Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind
makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak
it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold
i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you
omg you posted at the same time so I didn't see this LOL!
it's good... but the rhyming scheme kind of stops at this:
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind
makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak
and then continues on after that... dunno if that was intentional or not lol
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Jan 16th, 2006 05:31 AM
bogen
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all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion
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Jan 16th, 2006 07:14 AM
bogen
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hmm, outa ideas.
oh oh!, read this book IRELAND a novel, frank delany.
it describes the irish tale of the beginings of poetry. it's quet good.
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Jan 17th, 2006 08:17 AM
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WOOOT GO BOGEN WOOT WOOT
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Jan 17th, 2006 09:37 AM
bogen
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THANK YOU
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Jan 17th, 2006 09:47 AM
black_rock
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its cool ...i gots a giant wagon wheel he he
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Jan 17th, 2006 09:49 AM
Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
all in the plan, sok though i like it.
thanks for ya opinion
As long as you like it, nothing else really matters
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Jan 17th, 2006 08:12 PM
~Forever*Alone~
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some very interesting stuff here....
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Jan 18th, 2006 04:24 AM
bogen
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thank you!
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Jan 20th, 2006 11:12 AM
Coldfire
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more!
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Jan 24th, 2006 06:38 AM
bogen
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can do! , just give me a mo.
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Feb 1st, 2006 02:38 AM
Coldfire
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omg I haven't talked to you in forever! How ya been???
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Feb 1st, 2006 04:55 AM
bogen
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im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day.
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Feb 6th, 2006 02:52 AM
Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
im gud!, got disconnected from home, (DAMN NETWORK CARD!) so im back at school and posting from school so i might be a bit slow replying.
im still trying to keep my good name up with like 2 posts a day.
What?!?! Awww that sucks
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Feb 6th, 2006 04:57 PM
bogen
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might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite
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Feb 6th, 2006 09:25 PM
Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
might be bak now, as soon as i replyed i went home and hasseled my mum so things might get better.
ill chat to you tonite
I hope so!
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Feb 7th, 2006 05:32 AM
bogen
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wow, intence avi CF, i likes it!, ^.^
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Feb 7th, 2006 10:45 AM
bogen
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ok, news for all my fans, iv'e got something good in the making
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Feb 12th, 2006 09:26 PM
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bogen your poetry or should i say peotry is pretty good, but watch your spelling, and oh ya guess who this is
Feb 17th, 2006 06:24 AM
bogen
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oh, hey man. that was intentional! so if some1 seached "poetry" i wouldn't get heaps of n00bs
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Feb 17th, 2006 11:13 AM
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