KillerMovies - Movies That Matter!

REGISTER HERE TO JOIN IN! - It's easy and it's free!
Home » Misc » Artwork Forum » Poetry Corner » peotry by the "b"

peotry by the "b"
Started by: bogen

Forum Jump:
Post New Thread    Post A Reply
Pages (5): [1] 2 3 » ... Last »   Last Thread   Next Thread
Author
Thread
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

Smile peotry by the "b"

ok, enjoy my thread and whats in it.
feel free to give comments and suggestions, i welcome them.

OK, the first of many.

lady midnight comes and visits me.
we talk, we play. until im me

when im me we fight, we battle.
she knows im storng enough to make her rattle
but am i strong enough to let her win
i don't know you tell me?

she comes on rainy days tho te power of three
and makes me feel prehaps i should flee
i thought i knew her, thought i did
but she changes like the wind at sea

she sings me songs, all night long
i don't know why i just hear them ring


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 07:09 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

You do need to work on your spelling and grammar some hmm? smile Otherwise I think it's a pretty good start.


__________________

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 07:17 AM
Coldfire is currently offline Click here to Send Coldfire a Private Message Find more posts by Coldfire Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 07:18 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by bogen
ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother

lol


__________________

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 07:39 AM
Coldfire is currently offline Click here to Send Coldfire a Private Message Find more posts by Coldfire Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

true though, she used to give me a hard time but i think she just gave up, the poor thing


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 07:56 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

the trees are tall
but now it's the mall
we plunder and pilage, and wonder
why it is that the earths falling asunder

we've been trying to fix it
for at least ten times six
though i think i have to say


were getting better, much better at cleaning
but in fifty years time will it have any meaning?


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Dec 24th, 2005 10:07 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

true that, quite true


__________________

Old Post Dec 27th, 2005 05:05 AM
Coldfire is currently offline Click here to Send Coldfire a Private Message Find more posts by Coldfire Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Camille's_Death
Forever lost..lol..lamo!!

Gender: Female
Location: Some where

like your pomes yea spelling and grammer really grammer becuase with out it you wont make sense


__________________
--MATT FEEL BETTER ILL BE COMING TO HANG OUT WITH U SOON!!!

Old Post Dec 27th, 2005 05:10 AM
Camille's_Death is currently offline Click here to Send Camille's_Death a Private Message Find more posts by Camille's_Death Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

im so sick of all the lies, of all the politics that i despice
all i want is the truth
it's simple, it's easy
it's better than all the shezy that makes me quezy.

im done


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 13th, 2006 08:47 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Roulette
Freak

Gender: Female
Location: Arkham Asylum

good job on your poems, I liked emthumb up^-^


__________________

Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.

Old Post Jan 13th, 2006 02:26 PM
Roulette is currently offline Click here to Send Roulette a Private Message Find more posts by Roulette Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

why thank you, but i think im outa steam for poetry.writers block is killing me badly.

coolspark i.e. coldfire HELP!!!


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 14th, 2006 06:23 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Roulette
Freak

Gender: Female
Location: Arkham Asylum

no problamo^-^

lol...dw bout it..happens to a lot of writerssmile


__________________

Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.

Old Post Jan 14th, 2006 08:39 AM
Roulette is currently offline Click here to Send Roulette a Private Message Find more posts by Roulette Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

so damn anoying everynight i get these great one linners, like really good rymes that i know i should post but never do.
and sometimes i get ideas for a huge saga poem like 1000 words long.
i just wish i could follow through on my ideas


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 14th, 2006 03:32 PM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
~Forever*Alone~
Empress

Gender: Female
Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere

omg im like that too!!! i think about a great poem right when im falling asleep... it really sucks...

great poems, some were even awsome. i enjoyed that


__________________

does this work?

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 04:07 AM
~Forever*Alone~ is currently offline Click here to Send ~Forever*Alone~ a Private Message Find more posts by ~Forever*Alone~ Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

i thinks it's funny but SO sad at the same time im like, MY GENIOUS IS WASTING AWAY!!!! mums like " wat genious!??!"


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 05:20 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
~Forever*Alone~
Empress

Gender: Female
Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere

lol


__________________

does this work?

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 05:35 AM
~Forever*Alone~ is currently offline Click here to Send ~Forever*Alone~ a Private Message Find more posts by ~Forever*Alone~ Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak


it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold


i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 05:40 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by bogen
why thank you, but i think im outa steam for poetry.writers block is killing me badly.

coolspark i.e. coldfire HELP!!!

I would, but I have some writer's block myself *sigh* erm
quote: (post)
Originally posted by bogen
so damn anoying everynight i get these great one linners, like really good rymes that i know i should post but never do.
and sometimes i get ideas for a huge saga poem like 1000 words long.
i just wish i could follow through on my ideas

Awww poor you
quote: (post)
Originally posted by bogen
i thinks it's funny but SO sad at the same time im like, MY GENIOUS IS WASTING AWAY!!!! mums like " wat genious!??!"

lol stick out tongue


__________________

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 05:40 AM
Coldfire is currently offline Click here to Send Coldfire a Private Message Find more posts by Coldfire Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
bogen
Senior Member

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

ya poor me


__________________

Facebook
Cheers starlock, your a champ. wink

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 06:21 AM
bogen is currently offline Click here to Send bogen a Private Message Find more posts by bogen Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
Roulette
Freak

Gender: Female
Location: Arkham Asylum

quote: (post)
Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak


it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold


i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you



wow, great job on that...I really loved itthumb up


__________________

Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.

Old Post Jan 15th, 2006 06:26 AM
Roulette is currently offline Click here to Send Roulette a Private Message Find more posts by Roulette Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote Quick Quote
All times are UTC. The time now is 09:40 AM.
Pages (5): [1] 2 3 » ... Last »   Last Thread   Next Thread

Home » Misc » Artwork Forum » Poetry Corner » peotry by the "b"

Email this Page
Subscribe to this Thread
   Post New Thread  Post A Reply

Forum Jump:
Search by user:
 

Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is OFF
vB code is ON
Smilies are ON
[IMG] code is ON

Text-only version
 

< - KillerMovies.com - Forum Archive - Forum Rules >


© Copyright 2000-2006, KillerMovies.com. All Rights Reserved.
Powered by: vBulletin, copyright ©2000-2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Limited.