I used to have a thread here, but I didn't post in it for ages....guess it got deleted, because I can't find it anywhere....oh well^-^
Fading Image
Nothing left now; you’re just another face in a crowd.
The unchanged eyes, the unchanged smile,
But you’re becoming a stranger.
Malicious darling, still telling those awful lies?
Clever darling, I could have sworn you were different.
Miserable darling, I’ll give you no more pity.
I’m watching you as you watch me,
& I’m seeing something bizarre in your eyes….
something unknown to me.
You’re panicking now.
Have you lost your halo, angel?
Don’t bother searching for it….it’s well & truly gone.
No need to worry, though….
Just find another fool….they’ll hand you a new halo.
I’m starting this over, but I’m finishing it.
I’m looking the other way & I’m falling behind.
I’m breaking free, I’m losing my ties; I refuse to follow a shadow.
Eager eyes, triumphant eyes, there’s still so much more to witness.
Focusing on nothing, but seeing something….just a glimpse of something.
Left or Right? Choosing the correct path is important.
I’ll take happiness, thanks.
Sore & sick.
Reaching my redeemer is a precarious journey….
But just a glimpse of him is worth everything.
“Never,” darling used to say….
You’re helping me forget, sweetheart.
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Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.
Last edited by Roulette on Aug 22nd, 2006 at 04:15 AM
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Is there anything you can't do missy?? Beautiful and multi-talented, I'm impressed. As for the other thread, why don't you transfer all of your pieces from there to here rather than bumping it? It was two years ago, after all
to quote Mr Burns "I know what i hate...and i dont hate that"
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I am aware that "your" should be "you're," and while I know I should change it as not to offend the grammar fans around the boards, school always said not to bow to peer pressure so it stays as it is
Oh...f*ck...well I'm embarrassed. I seriously forgot that it was there I posted it in that forum because back then, there was no Poetry forum.
Oh..wow..I'm flattered thank you!
Lovely idea, Syren Except...I don't think I'd like to post all of them in here^^; because there are a lot of them, and they're not all that good..hehe. Maybe I'll just post a few^-^
thanks!
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Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.
Hehe...well..*claps hands together* I was having a look through my old thread, and I gotta tell ya...o.o...wow some of the stuff I thought was good back then, really doesn't seem so good now^-^ haha. So, I don't think I'll post my old poems here....but, I am working on a new poem I'll post it when I'm done^-^
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Madness, as you know, is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.
wow. i'm impressed with your style and the theme of your work. it's really good. i like that it's written in a contemporary style which is gaining popularity. unlike me who is still in the old way of writing with strict meter and cadence and rhyming convention. but when you read yours slow and aloud...it all makes sense, not that it didn't before.
sadly most people tend to read poetry as if it were a magazine to be skimmed real fast and not taking the time to enjoy it and allow the words to sink in and be mesmerised.
okay...i've done my part. good work Roulette. your talent is raw but very good.
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Aug 22nd, 2006 04:08 AM
...well I'm embarrassed. I seriously forgot that it was there
I posted it in that forum because back then, there was no Poetry forum. 
thanks!
I'm sure yours aren't all that bad, though^-^
Very nice work Rou 
