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Ritoshi's Poems

Can this be true ?
is this really you ?
the love of my life ?
the girl that's so nice ?

You are so sweet, like ice cream and cake
never enough, but ever so great.
now that I am with you, I forget my past
only thinking of the future, that I hope will last.

No more restless nights
no more sorrow days
only love and joy
that I hope is coming my way.


To the tallest tower
to the tallest castle
on the tallest mountain
where you seemed to lock your heart away

I can't find the key, to unlock your heart
but as I climbed the mountain.
the door fell apart.
I stepped inside and to my surprise
there it was
as if, someone left it there for me.

I will treat your heart with care
never letting anyone harmful near.
don't let the past stop you from opening up with me.
I will always be here
I am not going anywhere.

Even though you live faraway
You don't need to get here today.
there is no rush .
aslong as we have trust.

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awwww love I love it


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awwww love I love it
love

More to come shifty

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eek! I love it!!

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eek! I love it!!
Thanks big grin

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love

More to come shifty

yay Happy Dance


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Awh #blush# cute...and romantic...

Smoooooooooth


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Awh #blush# cute...and romantic...

Smoooooooooth
embarrasment thanks eek!

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your as good at poetry as you are at art!


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Originally posted by Lovely Murder
your as good at poetry as you are at art!


smile
Thanks eek! wait confused my art sucks thanks to Lea drawing to good mad

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Originally posted by Ritoshi
Thanks eek! wait confused my art sucks thanks to Lea drawing to good mad


Practise. stick out tongue

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Thanks eek! wait confused my art sucks thanks to Lea drawing to good mad

Your art doesn't suck no

When are you going to post something else hmm? stick out tongue


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Your art doesn't suck no

When are you going to post something else hmm? stick out tongue
Tomorrow night shifty how about you posting you know what stick out tongue

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Tomorrow night shifty how about you posting you know what stick out tongue

Ooooo lol I'll try and post it tomorrow happy


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Ok, I don't know if it is good or not no expression


You don't have to worry, I mean what I say
I will always be with you, and it will remain that way.
You are the one, the one that set me free
you are the one, the one that will always be.

You are valuable to me, as you can see,
locking you away in my heart
and throwing away the key.

To the others that let you go
to the others that put up a show.
how stupid are you to let that happen
how foolish can you be to let her free,
maybe I should be thankful if it's not to late
thanks to you guys , I now have something great.
This wasn't an accident, this wasn't a mistake
it was meant to be Amber, this is fate.


We have eternity together,
so whats a few more months
before I get to hold you in my arms
and maybe take you out for lunch.

I am now complete, I am now whole
since I found my other half
of my long forgotten soul.

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Aww. Ever sweet. love

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Originally posted by Ritoshi
Ok, I don't know if it is good or not no expression


You don't have to worry, I mean what I say
I will always be with you, and it will remain that way.
You are the one, the one that set me free
you are the one, the one that will always be.

You are valuable to me, as you can see,
locking you away in my heart
and throwing away the key.

To the others that let you go
to the others that put up a show.
how stupid are you to let that happen
how foolish can you be to let her free,
maybe I should be thankful if it's not to late
thanks to you guys , I now have something great.
This wasn't an accident, this wasn't a mistake
it was meant to be Amber, this is fate.


We have eternity together,
so whats a few more months
before I get to hold you in my arms
and maybe take you out for lunch.

I am now complete, I am now whole
since I found my other half
of my long forgotten soul.

Oh. My. Gosh. love I can't think of anything else to say at the moment; I'm speechless, I really am. I love it


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Oh. My. Gosh. love I can't think of anything else to say at the moment; I'm speechless, I really am. I love it
I am glad you like it love ninja

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Originally posted by Ritoshi
I am glad you like it love ninja

I think yours was better than mine love


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