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Harry was positive about this, the message seemed so clear and there was no alternative.This didnt stop Harry wondering though,Voldemort hated his father so why would he place something of so much importnace there?Harry sat for a while on this thought and a plausible answer came to mind.Voldemort was an orphan with a bad child hood,but Voldemort liked who he was an what he was and even though he despised his parents it was them who gave them life,Harry supposed that you didnt have to like someone to be greatfull for something and his was Harrys guess.He was finally ready to go to the next place in his journey in destroying the remaining horcruxes.

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great post more smile

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not posted in a while will try to post tomorrow tho so keep readin

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Oct 30th, 2005 01:19 AM

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im waitin

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k...a will try tonyt.!!

promise!!

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Oct 30th, 2005 03:06 PM

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Harry arrived ,with a loud crack,at the graveyard.He quickly darted behind the nearest gravestone.Harry peered around to check for any sight of deatheaters their was none.Harry didnt like the fact of the horcrux being here as it was far too easy in comparison to the other which he and dumbledore tried to retrieved together but got nothing but a silly note by someone who had beaten them too it.
Harry stood up as it seemed that their was no other human life source around.He walked slowly uphill to the gravestone marked "Tom Riddle". Harry sat on the ground in front of the grave.It did seem to be an unexpected place to anyone who knew voldemorts past so it may not have needed security but to any fool who had not done their research it would seem to be the perfect place so obvious but at the same time not.Harry knew he would have to think carefully.Harry couldnt think of anyother way to do this so he called silently "Accio Horcrux" Harry jumped at the sound of a thud."Thud,Thud,Thud" continously repeated.Harry worked out the source of the noise.It was the horcrux trying to break his way out of the solid earth.Harry ended his call for the horcrux as a simple thought entered his head "Dumbledores hand".He remembered what happened to dumbledore when he touched the ring,which was like the others a horcrux ,Harry did not want to sustain an injury like that so he had to think around it.Harry decided to walk for a while to clear his thoughts and try and think of a new plan.Harry stumbled upon an old shed in his deep concentration,though the shed looked lifeless it was emitting sounds resembling human voices.
Harry crept closer to the shed and placed his ear against the cold wood."He did the right thing"said one voice."He went against our masters orders"said another""but it was still the right thing to do,the darklords greatest threat is now gone"stammered the first voice."NO, YOU IMPIDENT FOOL OUR MASTERS GREATEST THREAT IS STILL ALIVE!OUR MASTERS GREATEST THREAT IS THAT FOOL POTTER!!"screamed the second voice,Harry noticed that the second voice seemed to be female,he could not tell before as the voices were nothing but whispers.Harry jumped and let out a cry as he heard a loud *CRACK* one of the people inside that shed his dissaparated but another one of them was still inside and harry whipped out his wand incase his cry had been heard.
The shed door burst open an Harry stood as still as possible to wait for what was coming coming round the corner to the side of the shed.A hooded figure appeared out from the corner and Harry did not hesitate.Harry bellowed "CRUCIO" to the hooded woman,though Harry knew that this was a feeble attempt but he wanted to know who it was."Harry ,Harry ,Harry laughed the woman i have told you before you must feel the curse and feel the hate."i know that, but i like to know who my victim is before i end their life!"roared Harry,he was sure the hate he was feeling would surely be enough to do a considerable amount of damage to Bellatrix."CRUCIO"roared Harry again , he was feeding all his anger into the curse and it seemed to be working.She laye there on the floor moving around as though she was having some sort of fit and Harry stopped he knew what to do.

kind of a cliff hanger that am leaving you all on!!heh

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damn i hate cliff hangers!! but i will live!!
anyway its great. post more soon!!!!

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Oct 31st, 2005 01:49 PM

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(Continuing on from last time)

Harry knew what to do.Harry knew that this woman had tortured a friends parents into insanity and although they lived their lifes were pointless.Harry knew she must pay ,Harry was not a cold blooded killer but this woman had to pay "Avada Kedavra" muttered Harry.She lay there on the ground lifeless .Harry didnt take satisfaction from what he had done but he knew he was right to do it.

