Hi, i just read your story. I'd have to agree with the others on the first few bits, but your writing has really improved Still, you might want to doublecheck your punctuation and stuff. Nice work!
if the winner is death eaters and i'm not making assumptions,
it wouldn't be rushing it because harry is no loger protected
a death eater could just walk right up to him and try to kill him
harry is no longer protected ,
dumbledores dead ,
since harry wont help the MoM they wont protect him,
he's no loger safe a hogwarts
he's not at the dursleys and he'l never go back(without a good reason)
so voldemort dosen't have to make long plans that never work insted he could just kill him off the spot
Last edited by biggesthpfan on Feb 21st, 2006 at 05:09 AM
i'm writting the next several chapters right now in the direction of what is winning in the polls
if some maricle happens and the winner changes then i'll re write it all over
also please state your opions good or bad, make coversation, predictions, and therys. i mean, i didn't start this forum for just a story, don't be shy go on
Last edited by biggesthpfan on Feb 25th, 2006 at 01:46 AM
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