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Brit531
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Trust
"Anyway... um... Like I was saying it's weird i mean its not a stone..." Brit began.
"Yeah, it looks more like a marble." Gig cut-in as she took the stone from Brit's hand.
"I know ,but watch this." Brit took the stone back and put it the table.
"Oh, wow." Kristina said.
"That's not it." Brit continued as she pushed the stone with her finger... or at least tried to. "It doesn't roll."
"Why?" Becky asked.
"I don't know."
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Brit531
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sorry my friend pressed the worong button at the top and made a new thread. Dis regard this thread.
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Aug 13th, 2006 06:43 PM |
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its alright. u could do alot better. it really needs alot of work
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Aug 15th, 2006 12:14 PM |
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Brit531
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Sorry you guys there was a mistake in which trust thread to lock down here's the story from the beginning.
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Aug 15th, 2006 04:48 PM |
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Brit531
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Trust
I began this story during 8th grade as a joke for my friend Brittany. Then I just kept going after awhile my friend joined in and helped me decide the development of this story and its characters.
Each character is based on one of my friends. Their reactions not so much as their looks and feelings. The story is based on multiple books, but created from my own imagination.
Four friends in a coming of age story, each their own problems, each their own way of solving them. Literally being thrown into a new world. Follow them threw questioning love, friendship, family, and religion.
Sometimes all you need is a little Trust .
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Aug 15th, 2006 04:49 PM |
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Brit531
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"Damn" Brittany muttered as she stumbled across the sidewalk. Looking back she noticed a green glinting from the stone she had just tripped over.
"No way" Brit whispered under her breath. It was impossible wasn't it. Or maybe it... no it couldn't be. She walked over to the small pebble.
It was. It had the same blue, green, purple, and red color to it when it shone in the light. It had the same perfectly round shape and brought the same question to her mind, "Why didn't it roll away?"
She picked it up. At least this time she could take it home and observe it. The last time she had seen the stone it had been half way across town while she was on her way to the lake to go swimming. It would have been very annoying to have to keep a hold on a stone on her end-of-vaction day out with friends.
But now that she was only a block away from her home on her early morning run before school she could take it with her.
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Geraldine woke with a start that morning. When she had opened her eyes she wasn't surprised to see her 4 year old cats Leo and Ozzy on her windowsill. She was surprised though to see that they had their hair on end and their eyes dilated to the point that you could barely see the ring of blue or green on the edge of all that black.
"Hey you two, what's wrong", she began as she sat up in bed. With no response from either the black or the white and grey cat she got up to see what all the fuss was about.
"What is it?" as she looked up she realized what it was. A small kitten was on one of the branches in the backyard. It was hard to tell what color its fur was from this distance ,but in the light that shone in from between the leaves it looked... no that was foolish... imagine a purple kitten. One thing that was for certain though, its eyes were green, an extremely deep green.
"It's so cute.", she whispered. Suddenly the small kitten turned its gaze towards her. The last things she saw from reality in that moment were not Leo and Ozzy ,but more along the lines of the lightning streaks that Leo and Ozzy become trying to make their way out her door.
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It had been about 7:10 in the morning. Becky was laying face down on the end of her bed watching her fav. t.v. show ,"The Tribe". Suddenly her t.v. started to flash.
"Miiiiiiiiiinnnnna", came a slow eerie voice. Becky could do nothing else but look around her room. "Miiiiiiiiinnnnna".
"What?.... Who are you?", Becky asked whipping her head around the room.
"Mina!" this time it sounded almost as if it were calling for something rather then stating it. It sounded almost like a girl.
"Miinnaaa..." the voice began to fade, 'Miinna..." It was gone.
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It was 7:43. Krystina was sitting alone in the class room with only the teacher who was sitting at his desk to keep her company.
She had gotten there early because each of her friends apparently had something important to tell and ,in Brittany's case ,show her. She would most rather be outside in the hallway with her boyfriend Daniel. Who conveniently also had something important to tell her.
Brittany and Rebeca walked together and Geraldine usually showed
Today better be good, Kris thought, I mean every things so important.
"I have a life too, even if the rest of you don't" she snickered under her breath.
