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EMPTINESS is what I'm left with
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~Bun Bun~
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Originally posted by Leo.M
Okay heres another one, hope you like big grin




The spell you cast on me is now broken
My head is now my own once more
I am no longer your palm , I am not a token
For you to use to comfort your soul

Its been so long since we have spoken
But still every time I think a thought
That strays your way my anger flares
Too many times I would wake up
In your arms that were never there

You branded me as your own
Carving your name into my burning flesh
and the entire time you were unaware
Of how I drifted away, out of your reach

I'm floating away
Running from you
Drifting up to the sun and it burns
Melting my flesh away, melting your brand
And I'm free

WOW eek! Thats a great poem hun!! Your really good


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Leo.M
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Originally posted by Coldfire
eek! It's good! Glad you wrote another hun


thank you

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Originally posted by Bun Bun
WOW eek! Thats a great poem hun!! Your really good


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DreamingWarrior
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Nicely done my friend. Been a toy for a woman eh?


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Leo.M
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I have sad




Here’s a poem I wrote on Friend for a class of mine big grin

A fly flew by
And I thought it was neat
But then the fly left
And I was sad
And it was gone


..... Okay, so pulled this one out of nowhere laughing I made it up on the stand. laughing I'll post a good poem sometime this week big grin


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Leo.M
A Riddle

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Location: Where Everything Spins <3

I haven't posted my poems in here for awhile. This is a poem I wrote about a month ago and I wasn't so sure if I should post it, but here it is....






Will you run away with me?
I need to know that you are there,
For the time is slowly slipping away from my fingertips, I have lost
Everything,
The sensation for pain is all that breathes inside me.
Pain is all I have to gain. It is screaming inside my veins. Am I still
Breathing?
I need to scream,
I need to run,
Run away,
Will you run away with me?
I am trapped in these chains of lost time.
I itch to let my blood run free from my veins.
I know of their desires to be free.
You can't hear me,
I find my bloods freedom,
And cut,
I cut so deep this freedom also belongs to me.
I feel as though I am flying,
I can no longer go back to my chains,
I'll make sure of that.
I am flying in my own world of freedom.
As you find me lying in a pool of my own blood.
I have run away.
As my my empty body lay on the ground.
I whisper in the wind,
"Runaway with me?"
Will you?


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Leo.M
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Just sitting here
As the thoughts sweep through my mind
They morph into tears
They roll down my face
That change into puddles of sorrow
I try to fight back my emotions
But to no avail
I don't know why
But this how life is
Confusing. causing me to feel lost
Lost in my own thoughts
Over analyzing
Things that are simple
Become complex.
I'm left confused
Broken into pieces.
I find myself tracing back the fallen pieces along the way
To see where I lost you.
Where I want wrong
How could I lose the most amazing thing in life
True love.
I'll never get to the see the stars
In your eyes
The fireworks that go off
When you smile.
With 6 billion people in the world
Not one will ever come close to you.


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Damn Leo, this stuff is GREAT. Those last two actually brought tears to my eyes. embarrasment


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Wow. Love your poems Leo.M. happy

Seriously... so touching smile

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~Bun Bun~
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Wow the last 2 were so amazing!

There so deep I can really feel what your saying.


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Pure Passioné
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Leo.M
Okay heres another one, hope you like big grin




The spell you cast on me is now broken
My head is now my own once more
I am no longer your palm , I am not a token
For you to use to comfort your soul

Its been so long since we have spoken
But still every time I think a thought
That strays your way my anger flares
Too many times I would wake up
In your arms that were never there

You branded me as your own
Carving your name into my burning flesh
and the entire time you were unaware
Of how I drifted away, out of your reach

I'm floating away
Running from you
Drifting up to the sun and it burns
Melting my flesh away, melting your brand
And I'm free


Wow leo!


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