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Brilliantly Good!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! |
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It's okay |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
Harry Potter and the Final Battle
This is my first story so don't go to hard on me. Please post what you think but don't post really rude things. I will probably, most likely post 1 chapter a day
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Harry lay flat on his back, his mind swimming with thoughts about the prophecy, how it had said; And either must die at the hand of the other for neith can live while the other survives. This phrase had gone over in Harry's head a million times. He knew he had to kill Voldermort, no question about it, but Harry was still confused. For days he had looked out the window, not knowing what he was excepting, yet he was drawn to it everyday.
Harry touched his scar, which was a reminder of what had happened and what was yet to come. This teenage boy named Harry Potter awaited 12 A.M. so that he could turn 17, and embark on a new journey.
The clock ticked over to 11:59 P.M. "This is it" Harry thought. At 12 A.M., Harry would take off. He was also thinking about Ron and Hermione. Would they come? Part of Harry wanted them to come and the other part wanted them to go to Hogwarts for their final year.
Harry looked at the clock and read 12 A.M. He looed out the window, one last time, but this time he saw something. He saw thre dark figures coming toward the house. Harry swayed across the hallway, bue was stopped by Aunt Petuina. Aunt Petuina hugged Harry and said "Be okay, don't get hurt." She paused and continued, "I... well... I love you Harry, I just wanted to say, I loved your mom, Lily, too."Harry was stunned, he looked at her for several seconds and forced himself to whisper, "Why were you so mean then, all those years, you..." "I have one more secret, I'm a... a...." She choked on her words. "A WHAT??" Harry screamed, so loudly Aunt Petuina squinted and Uncle Vernon yelled "Shut up, boy" "Oh no. I'm a wizard, Harry" She kissed him on the cheek and ran back into her room. Harry stared open-mouthed for, what seemed seven hours,but what was only seven seconds,
Harry turned and saw three, very suprised, open-mouthed friends. Ron, Ginny, anf Hermione heard the whole concersation between Harry and Aunt Petuina. Ginny, Harry''s former girlfriend, had not talked to Harry since Dumbledore's funeral.
"Hey", he told his friends, who were were still suprised to blink and talk.
"What just happened?" ROn asked, while looking at Aunt Petuina's door.
"I don't want to talk about it" Harry said, but he really wanted to, yet he didn't know how to explain it.
"How did you guys get here?" Harry asked trying to change the subject.
"We fly halfway and then we apparated down the street" Hermione said, smartly
"Why?", Harry asked, but he knew why
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Oct 16th, 2005 06:21 PM |
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zac_j
Hogsmeade RP by Zac J!!!
Gender: Male Location: Germany |
that was good. i want to read the next chapter!
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Thanks for the sig, KillTheLight!!!
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Oct 16th, 2005 06:46 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
thanks
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Oct 16th, 2005 06:52 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
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"They have protection almost everyhwere and plus Ginny dosen't have her license" Ron said, smirking at Ginny.
"Shut up, Ron" Ginny pinched Ron
"Oww! Mom said not to use those" Ron yelled
"Shhhhh" Harry told them, sternly "Let's go outside"
They crepted down the stairs and as Harry gripped the doorknob, he looked around one last time. He opened the door, and as he did, he stepped outside.
"Ok! Ginny, can I ask you something" Harry asked
Ginny nodded "What is wrong with your fingernails"
"Fred and George, those stupid gits, they came over for the wedding, and I picked this pink ball up and it made my nails, three feet tall"
"Wow!" Harry said as he didn't know what else to say,"Anyway, Ginny why are you here"
"I'm going with you guys"
"No your not"
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Oct 16th, 2005 07:09 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
cool 3 votes for loved
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Oct 16th, 2005 07:36 PM |
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dansdaman
Daniel's Girlfriend
Gender: Female Location: Hogwarts |
wow, your story is very good for a first one...awsome work!!! you deserve a dancing banana
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Oct 16th, 2005 07:37 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male Location: The Land of Quar |
now it is four votes! GREAT JOB
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Oct 16th, 2005 08:19 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
thanks saratn!
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Oct 16th, 2005 08:50 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male Location: The Land of Quar |
your welcome
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:15 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: US / UK |
ha...lol...make that five
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So guys are the most confusing thing ever on earth
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:20 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
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yay for the number five
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:23 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
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thanks you guys!
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:30 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
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I will make more tonight
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:30 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male Location: The Land of Quar |
YOU GOTS SIX VOTES
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:38 PM |
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danagrint1
Rupert's Wife
Gender: Female Location: Nowhere to be found... |
yea!
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Oct 16th, 2005 09:54 PM |
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honey_bunny3000
HE HE
Gender: Female Location: find me if you can |
seven
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sig by barker he he
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Oct 17th, 2005 12:44 AM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male Location: The Land of Quar |
WHO SAYS IT SUCKS? SHOW YOURSELF, AND YOU BETTER HAVE A GOOD REASON
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Oct 17th, 2005 12:45 AM |
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mcd222
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Gender: Location: United Kingdom |
when u posting more
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Oct 17th, 2005 11:24 AM |
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HPRox90
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Gender: Female Location: USA |
That was amazingly awesome!!! I'm so proud of you.*tear* LOL!!! Great job!!! Lookin forward to more!!!
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Oct 17th, 2005 07:26 PM |
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