The bell sounded and group girls who Kris recognized very well, walked in threw the door ahead of the rest of the class.
"Oh my God! Kristina you won't believe what happened today!" Becky said as she sat down.
"It was so weiiird!" Brit told her.
Gigi (Geraldine) just sat there in silence.
"Your on time and you have nothing to say. Looks like it will be good day." Kris said sarcastically.
"Shut-up Kristina" Brit warned, "She has her reasons." Brittany turned around in her seat apparently no longer interested in telling her story.
"Becky, can you fill me in? Seeing as everyone else feels the need to lock me out of the news." Kris said.
"Love to." Becky said.
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"Oh my freakin' God!" Kristina exclaimed as Becky finished explaining to her what had happened in her room that morning. Class wasn't too far from being over seeing as Becky had taken it upon herself to detail every second of tale.
"Yeah, I know! I was almost to scared to take a shower this morning."
"What about Brittany and Gigi? I mean there has to be a reason they're so huffy today?"
"Actually I don't know know what's up with Brit ,but Gigi...well.... It was really weird. She woke up this morning and her cats were fluffed up. When she went to go check what was going on she saw a kitten in her backyard."
"So, what? Did it get like run over or something? I mean "Oh look a kitten' big deal." Kristina said sarcastically.
"Kristina,... that's not funny. She say that when she looked out the window the kitten turned to look at her and..."
"And what." Kristina pressed.
"And when she locked eyes with it she says she saw all these really ,really, bad images. She said it was like she was reliving it or something."
"Reliving what?"
"I don't know. She wouldn't tell us ,but what ever it was ... it was probably pretty bad." Becky ended lamely.
"Oh..." Kristina breathed turning to look at Geraldine just as the bell began to ring.
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"So Brittany tell us what is it that you had to tell us." Becky said sitting down across from Brit and next to Kris.
"What?... Oh yeah! Um..." she reached into her jacket pocket. "I found this during my morning run."
"OH WOW! A rock. How fascinating." Kristina mused flatly.
"No! Well, yeah, I mean, it is a rock but... I don't know it's kinda special."
"Special Ed." Kristina said in what was supposedly a whisper.
"Kristina, what have we told you about under naming yourself. The word is retard my dear." Gigi announced as she sat down by Brit.
"Well you should know, shouldn't you Gig'?" Kristina said over the stifled laughter around her.
"Of course I should sweetie, I hang with you all the time." Geraldine gave as response while the others continued their laughter in congratulations to her attack.
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"Anyway... um... Like I was saying it's weird i mean its not a stone..." Brit began.
"Yeah, it looks more like a marble." Gig cut in as she took the stone from Brit's hand.
"I know ,but watch this." Brit took the stone back and put it the table.
"Oh, wow." Kristina said.
"That's not it." Brit continued as she pushed the stone with her finger... or at least tried to. "It doesn't roll."
"Why?" Becky asked.
"I don't know."
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Aug 15th, 2006 04:51 PM |
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Brit531
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From the Writer to my Readers:
I will not write anymore until I get a comment. I feel like I am writing to the wall. Tell me if I am a good wirter or if I am a bad writer or if I bring shame to the world of writing. I don't care what you say just say it.
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Aug 17th, 2006 01:38 AM |
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danielle marie.
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I like this story. Interesting... I love it!!
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Aug 17th, 2006 01:57 AM |
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Brit531
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Cool!!
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Aug 17th, 2006 02:27 AM |
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Brit531
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come on ppl mor comments
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Aug 21st, 2006 12:45 AM |
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Brit531
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Later that day, walking home from school
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"So, what do you think it all means?" Becky asked.
"I think it means we're all on the slow circular decent towards insanity." Gigi said in away you would think she was talking to some else. She was nodding her head which told you she was in two places at once. Walking home with her friends... and outer space.
"Gig' are you in dream La-la Land again." Kristina said in away you knew she still hadn't forgiven her for lunch today.
"For YOUR information ,Kristina, it's called an imagination and some of us actually have one this time in age. Where all people believe is what is right in front of them and the rest the leave to science to figure out."
"For your information..." Kristina mocked.
