two things
1) great, idea
2)i was wondering if you were think of having it illustrated at least at first because i think that would great idea and i would love to try
__________________ There was no doubt in Ender's mind. There was no
help for him. Whatever he faced, now and forever,
no one would save him from it. Peter might be
scum, but Peter had been right, always right; the
power to cause pain is the only power that
matters, the power to kill and destroy, because if
you can't kill you are always subject to those who
can, and nothing no one will ever save you.
i can't wait for the new scripts!!!! i was thinking about doing a new one, that i am trying to write and i thought that one of 3 things could happen if not all of them. 1) the cure kills all of the mutants who took the cure, except a few of the really strong ones, or the ones who didn't get the full dose. 2) since the government can't control the mutants anymore they bring out the sentials, or the government goes and has a big debate in which the government still uses the "cure" on the mutants who break any laws. 3) the real war happens when all mutants gang up on the government and fight for their rightss to live.
tell me what you'll think of these ideas. but i might keep my original begining and just change a couple of things.
the cure one is okay, like in the one i'm writing atm in parrale with the other one i'm postin i'm using the cure as a basis for the legacy virus, the one i'm using atm hast the sentinels nad there is a huge twist at the end!
As the narration goes on the camera weaves from the insides of a sentinel and ends up outside the eye: the camera backs away to show a fogged yet distinct figure of the sentinel's face, which is very robotic yet human like
Ororo Munroe--The Dream: hope, faith, optimism, anticipation… It is that thing burning in each of us, deep down in every soul; that thing we hold dear to our hearts giving us a reason to live on. It has sanctioned us to endure and thrive with every breath in our body. But if this dream is not fulfilled, we will not evolve. So we must fulfill, we must believe, and we must achieve… The Dream.
-In the evening four armed mecenaries approach a snowed over bar with a full lot, inside is buzzing- the howling men are being served with a sexy striptease in the center of the room. By the bar a rugged blonde man sits looking on-
Bar tender: 'nother one Creed?
Creed (Sabretooth): rrr
-He pours a tall glass and sets it infornt of him and goes about straigting up the bar-In the background a mercenary can be seen, he signals and another runs past-Sabretooth's ear is zoomed in upon and then he sniffs the air-He gets up and makes his way to the bathroom, but in a split second snatches up one of the hiding mercenaries by the throat
Creed: *sniff* -and with a growl- American!
Mercenary 1: drop him -aiming at creed-
-The man is suffocating and Sabretooth launches him at the mercenary the other two file in and everyone runs out-In the commotion Sabretooth attacks the next mercenary snapping his neck, the other fires, but Sabretooth still charges and launches his claws into his stomach pinning him up to the wall and drops him. A mercenary begins to fire from the inner doorway. He leaps onto the last mercenary who fires at Sabretooth. He grabs it and points the gun up. The shots weaken the beam above and when Sabretooth smashes the guard into the door side the beam breaks and the pieces fall and knock him out. A (silhouetted) man walks in from the main entrance, and looks upon Sabretooth.
Mystery man: well, well
__________________ Ideas, are the sole things driving humanity.
well technically us as viewers can't be sure, and i doubt being blasted by Cyclops off the statue of liberty would kill Sabretooth, such as how Logan's stab hadn't killed Mystique, and she can't even heal like Sabretooth
__________________ Ideas, are the sole things driving humanity.
-In Dr. Moira McTaggert's medical facility Charles lies motionless on the bed as Moira is moving a handheld scanner over various parts of his body and checking a screen (diagram of the comatose body) behind her to see if there's any sign of activity. The screen isn't showing much activity except for the head and chest are. She sighs in dissapointment. She rests the scanner on the side table and goes to shut off the computer when Charle's diagram fluctuates between reds and oranges. (blues and greens-no muscle activity + oranges and reds-activity)
Moira: Charles?
-Charles begins to move and sits up. He turns and as he makes his way off the bed Moira rushes to his side to help him sit up.
Charles: I’m fine… the T.V.
-Puzzled she leads him to another room and turns it on, she brings him the remote
Moira: what is it?
-Charles turns on the T.V. and the news comes on
Reporter: We’re live through a satellite connection of Senator Graydon Creed who will address Irish senator Tom Cassidy in New York on the mutant crisis…
Moira: oh dear
Senator Creed: … We’ve been living in fear for too long… humanity has been very patient with these people, but now it is of absolute emergency that we come together and figure a way to ensure our survival. People!… they have made it clear, on more than many occasions… that they are hear not to coincide, but to seize control of our society and everything our forefathers have worked so hard to establish… <crowd cheers>
Moira: Charles?
Charles: (in deep thought) Moira, (whisper) what happened?... the mansion, I need to get back…
At the Mansion
-The halls are emptying as students are making their way to their first class after a long summer break, Ororo notices Jimmy (Leech) looking onto a reflective vase at patches of his skin that becoming slightly green
Ororo: You look fine
Jimmy looks at her with uncertainty
Ororo: ... so you ready for your first day
-Jimmy shrugs and hands her his schedule, she places her hand over his shoulder and they walk down the hall
Ororo: you have art, with Mr. Rasputin, you like art
Jimmy: I never had art before
Ororo: well I hear it is very fun
-The two come to the door and she holds it open for him, he hesitates
Ororo: come on
Jimmy: what if they don’t… you know, like me?
Ororo: and why wouldn’t they like you?
Jimmy: well, I’m different
Ororo: Jimmy, we’re all different…
-She bends down to his level
Ororo: here you don’t have to worry about being judged, we’re all different and that’s what makes us special, now get in there and I want to see you smiling the next time I see you
-She flicks his nose and he smiles and walks into the class, Ororo leans in and smiles at Mr. Rasputin (Colossus) who’s in the front of the class with an easel
-As Ororo rears the corner Logan (with cigar) hurries down the stairs she looks at him and folds her hands
Logan: what you gonna put me in detention for running down the stairs
Ororo: Logan, where are you going?
Logan: why?
Ororo: the interview?
Logan has no clue what she’s talking about
Ororo: with Emma Frost Logan… in 20 minutes
Logan: yeah, I’ll be back, just gotta take care of a few things
-He runs out of the mansion
__________________ Ideas, are the sole things driving humanity.
i love marko's script but i do see one problem, why is mystique with magneto,she was pissed off at him in x3,and told the government agents all about him, other than that awsome script love it.i would like it if you could add BLOB,and AVALANCHE, for the brotherhood and maybe cameo or add BEAK, HUSK,and CHAMBER.they are very cool characters thanks man cant wait to read the rest of your story.
jdea's script is also very good i hope they make a x4 and x5 together it would be more screen time for the actors, and more action, characters, and etc for us the fans im lovin the scripts
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