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Darkness~Calls
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Im in the process of writing more so yeah
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 24th, 2006 09:17 PM |
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Midnight109
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Hey, Darkness, could you reply to my PM? You haven't replied yet! 
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Previously Hermione202 and Midnight_Miss
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Apr 24th, 2006 11:02 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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What PM?
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 24th, 2006 11:31 PM |
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xEsaulx
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Interesting. Highly interesting. Curious though why you've decided to make it a twin brother. A bigger twist would have been saying that it was someone who drank a polyjuice potion, saying that he tried to sway him out of it but he wouldn't listen. Or even since Dumbledore's the strongest wizard alive, he could have done some sort of fancy spell that made a mirror image of him.
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Apr 24th, 2006 11:47 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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Well i was trying to say that even though he is the most powerful wizard in there world pretty much he still has family and is one of the most important figures in the war that is going on. By the way i am in the process of closing this story and not writing anymore im going to post it somewhere else or just write it for fun and not online or anything. Thanks for reading
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 25th, 2006 12:08 AM |
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xEsaulx
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I won't let you.
Don't be like me. I have quit my fanfics.
Maybe you could start over?
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Apr 25th, 2006 12:11 AM |
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Darkness~Calls
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Sorry buddy i dont think people want to read this an dif they do wel...thats sad ill tell you all where you can read it if you want
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 25th, 2006 01:04 AM |
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Darkness~Calls
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Who would like me to post one last time? and if you like it keep it on KMC?
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 26th, 2006 11:25 PM |
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xEsaulx
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ME ME ME
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Apr 26th, 2006 11:27 PM |
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ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Huh...What¿?¿?
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Apr 26th, 2006 11:31 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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Ok i will post tmrw. I would tonight but i just had a root canal done and i am on some pain killers cause THE PAIN IS KILLING ME..lol anywya tmrw
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Apr 27th, 2006 12:28 AM |
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Darkness~Calls
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ok yeah its not tmrw i have been blocked out of the creative part of my mind that has this story in it ill post soon
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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May 2nd, 2006 04:14 PM |
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PotterMadness
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the part you wrote about dumboldore comting back alive i think was a little cheesy. but it was still good. as the editor of the school news paper i would take facts on the 6th book. Like who is R.A.B. i think R.A.B is Regulas .A (whatever his middle name stands for) black. because regulas black was a death eater and then he wanted to stop being a death eater. and dumboldore. dumboldore in the first book it mentioned he had sorser powers but he was to noble to use them. and in the sixth book he was the only one who could shut the apperating thing down on hogwarts grounds. and so when he did he could have had a horcrux or used his sorser power to come alive again and apperate out of the coffon. ok that was a loyt to type in 2 min. so i had a lot of spelling errors. so don't kill me for them. LOL, so what i basicaly said ^^^^ was to take facts and clues form the past books and use them in this story. it was just a sugestiion. so u don't have to take it if you don't want to.
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May 15th, 2006 02:21 PM |
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PotterMadness
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god that was a lot to type--LOL
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May 15th, 2006 02:21 PM |
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PotterMadness
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ur story is really good. keep working on it.
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May 15th, 2006 02:22 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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I thik im going to put it onto fanfiction.net
Darkness
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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May 17th, 2006 08:06 PM |
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PotterMadness
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Write some more you are really good. 
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May 25th, 2006 09:42 PM |
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PotterMadness
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write some more
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Jun 5th, 2006 09:32 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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Sorryim grounded until like...friday and then im going to hershey with school Im in school now in tech and i dont want a whole punch of pop princesses seeing what im doing so ill post thsi weekend. Yes i will keep posting on herefor a while but my story kinda sucks need suggestions about the dumbledore thing
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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