"ANYWAYS... so whose house are we going to today." Becky chimed in.
"Well I'm going Danny's house. It seems he has something important to tell me."
"Well I hope the subject of extrema annoyance is involved."
"Sorry, Geraldine, the conversation is about us not small Brain rodents."
"Same thing." Gigi said with a wave as she crossed the street with Brittany and Becky leaving Kristina in cloud of hatred to walk with to danny's house.
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"I just don't see why you and Kris always have to be going at it." Becky ended with a sigh as she sat down a bag of candy in Brittany's kitchen.
"Well maybe its the fact that Kristiuna never learns." Brit explained
"Exactly!" Gigi agreed.
"Learns what?" Becky asked.
"That I'm better then she is" Gigi said placing a blow-pop into her smiling mouth.
"Seriously Gig' why can't you and Kristina give it break."
"Well maybe if KRISTINA would lay off Gig' then Gigi would leave Kristina alone?"
"Not true Brit." Gigi intervined in a matter of fact way, "Just because Kristina is no longer laying on me, does not mean i will not devulge her of her wicked simplemindedness."
With that the repeated agrument ended and broke into laughter.
"SOOOOO, anyone for some 'Princess Bride' " Gigi sang out as she pulled the DVD from her back-pack.
"HELLO MY NAME IS MISTER HOTTIE-PANTS YOU MURDERED MY FATHER PREPARE TO DIE!" They said rang in great memory of their favorite quote of the movie.
It hadn't been fifteen minutes when things turned strange.
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Aug 21st, 2006 01:59 AM |
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Brit531
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Comments Anyone?
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Aug 21st, 2006 08:30 PM |
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danielle marie.
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I liked it. I liked the first part better though.
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Aug 21st, 2006 08:31 PM |
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Brit531
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The popcorn in the microwave began to pop so hard it open the microwave door. The t.v. started to fuzz in and out and the televisions from upstairs could be heard. While the radio began to blast music on the surround sound.
"WHAT"S GOING ON!" Becky screamed over the roar.
"HOW SHOULD I KNOW!" Brit screamed back.
"IT'S ALIENS! THEY'RE TRYING TO KILL US!" Brit's little brothers, Zack and John, screamed as they came streaming down the stairs and crowded around the girls."THEY WANT OUR BRAINS!"
"SHUT UP!" Gigi's voice rang supreme over the rest the chaos.
"mina....mina..." ,came a small voice from near the stairs. "Mina...Mina." ,the voice sounded louder and seemed to approached the place they stood near the couch.
"YOU GUYS I THINK WE SHOULD MOVE." Brit suggested backing away.
"MINA! MINA!" The voice sounded almost as if it were right in the center of the group.
"THIS'S EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENED IN MY ROOM!" Becky screamed.
"MINA!MINA" it started to reach the back of the group.
"I'M SERIOUSLY THINK WE SHOULD MOVE!" Brit repeated.
"Mina!...Mina...mina" just like that the voice disappeared and the everything went quite.
There was along silence finally broken by Gigi.
"Okay we're definitely going insane."
"Shhhh... listen." Becky said.
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Aug 27th, 2006 12:36 AM |
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danielle marie.
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Great job!!
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Aug 28th, 2006 09:47 PM |
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Brit531
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well my friend says thanks for the comments and the next time she is on she will post
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Aug 28th, 2006 10:38 PM |
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Brit531
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Hidy hoe my loves, its me the writer. Sorry for taking so long on coming back. With the starting of school I've been very busy but i promise to stick to my commitments. Hope you love this.
Your's truly
Your fav author
Gigi_21
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Sep 3rd, 2006 04:53 PM |
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danielle marie.
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Awesome! I love your story!!
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Sep 3rd, 2006 08:21 PM |
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Brit531
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Thank you so do i. I adore my adoring fans now please dnt be confused wen it says Brit531 bcuz it is actually i Gigi21. wen ever you read a funny sentence I'll be there... If its a part in the harry potter story that brit's writing that sounds good ill be there.
I adore you my adoring fans
Gigi21
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Sep 3rd, 2006 09:08 PM |
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danielle marie.
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Lol. Okay!!
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