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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver

Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River

you are welcome and glad to hear your ok


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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."

Old Post Sep 9th, 2010 07:37 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

A friend needed a two minute poem for her voice class. So she came to me happy
My brother and I both wrote to this.

A torn soul seeking solitude, walks on the stones of his diluted feelings. Bending over to sip from the lake of life, he vainly gazes into the eyes of the water.

In the reflection he searches for the answers of it all.

He conforms to his dreams, he believes there is a life after are eyes close and our hearts seize to beat. The man in the reflection doesn't want to wait anymore. His hands are still warm from the presence of his lost companion.

His reflection stares back at him, with anger and sadness. He had found the needle in the haystack. But, he felt the needle wasn't sharp enough for him. So, after the adventure, the losses and the ups and downs, the man in the reflection threw the needle back in the haystack... and never saw it again.

He pounders, he thinks too often and his heart sends messages through his blood all the way to his brain. The man in the reflection cries, wondering if someone else found his needle, he's anxious. His chest tightens up with the thought of someone creating new memories with his needle.

The man in the reflection now understands what he has to do. He searches everywhere to find his needle. Looking through every haystack possible, he has no luck.

He falls to his knees trying the best he can not to accept reality... the needles gone. He opens up his heart and the feeling from it travles to his voical cords and he screams.

After many new days and sunsets, he goes to the lake of life and prays. He wishes for everything to be back to normal.

The man in the sky had nothing to say.

His shattered heart causes tears to fall from his eyes. He opens them hoping to see his needle, he looks down...


And all he see's is his reflection.


Writen by: Bun Bun & DeadleeMC


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There'll be peace when you are done

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Old Post Sep 23rd, 2010 02:52 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

Tragedy endless,
A heart ripped in pieces,
I can see through the antics,
You're sick of the bullshit.

Wishing for that feeling,
But, sick of the searching,
You've thrown up a wall, which screams,
Love me or hate me.

Your desires are simple,
Your passions are pure,
Your true colors shine through,
When you speak of those whom
...you hold dear.


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Old Post Feb 13th, 2011 04:55 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

I admit, I'm a mess
I confess, I'm a wreck
But, the issues are simple,
I need a comeback.

Highs and lows,
Really mess with my mind,
But, the truth is,
I am coming back.

I am more myself,
More of who I used to be,
The scars are there,
But, fade from memory.


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Old Post Feb 15th, 2011 12:17 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

With offense taken,
Offense is given.

You say certain words,
Before even thinking.

Don't you ever tire,
Of only seeing the darkness?

Life is all around you,
In all it's greatness.

Vask in it's glory,
Choose to see the light.

Or be damned,
And drown in your own fright.


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Old Post Feb 15th, 2011 12:24 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants


And so the shadow beings,
Cast ever so slightly as your talents blossom.

My support will never waver,
But, my own words go on forgotten.

The flame of your creativity,
Outshines my spark.


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Old Post Feb 16th, 2011 09:27 PM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

"A free soul...
Forever drifting...
Gliding upon the winds of anything enchanting."




Mmm, not much a poem per-say. But it was cute so I thought I'd keep it.


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Old Post May 12th, 2011 10:38 AM
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver

Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River

i like it. i'm waiting for some more awesome Bun Bun poetry


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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."

Old Post May 14th, 2011 11:50 PM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

Shine on me,
For just a little while
A moment just for me
I'm sorry if I cry a little.

Even a glance...
A smile...
And if all my wishs came true...
A kiss...

For a kiss from you
Would send my heart soaring

Soaring...
So high...
That we'd fear that I'd never find my way back

Forever lost...
In the bliss...
Of your kiss...


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Old Post May 28th, 2011 06:08 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

Ideal stranger
You got here just in the knit of time.

Don't count on me,
But, oh... yes, touch me just like that.

Ideal stranger
You fill my head with better thoughts

Don't get involved, I'm too desperate.
But, when I'm next to you, hold me close.

Ideal stranger...
You have perfect timing...


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Old Post Jun 14th, 2011 04:58 AM
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FŽanor
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

quote: (post)
Originally posted by ~Bun Bun~
Ideal stranger
You got here just in the knit of time.

Don't count on me,
But, oh... yes, touch me just like that.

Ideal stranger
You fill my head with better thoughts

Don't get involved, I'm too desperate.
But, when I'm next to you, hold me close.

Ideal stranger...
You have perfect timing...


That's 'nick' not knit...

Old Post Jun 27th, 2011 06:06 PM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

Lol thanks smile


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Old Post Jun 29th, 2011 05:07 AM
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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

Sitting, staring,
With nothing to look at,

No words on this paper,
No clarity in my head,

Listening to those around me,
Not hearing what's really said.

...

They always want me to listen
They always want me to be that friend

Until it's their turn, to be in my head...
To be my friend...
To listen and give advise...
To wipe away my tears and ****ing hold MY hand!

Yet they shy away...

I almost let my tears show today...
Almost.

...

But no I shook it off because I was "needed"...
Needed to comfort my parents as their relationship falls apart,
Needed to mother my baby sister because my mother has given up
Needed to be the golden boy's biggest fan, even though he never reads what i write.
Needed to comfort my friends left and right!...

-One whom I loved and left but he's clinging on so tight.
He just recently trying to take his life...
he called me from the hosptial...
I talked to him until his phone died.
-One who has special needs,
he doesn't understand that he is constantly smothering me.
-One who is rotten to the core,
who can't help herself when she's in the mood to...
****, fight, steal, drink or pop pills.
She too just called me from the hospital,
her boy toy poped her a good one in the face...
knocked her out cold.

I know this has gone and turned into a rant...
But, this is all 100% true...

I'm not looking for pity, this is not a cry for help...

I have no idea how to end this...
That'll do pig... that'll do.


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Old Post Jul 21st, 2011 11:29 AM
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FŽanor
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

Pretty good, almost lyrical in a pop angst kind of way. Might I suggest spell check as you wrote 'popped' as 'poped'. A minor thing, but distracting.

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King of Blades
The King

Gender: Male
Location: The South

F****ing Babe reference, GD 10/10


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~Bun Bun~
**KMC OG**

Gender: Female
Location: In your pants

quote: (post)
Originally posted by FŽanor
Pretty good, almost lyrical in a pop angst kind of way. Might I suggest spell check as you wrote 'popped' as 'poped'. A minor thing, but distracting.

Oh shit, thanks for pointing that out. yes I really am trying to correct my horrid spelling and grammar habits.

quote: (post)
Originally posted by King of Blades
F****ing Babe reference, GD 10/10

I'm flattered you like it big grin Thank you thank you!


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Old Post Mar 31st, 2012 04:49 AM
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver

Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River

BUN BUN


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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."

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