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Bardock42
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This thread
Is dead
I miss it much
And so
With just one touch
I shall revive it
With some horrible rhymes
Since we had such good times.


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Old Post Nov 15th, 2006 11:48 AM
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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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Originally posted by lil bitchiness


Hi, you....what's up?


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The fat panda is dancing to your poem, which has effectively been converted into a song.


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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
The fat panda is dancing to your poem, which has effectively been converted into a song.

This I do enjoy a lot. I always wanted to be a musician. And now I contributed ..and that's cause I am...sister I'm a poet...all over this town. Wait. is the song good?


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I don't know yet...although im kind of reading it in Elvis' ''Hound Dog'' tune...

It works...sort of.


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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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Originally posted by lil bitchiness
I don't know yet...although im kind of reading it in Elvis' ''Hound Dog'' tune...

It works...sort of.


I think I like you


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bardock42
This thread
Is dead
I miss it much
And so
With just one touch
I shall revive it
With some horrible rhymes
Since we had such good times.


Bardock made a poem,
It blew inside his mind
It conjured up a spirit
Though he'd say it's not divine.

Bardock make a poem,
Something spoke so deeply
A voice inside his head.
The voice that spoke so sweetly,

Bardock what U doing?
****in up the forum
Put your hands back in your pants
Just like they were before....



laughing out loud wink

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by debbiejo
Bardock made a poem,
It blew inside his mind
It conjured up a spirit
Though he'd say it's not divine.

Bardock make a poem,
Something spoke so deeply
A voice inside his head.
The voice that spoke so sweetly,

Bardock what U doing?
****in up the forum
Put your hands back in your pants
Just like they were before....



laughing out loud wink


Funyny girl this deebiejo
her poems though
are horrible to read
cause they are generally sheet (like shit, haha, lol)

I am funny


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Do better now can U? roll eyes (sarcastic)

And nothin that rhymes with deb.

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Poem Duel...debbiej vs bardock.....ok GO!!!


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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Poem Duel...debbiej vs bardock.....ok GO!!!


I forfeit, due to lack of....being good. Or something.
quote: (post)
Originally posted by debbiejo
Do better now can U? roll eyes (sarcastic)

And nothin that rhymes with deb.


nap, fab, sep(tember), rep, rap, lap, lab, crap. Oh, good one.

I don't read the poems of deb
cause they do totally sound like crap
not to say that mine are good
that's obviously not true, but (you can rhyme it if you have a very, very, very, ****ing, very weird accent...Floo probably could)
At least I know it.
The End

Thanks, I produced it myself, if you are into that I could produce a bigger and even less nice thing on my toilet. Just follow me. If you are hot you have to pay with sex though.

Hehe, ever noticed that bird doesn't rhyme with shirt? D'oh.


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bardock42
I forfeit, due to lack of....being good. Or something.

nap, fab, sep(tember), rep, rap, lap, lab, crap. Oh, good one.

I don't read the poems of deb
cause they do totally sound like crap
not to say that mine are good
that's obviously not true, but (you can rhyme it if you have a very, very, very, ****ing, very weird accent...Floo probably could)
At least I know it.
The End

Thanks, I produced it myself, if you are into that I could produce a bigger and even less nice thing on my toilet. Just follow me. If you are hot you have to pay with sex though.

Hehe, ever noticed that bird doesn't rhyme with shirt? D'oh.
*takes head phones off*

OH TAY.
Bardock

Follow me in the winter where the bardocks grow.
You'll see them and wonder how they seem to know.
I saw one once, and pondered, I looked very close,
It was snow covered yet beautiful..........

Yet unusually apart...............
Why I didn't see it before.. I didn't no..
Why was is so...Something strange upon the snow.

It came to me then.
It's purpose was this...........

It's only for ones who look and exist...
smile

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bardock42
I don't read the poems of deb
cause they do totally sound like crap
not to say that mine are good
that's obviously not true, but (you can rhyme it if you have a very, very, very, ****ing, very weird accent...Floo probably could)
At least I know it.
The End


Yeah, you're right. I'm saying that 'but' like an Austrian with smooth peanut butter in their mouth trying to say 'boot'. Certainly rhymes when you say it like that, ya.


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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I could really beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee rich tooooo if I could just say: da ba dee da ba die..(like a lot)


I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

Inside and outside blue his house
With the blue little window and a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around cause he aint got
Nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

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Originally posted by debbiejo


I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

Inside and outside blue his house
With the blue little window and a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around cause he aint got
Nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...


Like the tone of it, but what the hell is it?!


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Originally posted by Immortality
Like the tone of it, but what the hell is it?!


A famous pop song from the late 90s.


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Immortality
Such a hateful world...

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hmm, I woudn't know, not a big fan of pop.


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I thought it was a new song.

EIFFEL 65 LYRICS

"Blue (Da Ba De)"

Yo listen up here's a story
About a little guy that lives in a blue world
And all day and all night and everything he sees
Is just blue like him inside and outside
Blue his house with a blue little window
And a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around
Cos he ain't got nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I have a blue house with a blue window.
Blue is the colour of all that I wear.
Blue are the streets and all the trees are too.
I have a girlfriend and she is so blue.
Blue are the people here that walk around,
Blue like my corvette, it's standing outside.
Blue are the words I say and what I think.
Blue are the feelings that live inside me.

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I have a blue house with a blue window.
Blue is the colour of all that I wear.
Blue are the streets and all the trees are too.
I have a girlfriend and she is so blue.
Blue are the people here that walk around,
Blue like my corvette, it's standing outside.
Blue are the words I say and what I think.
Blue are the feelings that live inside me.

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

Inside and outside blue his house
With the blue little window and a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around cause he aint got
Nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I'm blue (if I was green I would die)


[Thanks to [email protected][/email], [email protected], [email][email protected] for correcting these lyrics]

[ www.azlyrics.com ]


Cool song!

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