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Coldfire
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Dante Vlada
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Hey guys and gals I know this next poem is just shy of being crap, but It's what came to me lastnight. The muse for it is this girl I met Saturday. I still can't stop thinking about her. lol

A Single Cigarette


I met you in the midst of my sorrow
Not sure I wanted to see tomorrow
But you found me and knew just what to say
And to think we were complete strangers yesterday
We talked and laughed like the best of friends
My only regret was that our time together had to end
I hope you know you are that someone I will never forget
Pity that all I have to remember you by is a single cigarette

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Coldfire
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yeah I'll admit it's not one of your best poems lol, but the sentiment is there happy


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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
yeah I'll admit it's not one of your best poems lol, but the sentiment is there happy

laughing

Well, her name is Megan and I still can't stop thinking about her!!! eek!

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Coldfire
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Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
laughing

Well, her name is Megan and I still can't stop thinking about her!!! eek!

Awww well that's great! big grin


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Dante Vlada
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I am working on something and i know its going to be good

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T.V.O.T.I.-
I love your poems!


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Dante Vlada
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Originally posted by Violet_Byatch
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I love your poems!

I dont have a valentine either

Old Post Feb 13th, 2006 10:43 PM
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Coldfire
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Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I dont have a valentine either

awww you didn't? sad I miss you! How you been??


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Dante Vlada
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I have been fecking great!! I met this awesome chica, Meagan aka (my) kinky twinky. I wrote this poem about her.


center]I Can Still Feel You
(Dedicated To Meagan aka Kinky Twinky)


In a moment months ago from today
You felt a strong connection towards me
I have to admit in that same moment
I felt a connection to you also
But for whatever reason,
There were things left unsaid

(I can still feel you)

In a moment weeks after that fateful day
What we felt then was still there for all to see
The smile you brought to my face I'll never forget
I hope that this feeling will not ever have to go
But for now I'll just pray that
Never again will we leave things unsaid

(Because I can still feel you)

In a moment hours later in this day
I knew how I would wish it to always be
You and I together feeling no regret
Finally finding that someone who completes us so
But only time will tell,
Just how much of our story is left unsaid

(Because I can still feel you,
And it brings a tear to my eye)[center]

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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I have been fecking great!! I met this awesome chica, Meagan aka (my) kinky twinky. I wrote this poem about her.


center]I Can Still Feel You
(Dedicated To Meagan aka Kinky Twinky)


In a moment months ago from today
You felt a strong connection towards me
I have to admit in that same moment
I felt a connection to you also
But for whatever reason,
There were things left unsaid

(I can still feel you)

In a moment weeks after that fateful day
What we felt then was still there for all to see
The smile you brought to my face I'll never forget
I hope that this feeling will not ever have to go
But for now I'll just pray that
Never again will we leave things unsaid

(Because I can still feel you)

In a moment hours later in this day
I knew how I would wish it to always be
You and I together feeling no regret
Finally finding that someone who completes us so
But only time will tell,
Just how much of our story is left unsaid

(Because I can still feel you,
And it brings a tear to my eye)[center]

I'm so glad to hear that!!! big grin

And nice poem happy


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Dante Vlada
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I think you are the only one who's happy for me.

Old Post Mar 1st, 2006 02:29 PM
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Coldfire
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Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I think you are the only one who's happy for me.

why would I be the only one hun?


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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
why would I be the only one hun?

most of my friends are girls thats why



Just Believe

You tear away at pieces of your heart
Still the sorrow you hold inside lingers unchanged
Over and over you have fallen in darkness

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

There have been times when you tried to believe
Only to have your faith and trust betrayed
And here I am trying to convince you otherwise

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

I know my words may be too little too late
But I want your soul to see the beauty in this world
All that's needed is the willingness of your heart

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

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Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Dante Vlada
most of my friends are girls thats why



Just Believe

You tear away at pieces of your heart
Still the sorrow you hold inside lingers unchanged
Over and over you have fallen in darkness

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

There have been times when you tried to believe
Only to have your faith and trust betrayed
And here I am trying to convince you otherwise

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

I know my words may be too little too late
But I want your soul to see the beauty in this world
All that's needed is the willingness of your heart

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

Oh I see lol


Very nice poem happy


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Dante Vlada
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thanks

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Dante Vlada
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"...he was born into this world with the hope that,
he would find that which he desired most..."


Here I Stand

Here I stand once again with my reflection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
I am amazed at the changes I promised myself I would make
Surprised at how I've yet to make any attempt to fulfill them

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand once again with my relfection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
For so I have remained motionless without any conviction
I can't allow the remnants of my soul to wither away and die

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand...Unchanged.

Old Post Mar 6th, 2006 05:15 PM
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Dante Vlada
"...he was born into this world with the hope that,
he would find that which he desired most..."


Here I Stand

Here I stand once again with my reflection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
I am amazed at the changes I promised myself I would make
Surprised at how I've yet to make any attempt to fulfill them

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand once again with my relfection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
For so I have remained motionless without any conviction
I can't allow the remnants of my soul to wither away and die

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand...Unchanged.

Wow. It's great yes

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that last one, fascinating...

i love it!


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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by _Sanctuary_
Wow. It's great yes

thats an interesting sig quote you have
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Lovely Murder
that last one, fascinating...

i love it!

well it's just an insight into where I am in my life

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