weapons :a long sored((likes inuyasha but has no powers)) and her moter cycle
magic: ?????
mother- liveing
father-liveimg
looks : up louded
bio- camille was biten at the age of 6 by her father . her gramother was killed when camille turn 9 her father hates her and blams her for the gramothers death. camille dosnt talk much since her gramother died her mother and father had moved away leaveing her be hind. camille looks like she is vary weak but she can kick butt if you get on her bad side. camille's mom was human and her dad vampier some how she turned out human till she got bitten . camille oways in allys and other places she carrys her big lomg sord on her shoulder to her it is vary light but to others its like trying to pick up a bilding.
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Last edited by Camille's_Death on Jan 8th, 2006 at 02:54 AM
camille, sword is not spelled sored. I would like to use proper word instead of replace ment words. plez and thanx and any other words like that is fine when your talking to another person, not character. and try not to do
camile:
camile:
just write it like everyone else.
Camile was wandering around the forrest. She unfortunatly got lost while trying to reach the La Naan castle. "Where am I?" she said to herself.
^ that would be fine. or if you want to do it like me,
Duzzie was sucking on a tomatoe, when he heard Ishtar say something.
* I can't hear whats she's saying* he thought.
I left a space between my characters thoughts.
and....use quotations("")when character is thinking, periods(.), commas(,), question marks(?), exclamation marks (!)
and if you want, Leo, you can put, example:
Kage walked down a dark alley. [He saw] instead of Kage saw in each new sentance. I'm not telling you too, it's a suggestion.
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Last edited by Tatsumaki on Jan 8th, 2006 at 07:42 PM
Not as big. Rember, this is medival times, not a lot of huge ginormus swords. Make it maybe....half the size in width and length, considering how ginormus that sword is.