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Chapter 8 Unexpected

Bellatrix was dead,that was one less worry for Harry.Harry had to get on with what he was supposed to do and this was to get the horcrux.Harry walked once again towards Tom Riddles grave trying to think how to get the horcrux without sustaining an injury.Harry decided that taking a look inside that little shed might help his attempt so he set off again , ignoring the impulse to lay down and rest.

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more more more

Nov 1st, 2005 09:48 PM

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Harry reached the small shed.He walked as before to the side of the shed and listened to see if their was any voices.Harry waited for atleast five minutes before attempting to enter.Upon walking inside the shed it appeared to be nothing more than that, a shed but Harry knew better.Harry spotted a slightly rusted shuvel on the floor,He thought it might have been some use to him so he picked it up.Curious he was though to find out what was really hidden,Harry said clearly"Revelar"and he noticed the shed begin to change.The walls seemed to part to reveal large decorated ceilings.It was not a shed at all, it was a hiding place of Voldemorts whereabouts.Harry looked along the detailed walls and noticed that every door in the place had no handle or lock,instead on each of the doors was a snake with green gems in each eye.Harry thought how clever this was , this place was merely the entrance and behind each door Harry was sure it was something of importance though he knew that there was not Horcrux in this building.Harry knew that Voldemort had put the snakes on the doors as the way to enter each room,smart in one way but stupid in another.It was smart as it meant that only voldemort could enter each room and decide who goes in with him but stupid as Voldemorts ,now biggest threat could open each door.Harry did not want to take a chance of stumbling upon voldemort himself or even a group of death eaters,dementors , whatever lay behind those doors Harry didnt want to see ,atleast not yet.

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i like it keep going

Nov 2nd, 2005 11:41 PM

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Harry trudged out of the shed quietly, he was very tired but alert and on edge.He had decided to get this over with as fast as possible and hurried back to the grave.Harry still had the shuvel he took from the shed/mansion,he had decided that the best way was the muggle way,by hand.It didnt take as long as Harry expected to reach the coffin of Tom Riddle,though this didnt make the experience any more enjoyable.Harry noticed that their was already a hole inside the coffin,this was from the resurection of Voldemort not so long ago.
The door was removed with a quick wave of Harrys wand but what lay their was not bones or remains it was something which was strangely very familiar to Harry.
The coffin seemed bottomless,filled with the substance Harry had seen in Dumbledores office and in Snapes, although Harry abruptly stopped thinking about Hogwarts as the memories pained him to much.There was one main difference between the substance he had seen in Pensieve was the colour,Dumbledores pensieve was a white non liquid non gas non solid substance.Voldemorts was a shimmering pink, which by the least surprised Harry.
Harry first stirred the substance with his wand for no reason he could think of.He then plunged his face fast into the pink filled coffin.The surroundings began to spin faster and faster but eventually began to slow until it stopped.Harry was standing in a city surrounded by so many people he did not know which one was voldemort.Harry began to move, or atleast it seemed.He was not moving his feet though he was moving along gliding,he knew it must be because the person in the memory was moving also and Harry could not leave or remain in places which arent in a persons memory.He stopped moving in a dark alley,the large crowd of people had died down to one person and this surprised Harry very much, he had expected Voldemort but that was not who he saw instead he came upon a young woman who was not in the slightest attractive.She did not look very intelligent,she seemed to be pregnant.Harry wondered why a young pregnant woman would be in a dark alley,Harry didnt have much time to wonder as she walked forward and pulled out a very short,stubby and badly kept wand and pointed to a brick on one of the walls.
A large sign appeared on the wall"Madam Ferdellay Rare Seer"

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Nov 6th, 2005 01:54 AM

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Harry walked with the woman through a door which had appeared under the sign.Upon entering Harry recognised a strong putrid smell,one which was almost exactly the same as the scent which usually filled Harrys divination classes.

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