Sorry guys. I meant to have the next part up by now, but... well, like Barker said, first week of school = not ready for work load.
However, some good news: I actually do have the next part ready to go, for the most part, but I was thinking about cleaning up the part after that to post that was well, making for a long post... I don't know what I'll do yet; it depends how much free time I have tomorow/this weekend. If all goes well, the next part will be up sometime this weekend.
Thanks. This definitely means a lot coming from Mist PeterGriffin.
As I've read through the posts in this thread, I've seen an incredibly well written fan-fic, undoubtedly one of the best on KMC.
Its seriously incredibly enjoyable.
[BTW: As I look back at the last few pages, I gather you have lost a family member. I am sorry for your loss. ]
Okay, so for this post, we're dropping back in on Snape and Lucius, on the night that Lucius went to Snape's house. (Keep in mind this is several nights before the wedding between Fleur and Bill.)
“My lord, if I may, he’s… hysterical. Beyond help.” As an afterthought, Snape added, “…unfortunately.” His voice remained an unwavering monotone while speaking to his master. Beside him was Lucius Malfoy, who stood with his head down and his cloak wrapped tightly around him. The odd sniffle occasionally escaped from under his hood.
Snape had brought Lucius to Lord Voldemort’s current residence; a small cabin, hardly noticeable to any stray passer-bys, at the edge of a quiet Muggle town.
The two Death Eaters now stood in the small parlor of the old home. Voldemort remained sitting in a throne-like chair he had summoned—the only furniture in the room.
It was still dark outside; the only light came from the fireplace, in which a dying fire cast flickering shadows about the room. An eerie wind whistled outside—remnants of the storm that had been raging over Snape’s own current home.
Voldemort flicked his wand lazily, directing the gesture at Lucius, who had collapsed on the floor in a fit of hysterical sobs. His body snapped upright, hovering several inches above the floor.
The movement was quick and violent. Something inside broke, producing a dull crack that one might hear when they snap a tree branch in half. Lucius screamed in bitter pain, muttering incoherently in a high-pitched tone, as if he were a cowering puppy.
“You say…” began the Dark Lord, “that you managed to escape Azkaban.”
Lucius continued to whimper for several seconds. He didn’t answer.
Voldemort hissed, and raised his wand mere centimeters in the air. Lucius’s body became more rigid, pulling tighter as if he were being squeezed together by an unseen force. A pained gasp escaped his lips.
This time, he spoke. “Y-y-yes, my lord. O-o-only a few hours ago.” (It was still several days until the young Bill Weasley and Fleur Delacour would be married.)
Voldemort’s blood red eyes shown with something like that of renewed interest. “Who else?” he demanded. “Who else escaped?”
Lucius struggled in vain against the invisible force surrounding him. The Dark Lord sneered with contempt and lowered his wand. Lucius fell to the floor in a crumpled heap.
There was a moment of silence. Voldemort glanced into Lucius’s eyes. Almost effortlessly, he sifted through Lucius’s insane thoughts and plucked out what he was searching for.
“Everyone…” murmured Voldemort after a moment, speaking to himself. Lucius attempted to get into an upright position on the ground, in order to nurse the bone that had broken in his arm. Snape dared not move, let alone help the fallen Death Eater.
Suddenly, as if he had just recognized who was lying on the ground before him, Voldemort stood, and then bent down to get a better look at Lucius’s face.
Lucius had managed to prop himself up on his unbroken arm. His face was skewered into an expression of grim pain. Beads of sweat began to form on his forehead. “My lord…” he gasped, “my arm… it’s broken. Please…”
There was silence. Then Voldemort spoke, the faintest hint of a twisted smile creeping into his pale features.
“Do you know what your boy Draco has done, Lucius?”
Lucius groaned, although whether out of physical pain or anxiety of what was to come was uncertain. Again, he didn’t answer.
Voldemort stood up. Only the utmost contempt remained in his eyes as he watched his pitiful servant trembling before him. “He failed me.” The Dark Lord spat out the word ‘failed’ as if it was poisonous. “You’ve been a loyal servant to me for quite some time now. Surely you are aware of what happens when one of my own fails me?”
Lucius’s whimpers became louder, and his body shook. He seemed to be trying to say something. His eyes darted to the side, throwing a helpless look at Snape, bottom lip quivering.
Again, Voldemort bent down to look into the eyes of his servant. His face twisted into an expression of sheer hatred. “I wonder if the boy thought he should follow his father’s lead. After all, you managed to fail me before as well…” he hissed.
Lucius shuddered, as if he had been physically hit. Immediately, he began to plead. “M-m-my lord, I couldn’t… the Ministry came—it was…”
“Crucio.”
Lucius cried out in agony as a thousand white-hot knives were driven into his flesh. His body fell flat onto the ground and twitched fiercely, broken arm lying next to him. “You failed...” Voldemort’s voice was a dangerously low hiss. His eyes were flashing with anger. “and you will be punished for it.”
Lucius moaned between pained sobs. Voldemort stood up. “You know, Lucius…” he said, drawing his wand. “I’m going to kill him, too.”
“N-n-no… NO! PLEASE!” The word was reduced to broken sobs for a moment.
“Avada Kedavra!”
There was a flash of sickly green light, and Lucius Malfoy was dead.
That was...dare I say...better than JK Rowling's writing?
How far along are you within the story? As a guide to see how much more is left...less or more than half? Its fecking good The 7th book had better top this