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Takiko_4ever
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My Made Poems

Why do you think of my poem...
~You may also add yours if yal ppl want!
feel free to!


~Haiku
Haiku is a type of japanese type of poem...
written in 5-7-5...and it has to do with nature...


To see the high sky
and below the ocean sea
i lie within both

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Gothlybeautiful
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I like it

heres a poem od mine..

~Anyone~

Does anyone ever notice all the pain around them
The girl crying under the bleachers at a football game
The parents outliving their children
The lovers forever seperate
The friends forver gone
The child holding his raggedy, grimy teddy bear in the middle of the ruins of his Lousiana house calling for "Mommy"

Does anyone else feel the pain surrounding us
Feel the walls closing in as another joy is lost
Feel the sky come crashing down around someone
Feel the sadness behind the giddy smiles
Or the loneliness behind the quaterback's eyes

Our world is filled with sorrow and pain
It shows in our everyday world
But too many people block it all out
Choosing to live in their happier, controlled world
Choosing their friends and the pain that they feel
And not having to be sympathetic to one from somewhere else

The answer is no
No, no one notices the girl under the bleachers
No one feels the sky come crashing in
No one loves or looses what they don't have to.

It is said that God answers all prayers, but all too often, the answer is no.


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Takiko_4ever
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In the present of light...
there can be no darkness...


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SICK

I'm shivering in cold
I have a cold
I feel the chill
I have the chill
I'm suffering in pain
I am in pain
Oh what can I say
I'm feeling sick


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