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jlee17xoxo412
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Nicely done. very rappish... ha.. everyone is bustin rhymes as of late!


lol...yea thanks. i might seem like an o.k rapper put the truth is i really suck. ha i probably couldn't keep a beat if i tried.


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jlee17xoxo412
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here is my next poem. tell me what you think.

This body is weak, but this soul it couldn't be any stronger
People ask how i can stay up any longer
I've gained friends, I lost friends
I've been down that road, wonderin if it ever ends
I been knocked out, beat up, beat down, kicked too the ground
But still i kept my mouth shut, i didn't make a sound
Nope, got right back up and was on my way
Had my time of pains but still i knew one day it was gonna be okay
Yup, I had my moments, when i asked myself why
When i just wanted to give up, stop, break down and cry
But nooooooo i didn't stop
I knew some how I was gonna make it to the top
There were times on my back when i had a load
But you better believe i kept going right up that road
There were some high hills I had to climb too
How i got up most of um, I never knew
I have so many cuts, marks,bruises,scratches and scores
But i kept going knowing there was going to be more
Yea,this body may be week,but this soul, it couldn't be any stronger
People still ask me how can i stay up any longer
For there answer they sit and wait a while
I just look at um and give um a smile
I tell um, I still got more blocks to go,I'm not done
going down that road has not always been much fun
But still aint no stopin me
cause soon, very soon I'll have the key
then I'll be able to open that door
the door I always been waitin for
then i won't have to travel those hard bumpy road no more


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Coldfire
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you're so good at rhyming happy


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jlee17xoxo412
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^aww..thanks smile i try but it's not always easy. sometimes i have to make up my own words.


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DreamingWarrior
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hahaha nice chicky. nice. you oughtta put it to a beat!


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hahaha nice chicky. nice. you oughtta put it to a beat!

yeah that'd be cool happy


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jlee17xoxo412
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ha...maybe but i'm tellin you, i'm still not good with beats.
wink


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ha...maybe but i'm tellin you, i'm still not good with beats.
wink

here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.

laughing out loud


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here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.

laughing out loud

laughing out loud Niiiiiiice stick out tongue


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laughing out loud Niiiiiiice stick out tongue


laughing


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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.

laughing out loud


laughing out loud ..........maybe you should be the famous rapper


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laughing out loud ..........maybe you should be the famous rapper

Oh totally laughing out loud


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funny women. laughing out loud


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hehehe wacko stick out tongue


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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
funny women. laughing out loud


i try Happy Dance


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Coldfire
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And it's not hard to make Will laugh anyway stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
And it's not hard to make Will laugh anyway stick out tongue


yea i guess you can say the same thing about me too. i don't know i just laugh at the corniest things sometimes. i guess you can say i'm dorky like that..ha. Anyway I should post some more poems alittle later tomorrow.


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^^ haha. And cool laughing out loud yeah, i like laughter! big grin


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every person wants a fairy tale
some one to help them if they fail
to sweep them up when times get rough
you know when, things get really tough
every person wants that one day
the day when every thing goes perfect and goes your way
every Girl wants that perfect guy
the one that saids nothing wrong and will never lie
where things never go wrong
and for dreams to happen, you didn't have to wait to long
ha, yea wouldn't that be nice
but this is reality so we have to think twice
so when you choose you have to be wise
don't do anything that would jeopardize
life isn't a fairy tail
you can't tun back time every time you fail


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
every person wants a fairy tale
some one to help them if they fail
to sweep them up when times get rough
you know when, things get really tough
every person wants that one day
the day when every thing goes perfect and goes your way
every Girl wants that perfect guy
the one that saids nothing wrong and will never lie
where things never go wrong
and for dreams to happen, you didn't have to wait to long
ha, yea wouldn't that be nice
but this is reality so we have to think twice
so when you choose you have to be wise
don't do anything that would jeopardize
life isn't a fairy tail
you can't tun back time every time you fail

I really dig this piece, ha... gotta write one now.


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