Sirius_Rulez
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Gender: Female Location: Australia
ye it is really good but i still think it needs just a bit more of an improvement but its still really gr8
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Jul 10th, 2006 01:53 AM
Barker
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More description would help, since you asked for honesty.
I like the word "Thunderstream" though.
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Jul 10th, 2006 01:56 AM
danielle marie.
Bel Fan Club President
Gender: Female Location: waiting out eternity.
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Barker
More description would help, since you asked for honesty.
I like the word "Thunderstream" though.
I agree, I think that you're story is really good, but you could use a little more desription. And I like the word Thundertream too!!! That was really creative!
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Jul 10th, 2006 02:28 AM
Brit531
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Gender: Female Location: Somewhere where the fairies rein su
Yep, but your story is really good
Jul 10th, 2006 09:24 PM
danielle marie.
Bel Fan Club President
Gender: Female Location: waiting out eternity.
Keep posting!!
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Jul 11th, 2006 12:43 AM
cooldude1569
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Gender: Location: United States
Hey just read all that you posted and i love it cant wait till the next post
i like the new broom that Dumbledore made harry
its awsome keep posting
Jul 12th, 2006 04:47 AM
Brit531
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Gender: Female Location: Somewhere where the fairies rein su
are you going to post soon or what
Jul 29th, 2006 02:17 PM
HPFAN#7
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Gender: Location: Canada
i dunno. actually i havent had much time latly anyways
Last edited by HPFAN#7 on Jul 31st, 2006 at 03:31 PM
Jul 31st, 2006 03:16 PM
Brit531
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Gender: Female Location: Somewhere where the fairies rein su
you forgot how could you
Jul 31st, 2006 03:31 PM
HPFAN#7
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lol well it wasnt just forgeting but i have been out alot latly and i am rarely ever home
Jul 31st, 2006 03:33 PM
Brit531
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same here
Jul 31st, 2006 03:38 PM
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