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twiggyramirexmm
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Gender: Female Location: Canada |
this is more of a song then a poem.. but plz rate!
Transparency Plague
Crying figure in the streets
Holding out her hand
To someone who'll care
Someone who'll be there
To help her cope
But no one can hear her
Her cries for help
She's a nobody to them
No one even see's her
If god made me
why do they hate me?
Am I infected by the disease?
Down, I am, on begging knees
Praying for him to lift
The plague of transparency
How can they leave her lying in the streets?
Seeing through her as it seems
She holds the blade above her wrists
But no seems to notice
Would she be missed
Or just another lost soul
Dead among the living
Writing, in blood, on the wall
"Find a cure, for transparecy"
If god made me
why do they hate me?
Am I infected by the disease?
Down, I am, on begging knees
Praying for him to lift
The plague of transparency
Plague of transparency
Down on begging knees
Sit back, she's dying
Can you even see her
She crying out for you
Help her out of this madness
Be her cure for this, this
PLAGUE!!!!
If god made me
why do they hate me?
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Stirb nicht vor mir (don't die before i do)
ich warte heir (i wait here)
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Jun 25th, 2006 11:48 PM |
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twiggyramirexmm
lost & in love<3
Gender: Female Location: Canada |
plz rate and tell me what u think!
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Stirb nicht vor mir (don't die before i do)
ich warte heir (i wait here)
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Jun 25th, 2006 11:49 PM |
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twiggyramirexmm
lost & in love<3
Gender: Female Location: Canada |
anyone gonna rate it?
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Stirb nicht vor mir (don't die before i do)
ich warte heir (i wait here)
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Jun 26th, 2006 06:52 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Hmmm... I'd give this one prolly a... 7.4/10
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Jun 27th, 2006 03:36 AM |
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twiggyramirexmm
lost & in love<3
Gender: Female Location: Canada |
cool thx for rating
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Stirb nicht vor mir (don't die before i do)
ich warte heir (i wait here)
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Jun 28th, 2006 03:13 AM |
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2quiet
Junior Member
Gender: Location: Australia |
That is simply brilliant. I loved the idea of transperancy and it being a disease, and the rhythm worked really well for me. Love it.
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Aug 14th, 2006 09:45 AM |
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