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Coldfire
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Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak


it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold


i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you

omg you posted at the same time so I didn't see this LOL!

it's good... but the rhyming scheme kind of stops at this:

hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind

makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak

and then continues on after that... dunno if that was intentional or not lol


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all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion


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hmm, outa ideas.
oh oh!, read this book IRELAND a novel, frank delany.
it describes the irish tale of the beginings of poetry. it's quet good.


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WOOOT GO BOGEN WOOT WOOT


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THANK YOU big grin


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its cool ...i gots a giant wagon wheel he he


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Originally posted by bogen
all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion

As long as you like it, nothing else really matters happy


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some very interesting stuff here.... big grin


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thank you! big grin


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more! big grin


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can do! big grin, just give me a mo.


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omg I haven't talked to you in forever! How ya been???


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im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day. big grin


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im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day. big grin

What?!?! Awww that sucks sad


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might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite


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might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite

I hope so! happy


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wow, intence avi CF, i likes it!, ^.^


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ok, news for all my fans, iv'e got something good in the making


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bogen your poetry or should i say peotry is pretty good, but watch your spelling, and oh ya guess who this is smile smile smile smile

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oh, hey man. that was intentional! so if some1 seached "poetry" i wouldn't get heaps of n00bs


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