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Board Walker
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Night Sky

Chaos sprinkled sparks of light sporadically dance in the night, lit only by the interminable glow of the moon.

Flashes of crimson skip across the late summer sky, hues of sapphire wisp in and out of the shadowed trees which façade this ebbing vicinage; fleeting light fades aphotic, as the twinkling of the star vanishes.

The oscillation of this reality unknown, the strings to the world dissolve as all harmony of frequency goes grey, though I perceive color, I do not see it.


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Lattice

Black Lattice hangs from your velvet ensemble, pale buttons stitched to your tainted skin; decorative templates of damnation.

Ashen shades fester within your decaying soul, as all hope trickles from you through the holes devoured by your own parasitic addictions; echoes of the abstruse cling to your heels as whispering silhouettes mingle with your subliminal.

Your tears evanish in place of soot as your sedated demons burn with unassuaged passion, wreathed in a cloak of opacity you are defiled, by none other then the faux smile which lingers in every passing mirror.


Your chains are so very light, do you dance in them?


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Hello simulated programs! Do any of you read any of these? Or is it you already know of everything I think and do since I am constantly watched and monitored.

But know this, all of you who monitor me, that I am going to wake up and when I do I'm going to reach and fulfill my purpose, and their is nothing any of you or anyone or anything can do to stop me.

Yay!


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Awesome poems, good job happy i really liked Night Sky big grin


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~Forever*Alone~
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i would do anything to be able to write like you, anything at all....


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Originally posted by ~Forever*Alone~
i would do anything to be able to write like you, anything at all....


Here's a mad idea...how about, continually practise until you can?

Or was it just crazy and irrational things you'd do to achieve it?


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Ya Krunk'd Floo
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Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
From which sources are you influenced?

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Originally posted by Jesse7
o hmm, well not by any notable human writters if that is what you mean.


Are you influenced by the writings of a lump of cheese that has been blasted into space to live on the Moon? How about a line of rusty forks who meet on Tuesday evenings to write poetry? Did they influence you? Hmm, what about a refridgerator door's hinge that thinks it is a cat who can speak English? Did that influence you?

Nice vocab, by the way. I especially enjoyed 'vicinage'.


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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Syren
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If you don't have anything nice to say, etcetera, etcetera.


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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Are you influenced by the writings of a lump of cheese that has been blasted into space to live on the Moon? How about a line of rusty forks who meet on Tuesday evenings to write poetry? Did they influence you? Hmm, what about a refridgerator door's hinge that thinks it is a cat who can speak English? Did that influence you?

Nice vocab, by the way. I especially enjoyed 'vicinage'.


I some times write about what I see, trees, lights, or blinds moving in the wind, or light sailing through dust.

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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Are you influenced by the writings of a lump of cheese that has been blasted into space to live on the Moon? How about a line of rusty forks who meet on Tuesday evenings to write poetry? Did they influence you? Hmm, what about a refridgerator door's hinge that thinks it is a cat who can speak English? Did that influence you?

Nice vocab, by the way. I especially enjoyed 'vicinage'.


I am not influenced by many, the One I am influenced by He is not human.

Their is one other, many of my wirittings have been influenced by this one in one way or another, the name of this one is Kitty Mach.

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Ya Krunk'd Floo
Moving with the swell.

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Originally posted by Syren
If you don't have anything nice to say, etcetera, etcetera.


Ooo, I love it when you ride high and brain-fart!

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Originally posted by Jesse7
I some times write about what I see, trees, lights, or blinds moving in the wind, or light sailing through dust.


I didn't ask what you write about.

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Originally posted by Jesse7
I am not influenced by many, the One I am influenced by He is not human.


Are you talking about Lord Ganesh The Elephant-Headed King?

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Their is one other, many of my wirittings have been influenced by this one in one way or another, the name of this one is Kitty Mach.


Is Kitty Mach like an invisible friend or something?


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Are you influenced by the writings of a lump of cheese that has been blasted into space to live on the Moon? How about a line of rusty forks who meet on Tuesday evenings to write poetry? Did they influence you? Hmm, what about a refridgerator door's hinge that thinks it is a cat who can speak English? Did that influence you?

Nice vocab, by the way. I especially enjoyed 'vicinage'.
hey....i feel cheated. i was looking for vicinage.

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~Forever*Alone~
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Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
Here's a mad idea...how about, continually practise until you can?

Or was it just crazy and irrational things you'd do to achieve it?


i write all the time, and im taking a writing class, but it doesnt seem to be helping....


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If you are all but pieces of a dream, would it be wrong to end the dream and thus end the figments of the dream?


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