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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

The Vinny Corner

In My Heart I Weep

In My Heart I Weep,
My soul has hidden deep,
I Cry for help but no one comes,
I've taken refuge in the slums.

I try to get back up,
Try and make that last jump,
I fail once again,
Am I damned to live in hell?

My life is spiraling downwards,
I need to make amends.
I try my best to do so, but it ends.
I failed at it once again.

Now I'm alone, cold and wet,
Afraid to ask for help.
What can I do to save myself,
All I see is the end.

I know its wrong,
I tell myself not to.
I'm stronger then this.
Why can I not stop?

My Life is a Mess,
There's no turning back.
Why Must I end so young?
In my heart I weep.




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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

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Location: Vancouver, Canada

Nice happy


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

Not Something I'd Usually do


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

Flames Of Nothing

In Flames Of Nothing,
You'll find Wealth.
Stones of Silver,
Bricks of Gold.

In Flames of Nothing,
You'll Find Love.
Red as your Heart,
Tasteful as a tart.

In Flames of Nothing,
You'll Find Intelligence.
Lots of Skills,
To help in life.

In Flames of Nothing,
My Heart will Lie.
I look For friends,
I will always find.

In Flames of Nothing,
I'll Reach out for support.
I'll be held up by many hands,
Hands willing to help.

In Flames Of Nothing,
There seems to be something.




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Location: In your pants

Oh wow i like them vinny yes Nice work


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Kudos Scribble for the wicked awesome sig!

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Selphie
you teasing like you do

Gender: Unspecified
Location: The Land of Bernie Sanders

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Vinny Valentine
In My Heart I Weep

In My Heart I Weep,
My soul has hidden deep,
I Cry for help but no one comes,
I've taken refuge in the slums.

I try to get back up,
Try and make that last jump,
I fail once again,
Am I damned to live in hell?

My life is spiraling downwards,
I need to make amends.
I try my best to do so, but it ends.
I failed at it once again.

Now I'm alone, cold and wet,
Afraid to ask for help.
What can I do to save myself,
All I see is the end.

I know its wrong,
I tell myself not to.
I'm stronger then this.
Why can I not stop?

My Life is a Mess,
There's no turning back.
Why Must I end so young?
In my heart I weep.





is this from the guy sitting on the computer, or from the character?


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Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by SelphieT
is this from the guy sitting on the computer, or from the character?

lol


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Camille's_Death
Forever lost..lol..lamo!!

Gender: Female
Location: Some where

GOOD..^O^


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TheMercurial
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Gender: Male
Location: Ireland

Re: The Vinny Corner

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Vinny Valentine
In My Heart I Weep

In My Heart I Weep,
My soul has hidden deep,
I Cry for help but no one comes,
I've taken refuge in the slums.

I try to get back up,
Try and make that last jump,
I fail once again,
Am I damned to live in hell?

My life is spiraling downwards,
I need to make amends.
I try my best to do so, but it ends.
I failed at it once again.

Now I'm alone, cold and wet,
Afraid to ask for help.
What can I do to save myself,
All I see is the end.

I know its wrong,
I tell myself not to.
I'm stronger then this.
Why can I not stop?

My Life is a Mess,
There's no turning back.
Why Must I end so young?
In my heart I weep.





Not bad........what exactly is the dilema which causes so much sorrow in the poem? Or is iit just a sad poem for the sake of being a sad poem?


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

Doesn't Need a Meaning.

It plays out that you are going to think what happens, when It might, or might not happen.


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TheMercurial
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Gender: Male
Location: Ireland

So its just kind of a general sad poem, and people are supposed to see their own problems in it?


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Xirius
So its just kind of a general sad poem, and people are supposed to see their own problems in it?




thumb up


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TheMercurial
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Gender: Male
Location: Ireland

nice.


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

Oh Yeah.


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big grin love 'em! they are really good! can't wait to read sum more


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada



In the Shadows I Wait

In The Shadows I Wait.
I try to be patient and Accept.
I Hold it all in.
Like Gas Overflowing in a Balloon

My tides have washed in,
I have blown.
My Mind has ran in circles.
Darkness.

I run rampaging all around
Letting out the Gas.
I burn it all up.
Lose So Many...
End.

Now I lay,
Busted down.
Brain dead in a Bed.
I have ruined My chances.
Friends are Enemies,
Enemies are Friends.

In The Shadows I wait,
Wait for the opening to reclaim my dignity.
In the Shadows, I Wait.


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wow, u've got real talent, i wish i could write as good as u, good job smile


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Vinny Valentine
Vinny Valentine

Gender: Male
Location: Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Vinny Valentine
A Lovely German
By Vinny Valentine

Bardock Bardock,
Oh Forty-Two,
I touch your cock,
While playing clue.

You never notice,
My ninja hand,
A hidden lotus,
Among the sand.

Tastes like berry,
Soft to touch,
Thank god not hairy,
Or even Dutch.


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Location: West of the Sun.

Wept.


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