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sammii
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 potter poem
please choose if any one want to continue feel free i may be adding more posts if people like it or you can request a poem topic
Harry potter poetry
Harry potter grew up a young lad
His life with the Dursleys was very sad
When Hagrid told him he was a wizard
His mind was raging like a blizzard
He then boarded the Hogwarts express
Thinking about the Dursleys less n less
He met a red haired boy called Ron
They were best mates from then on
In boats they sailed across the lake
Ahead of them stood a castle
It was Hogwarts no mistake
Then came a girl called Hermione (with very bushy hair)
She was very clever
It just didn’t seem fair
They befriended her however
There was a horrible slytherin, Draco
Who Harry did not like
There was something about Draco, he did not know
So he told him to take a hike
Many more adventures were on there way
Each getting better by the day
They had discovered a three headed dog (fluffy)
I did not think he was lovely
They then discovered it was guarding a trap door
And so they went to explore
It was guarding the philosopher’s stone
The reason why was unknown
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~*LoverGirl21*~
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this poem is good
did u write it?
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Dec 29th, 2005 12:06 AM |
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sammii
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yeh add more on if ya want
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KruelKween
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vury good 
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Dec 30th, 2005 09:42 PM |
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paliwal_ruppal
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nice poem!really 
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Jan 1st, 2006 04:24 PM |
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sammii
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so down they went through the trap door
they had never done any thing like this before
the dog was enchanted to fall asleep
down they crept without a peep
they fell into some devil,s snare
Hermione shouted"you have to relax"
as the snare was tightening round their backs
finally they were free, even more prepared
then came the giant chess board
looks like ere gonna hvto play Ron roared
the game was over
ron had hurt his shoulder
so on harry went to do it alone
thru the next door he could hear a moan
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Jan 1st, 2006 06:25 PM |
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~*LoverGirl21*~
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there in the middle stood a man
were a very big mirror stood in front
then came a pain in his scar
that only ment one thing
the dark lord wasn't very far
but how could it be that the person
in front of him wasn't what he had expected indeed
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Jan 3rd, 2006 01:45 AM |
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sammii
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wow mint
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Jan 3rd, 2006 08:00 PM |
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Diamonds
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Great!! The ryming was good, the whole thing was good. It could be improved, but there are no real areas.
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Jan 3rd, 2006 09:02 PM |
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sammii
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cheers m8
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