well looks like you followed the tut pretty close nit, u can try brushing a bit around above the picked layers, and try just plain taking the render, and pick filtering it, and erasing him for the majority, only leaving it around his edges, also take the color picker and pick out a fairly comon or just random color that u think looks good with the sig and use that for text, it helps not take attention off of things
first the black takes focus off the render, and the burshing over the render doesnt look very good either, the mnotone color through out his body not very good by my opinion either sorry lol and try adding light sources in
I like it, but these areas don't fit in so well. You could darken them, maybe? To me, it looks as if the sig is in sections, and they all look detached from each other with the white lines. I think the edges of some of the 'sections' - the bit with the man in and the bottom middle part - could be motion or gaussian blurred to blend them. The text would look better in a reddish colour. It's a good sig, and I like the spotlight whatsits.
It's huge? Great concept tho, I guess it's just a bit too big for my style. Lmfao this is coming from me wow. These were my first sigs ever!!!
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Pretty big aren't they?
And now one of my first sigs in a couple of months. Don't ask why it is black and white, it just looks really bad coloured( and NO! that is not a racist comment, immature little gremlings).