember anything after that
i think i passed out after i sat
and today man, i think I'm out of my lucks
because this hangover, yea dude, it really sucks
It's differnent then the rest of the poem so what do you think. Any thing i need to fix?
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Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
Sissy..hahahaha!
hmmm.... hopefully seen from outside the poem, and not a personal experience. but, yeah, that describes some of my old highschool buds.... and their idiotic habit.
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Yea I know. I just felt like writing it because a friend of mine got drunk and almost passed out before. She almost barfed all over her car too. Yea I know, kinda gross but thats usually what happens if you drink 2 much. Anyway, she woke up with this huge hangover the next morning.....Not cool. I'm not the person to say I told you so, so I just let her learn by herself. Then again it's not very new when people get wasted at parties.
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Last edited by jlee17xoxo412 on Sep 16th, 2005 at 10:58 PM
yea right, I can't even lie 2 my mom and dad about a simple bad quiz grade. So no to answer your question, I've never got wasted. i might have tried like a sip of something here in there, like a little wine but never a whole row of drinks. I'm kind of 2 Innocent for that stuff. I couldn't do it if I tried.
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Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
Ha.... innocence lost. I have seen 3 of the 5 closest friends of mine from highschool become alcoholics by age 17. I suggest never starting down that path. Life is easier when you A: can remember who and where you were with the night before, and B: what you did.
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true, i never really liked the taste of it anyway. It's kind of disgusting to me. but some of my friends don't think so. One is 15 and shes already been high and drunk at parties. i'ts a shame but she doesn't want to listen to me.
oh, and i should have another poem coming up later tonight maybe. if i have time
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Sep 15th, 2005 05:01 AM
It was very good 
Good times, good times... 
yea right, I can't even lie 2 my mom and dad about a simple bad quiz grade. So no to answer your question, I've never got wasted. i might have tried like a sip of something here in there, like a little wine but never a whole row of drinks. I'm kind of 2 Innocent for that stuff. I couldn't do it if I tried.
