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Coldfire
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so are you girly. laughing out loud

glad to see ya smilin! haha

lol but of course stick out tongue
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all right peeps. there sould be another poem comeing up later tonight. just thought i would give you the heads up big grin

yay big grin


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jlee17xoxo412
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sorry sad didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids


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Coldfire
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sorry sad didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids

That's a really good attitude girl If you had to do homework instead, then it's alright smile I've had to do that a number of times myself lol


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DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry sad didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids

keep it that way. get into college now, while it is easy! hahha...


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jlee17xoxo412
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Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime


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DreamingWarrior
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Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime
Hmmm teach or parental unit? ha... sorry babe. good lyricismal style, more rap than poem. I like.


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jlee17xoxo412
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lol......thanks. yea someone is really getting on my nerves and getting me pissed off so i just wrote about it

i'll post alittle more tommorow smile :


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Coldfire
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Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime

oooo I liked that a lot! And it could very well describe a few ppl I know lol stick out tongue


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jlee17xoxo412
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my grandmother.
mum-mum i use to call her
i was only two when she died but O do i remember her
she had a personality that made you seem like you knew her forever
and her smile, that radiant smile could light up a room for miles.
she had a voice of an angel. i mean boy could she sing
yea, cancer couldn't take her joy away
cause you know what, she would laugh and smile anyway
i remember going to her house every Sunday for dinner.
i might have only been two but i carried my little legs up them stairs just to go to her room and see her beautiful face
when she saw me her smile always got even bigger
she use to say''come give mum-mum some sugar"
yea thats what she use to say
but there is another memory i have.
that memory was the day i found out that i wasn't gonna see her anymore
it was Christmas day and i was still two
we went right to my mum-mums house for Christmas dinner
as soon as my mother opened up the doors to her house
i took my little legs right to them big stairs to go see her
my mother stopped me she said where do you think your going
i said three simple words. to see mum-mum.
she just looked at me and said she's not here
she's an angle now.
of course, since i was only two i didn't know what she was talking about
so again when, know one was looking i took my little legs right up them stairs to her room to see her
to see that lady with the voice of an angel
but when i went up there i couldn't find her
i tried looking for that radiant smile but i couldn' find it
all i saw was in empty bed with white sheets and nothing in it
i was probably about five when i realized she would never really come back
but you better believe through them three years i was looking and waiting for her to come back, but she didn't
to this day when things go wrong, all i have to do is close my eyes...
close my eyes and think about her beautiful smile and her voice like an angle
thats how i alway know that things are gonna turn out just fine
i was young but I'm proud to say that my grandmother was a strong woman.
she never let anyone take her joy away
i might have only know her for two years of my life but yes i remember
carrying my little legs up the stairs to see her smile
out of all the memories i have I'll tell you this
thats one memory i wouldn't dare give up for anything
and it's the one that i will always miss


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this ones more of a poem/memory
i also use to dream about her sometimes so i guess you can call this part of a dream too.


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Coldfire
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aww that's sooo sad sad


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yea this poem is a lot more personal and of course this time it's about me. this one has to be my most favorite so far so i decided to post it on.


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ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.


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ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.


thanks


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ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.

yeah no kidding... almost made me cry....

smile


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smile awwww...don't cry


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more poems coming up alittle later big grin


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I'm looking in the mirror
i look and i see me
but this isn't the me that i wanted to see
the mirror is huge, it has a big giant crack
sort of like me and the confidence i lack
just sit and listen to what my conscience say
they say the same things like almost every day
but then there's another side that says things in a different way
your so ugly you should die(don't say that you know thats a lie)
every day my hairs a mess( that doesn't mean you should think of yourself any less)
no one likes me, they don't care(cause' you don't let them, thats not fair)
look at my body, i look like a stick
people should just call me a tooth pick
look at me, I'm all skin and bone( you keep thinking negative like that you'll end up alone)
i hate my feet there ugly and long( do i really have to hear anther episode of your sad sad songs.
it's not what you see on the outside, it's whats in the in
so stop looking at yourself thinking your some kind of sin
think of the positive instead of the negative
trust me, you have what it can take
it all depend on you and the positive decisions you make)
........


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Coldfire
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ooo I like it happy Like how you went from all depressive to a more positive side smile


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Nicely done. very rappish... ha.. everyone is bustin rhymes as of late!


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