harrypotterluvr
misses blaise zabini
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check out my story lupin/tonks harry/ginny ron/hermione tell me what you think
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Apr 10th, 2006 12:21 AM
manu_13
~LoViNg InSaNiTy~
Gender: Female Location: Lots of Places!!! I Daydream a Lot!
soon i hope...
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Apr 11th, 2006 08:30 PM
Sirius_Rulez
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Gender: Female Location: Australia
plz write more soon im just really luvin it and cant wait for more
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Apr 29th, 2006 10:20 PM
SweetMagnolia17
making it count
Gender: Female Location: the middle of nowhere.
pretty good. i like it.
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May 1st, 2006 07:41 PM
LikeWhoa_9
The Jigsaw Man
Gender: Male Location: I'm around
so....guess she is not continuing the story....hmmm
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Jun 1st, 2006 07:45 PM
Waterslicer
Creator of Acromantula
Gender: Male Location: Hogwarts cellar
of course she isn't, she's tussling with draco under the bedsheets
anyway, here's a message she can read when she gets out of the holy bed.
it's disgusting. disgusting but highly addictive.
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Jun 17th, 2006 01:50 AM
Nickey
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Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
Man, if you're gonna write a good story like that
You should really finish it
Because it's not fair to the readers who want to read more
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Sep 13th, 2006 11:35 PM
Brit531
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^^yea write more
Sep 15th, 2006 12:21 AM
Nickey
Fallen Angel
Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
When are you gonna finish the story?
Please post
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Sep 16th, 2006 02:27 AM
Brit531
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Wondering the same thing
Sep 25th, 2006 11:43 PM
Nickey
Fallen Angel
Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
Re: Hermione/Draco fic
quote: (post ) Originally posted by seduce_me_draco
Chapter One
She woke with a start. Around her, everything lay still. Nothing stirred. Her delicate hands were gripping the mattress tightly, drenched with sweat. Her chest rose and fell rapidly. Dried Tears lingered on her otherwise smooth, rosy cheeks. It was Christmas. Her white night dress hung limply over her perfect body. The moonlight poured into the room and onto her trunk, which lay open at the opposite wall of the stone-built room. The drapes of the four-poster bed hung elegantly from the towering mahogany frame. She arose from the white as white bed covers. But why had she awoken? Not a sound emerged from the windless night, apart from the distant crackling of the common room fire. Deciding she could not go back to sleep, she tip-toed effortlessly down the worn spiral staircase.
The common room was dimly lit. A single book entitled: ‘Advanced Potion Making Volume 5’ lay on a table in the back corner. She had left it there the previous evening. Big armchairs and sofas littered the large, circular room. A single armchair stood immediately in front of the fire...
****
Hermione placed herself on an old leather armchair, next to the table in the back corner of the room and began to read the book. Minutes passed... Then hours... So deep was Hermione’s interest in the book, that she did not notice the hushed whimpers. Maybe only now, after the crackles of the fire had seized to a stop, the room was quiet enough to hear them.
Steadily, she put the book down. Rose to her feet, and strode across the room, as she stepped around the front of the chair, time seemed to freeze...
****
“It was cold in the other parts of the castle,”
Hermione stared, transfixed, at the boy who had just spoken. But how? Or Why? Hermione realized that neither of these questions could be answered by just staring at him. However, she couldn’t bring herself to speak. How did he get here? Hermione thought, reaching for her wand. But where was her wand?
“Don’t worry, I haven’t got mine,” he said softly.
Tears were streaming steadily down his pale cheeks. His usually icy glare was reduced to a simple, pleading look. His robes were crumpled and ragged. His blonde hair was ruffled. What had happened to him?
****
“What …” Hermione faltered, as she had just plucked up enough courage to begin. “What are you doing here?”
He tilted his head enquiringly before turning away. He closed his beautiful grey eyes. His hair, ruffled and matted, stood on end as he ran his frail hand through it.
“I have done something stupid. Really stupid.” And at this, he gave a stifled cry before giving way to choking tears. Should he tell her?
Fury was building rapidly insider her. Hermione could not control herself.
“How could you?” She shouted wildly. “You mean everything to me! I stopped him from hurting you for seven years Draco. SEVEN YEARS!”
Hermione collapsed heavily onto the floor. She was furious! At that moment of time, she could not think of anyone she hated more. She stood up and hit him. She hit him as hard as she could. She stormed out of the room and up the staircase to the dormitory.
****
It was long before she heard someone hurtling up the staircase and fall into the room. She hastily shut her eyes and pretended to be asleep. She sensed his slender body looming over her for minutes. Then she felt his weight on the end of her four poster bed.
“Honestly…I…” he paused. Tears still ran silently down his cheeks. “I didn’t know. It wasn’t supposed to be like this. I thought I was alone. I had… I had no clue that they were watching. I…”
Hermione held up her hand. “Come here,” she said. “We can talk later.”
Draco shifted up the bed. Towards the girl he longed to be with. He leant forward and kissed her cheek. He groaned softly as she undid the buttons of his robes. He gently began to lift the hem of her nightdress. She shivered slightly as she felt his hands gently brush her skin. She let her dress slip over her head. He stroked her delicate neck.
“How could you do this to me?” she murmured softly into his ear. She let her fingers run wild, hauling his robes from his body.
“No, how could you do this to me?” he purred. She giggled as she felt him inside her. He felt as if the moment could never end. The bliss was unimaginable.
Eventually, they both collapsed, side by side. Their heavy breathing the only sound for far. Her mind was still buzzing as she drifted off to sleep.
what do you think?
The next day, they were awoken by a peck on the window. It was Hedwig. Hermione pulled on a robe, and let the owl in. As usual there was a letter attached. "What does it say?" asked Draco. Hermione read the letter. "It says that Harry wants to come back! He's coming back!" said Hermione happily. Draco wasn't so happy about this. "Aww, don't worry. He's not coming back until after Christmas vacation. Nobody, not even Dumbledore." she said slipping back into bed. "I think you know what that means." she said slyly as she pulled of her robes, and covered herself with the blankets. "What? Ohhh." he said. He had just turned around when he saw Hermione. "I think you know." she said
"You got me to yourself for seven more days. And if you want to, I have a lot of games we could play." she said giving him a signal to come lie down next to her.
Sorry. I was trying to make the story like the first chapter.
Somebody eles can finish now
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Oct 9th, 2006 09:29 PM
Brit531
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You have talent Nickey..
Oct 9th, 2006 09:33 PM
Nickey
Fallen Angel
Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Brit531
You have talent Nickey..
Thanks
You should read what I wrote for Harry Potter and the Mudblood War.
Please read it and tell me what you think.
Should I write more.
I'm planning to write a story.
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Oct 9th, 2006 09:35 PM
Brit531
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That would be cool if you write a story. I would personally read it. I have already read what you put for the story Harry Potter and the Mudblood War
Oct 9th, 2006 09:37 PM
Nickey
Fallen Angel
Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
Okay
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Oct 9th, 2006 09:43 PM
Nickey
Fallen Angel
Gender: Female Location: Falling from Heaven
quote: (post ) Originally posted by seduce_me_draco
tehe. i love hearing all ur comments lol. i hav already written a third of the second chapter. The main clues lie above ^^^ "It was Christmas." and "Dried Tears lingered on her otherwise smooth, rosy cheeks."
Do i need say more or can ne of u work it out???
Finish your story
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Oct 12th, 2006 10:59 PM
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