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Coldfire
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Originally posted by Ritoshi
Yes you did, or why else would the poem be good

It's good because we did it together eek!

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Originally posted by Ritoshi
Poem i wrote like just now on DA

As Long as my Love is there

Love that needs no repair, as long as my Ambie Bambie is always there.
When you are there by my side, I look up at the stars and thank God that I am still alive. From your gentle words to your smiling face I wish I was with you now, but that is not the case. Almost there almost there, soon I will be with you and once I am there is no need to fear because my love for you Amber can not compare.

You are the sweetest person I know,
even forgiving those who hurt you so
false love from a lie,
only ended up in pain and made my love now cry
it will never happen again,
because I will make sure to never be like them.
How could I ever lie about loving you,
like the others that left you alone, saying that they were through.
Forget about the past
because my love for you Amber will always last.

Many adventures for us still await, but aslong as I am with you, I know they will be great <3

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aww

ill second that...nice poetry...you two together could be very famous.. big grin

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Thanks

Jun 10th, 2006 01:44 AM

Coldfire
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ill second that...nice poetry...you two together could be very famous..

Aww thankies eek!

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Jun 12th, 2006 05:48 AM

F�anor
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Poem i wrote like just now on DA

As Long as my Love is there

Love that needs no repair, as long as my Ambie Bambie is always there.
When you are there by my side, I look up at the stars and thank God that I am still alive. From your gentle words to your smiling face I wish I was with you now, but that is not the case. Almost there almost there, soon I will be with you and once I am there is no need to fear because my love for you Amber can not compare.

You are the sweetest person I know,
even forgiving those who hurt you so
false love from a lie,
only ended up in pain and made my love now cry
it will never happen again,
because I will make sure to never be like them.
How could I ever lie about loving you,
like the others that left you alone, saying that they were through.
Forget about the past
because my love for you Amber will always last.

Many adventures for us still await, but aslong as I am with you, I know they will be great <3

awwww....that was so sweet, i think i got a cavity stick out tongue

Jun 12th, 2006 08:11 PM

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Coldfire
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awwww....that was so sweet, i think i got a cavity

You're just jealous because you never thought of it first boi stick out tongue

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F�anor
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Originally posted by Coldfire
You're just jealous because you never thought of it first boi

jealous? jealous? riiiiiiiiight! wink

dearly beloved...we are gathered hear
to speculate the obvious of our dear
friend and so lovely lady...
that to all of us is not....a Brady?
but ho! i digress, for lack of a better word
to Ambie Bambie, a beauteous bird.
A bird? My bad...i did not mean to say
or intend that you were such...
for its obvious love is full and much.
For i am a friend, a friend indeed
I will end my prose if you say, "Oh please!"
stick out tongue

Jun 14th, 2006 04:22 PM

Coldfire
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Originally posted by F�anor
jealous? jealous? riiiiiiiiight!

dearly beloved...we are gathered hear
to speculate the obvious of our dear
friend and so lovely lady...
that to all of us is not....a Brady?
but ho! i digress, for lack of a better word
to Ambie Bambie, a beauteous bird.
A bird? My bad...i did not mean to say
or intend that you were such...
for its obvious love is full and much.
For i am a friend, a friend indeed
I will end my prose if you say, "Oh please!"

Aww thankies hun, melikes it hehe

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Last edited by Coldfire on Jun 15th, 2006 at 04:25 AM

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Jun 15th, 2006 06:21 AM

Coldfire
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Originally posted by Ritoshi

Get your butt in gear and write more poems!!! stick out tongue

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It's been awhile ahhh

Aug 7th, 2006 05:16 AM

Coldfire
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It's been awhile ahhh

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Aug 7th, 2006 05:47 AM

A.J
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You write poetry no expression

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Coldfire
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You write poetry

Yeah he does eek!

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I thought you was a real man.

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Coldfire
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I thought you was a real man.

*slaps* Take that back boy

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Aug 7th, 2006 07:36 AM

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I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped

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Coldfire
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I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped

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Originally posted by A.J
I thought you was a real man.

Sit down little boy before you hurt yourself. yes

You are 15 no expression

you can't know what a real man is if you are still a little boy Happy Dance

Aug 7th, 2006 07:58 AM

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Originally posted by SpadeKing
I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped

It wasn't the poem that failed, it was you eek!

Aug 7th, 2006 07:59 AM

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