 |
sailorleo
Mrs. Admiral Norrington
 Gender: Female
Location: United States |
aw! that's a cute smiliey!
__________________
Norrie+Sailor= Happiness !
Banner by Sailorleo *me*
|
Oct 31st, 2006 02:40 AM |
|
|
| |
|
mmoviejunkie
willywanka?johnny wanker!
 Gender: Female
Location: 1431 Elm Street-in bed w/ Glen |
lol-isn't it?
__________________
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 02:43 AM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
Will: so where will we find blackbeard?
Jack: unfortunatly, I have no idea
Jackson: I still cant believe Belle can handle a gun like that!!!
all the men turn and look at Jackson, shake their heards and turn back to their conversation
Jack: we need to come up with a plan, whats weird is Blackbeard should knwo that were trying to find him and he is no where in sight, he should be hott on our trail?
Will: where could he be
Jack: (thinking about where blackbeard could be and why he isnt taking this opprtunity to get even with him, he looks up and has the look of fear in his eyes)he screams LIZ
scene fades to Sparrow Island, Inside the home of Jack and Liz
Liz: ok girls, are we ready if anything should happen, everyone knows their stations?
Kate: yes but Liz, you really neeed to take it easy, I mean the baby
ABi: Yes Liz at least lie down for a while
Belle: looking out the window. I am afraid, there will be no time for resting ladies,
Liz: what? goes to the window, sees blackbeards ship in the horizon
to your stations ladies,
__________________
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 09:06 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
hey guys, I guess that comment was for me, sorry for misspelling eunuch
Thanks for the correction though
__________________
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 09:13 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Tramps Lady
Blaine
 Gender: Female
Location: Jump Street Chapel |
thats a good chapt
__________________
<3 Tommy and Doug McQuaid <3
<3 21 JumpStreet <3
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 09:33 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
thanks luv
Ive been writing most by me onsie
please anyone can write if they would like to
__________________
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 10:03 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Tramps Lady
Blaine
Gender: Female
Location: Jump Street Chapel |
i just want to get the idea first....so if you could write the next 1 or 2 chapters...ill dtart writing
__________________
<3 Tommy and Doug McQuaid <3
<3 21 JumpStreet <3
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 10:08 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
sure thing
I am acually about to leave work so when I get home later this evening I will write some Ok
__________________
|
|
Oct 31st, 2006 10:12 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
Back on the Pearl:
Jack: almost in full panic, I should have never listened to you guys, or liz for that matter I should have never left her alone!how was I to think I would be ablele to find blackbeard
Will: Jack, you know as well as I do she will be fine, she can hold her own
Jack: yes Will I know that, but now she has two lives to look after, hers and our childs, and shes already been through so much
Jackson: we need to head back to sparrow isalnd right away
Norrie: I agree, Ful speed ahead
eveyone looks at Norrie,
Norrie: looks at Jack: sorry mate, you are still the Captain
Jack: its ok mate, Call the orders, I just want to make it home to my wife before something awfull happens(turns and walks into his cabin)
Belle peeks around the window seale, she sees Pirates getting off the ship and making their way to the home with fire torches and weapons
Belle: there is no turning back now ladies, its time
just then the door is broken down by the pirates and the run into a home wich appears empty
Pirate : no one is here
Blackbeard walks in, they are here , search the place, I want the pregnant one unharmed!! as for the rest kill them
__________________
Last edited by shannstar79 on Nov 1st, 2006 at 04:10 PM
|
|
Nov 1st, 2006 04:07 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
This is a huge fight between the ladies and Blackbeards crew, Belle is in the living rooms fighting off the pirates she has already shot 2 others and is now ingaged in sword fighting, Jacky is in the hallway, sword fighting with 2 pirates and Abi and Kate are upstairs and have over taken 4 pirates, Liz in in the kitchen and has fought off at least 12 pirates on her own, Blackbeard walks in and sword fights with her she slices his arm on the left side
Liz: what do you want:
Blackbeard: you
Just then it appears the ladies are about to be overtaken, Abi is being held at gun point
Pirate 1: captain, I ve brought you the pregnant one
Pirate 2: Sir, NO Ive brought you the pregnanat one!
Pirate 3: NO NO No Ive brought the pregnant one
Abi, Belle, Kate ,Jacky and Liz Grab their bellies, and grin
Blackbeard: whats the meaning of this? Which on of you is Elizabeth Sparrow
All 5 ladies raise their hands and smile
( you see hwta Blacbeard didnt know was this was all part of the girls plan, they were pretending to be preganat and be Elizabeth Sparrow so Blackbeard would not know who to kidnap)
Blackbeard: some one better fess up, or there will be hell to pay
the ladies turn and look at each other,
Belle: No Blackbeard you are the only one who will pay in hell
at that instant the all 5 ladies take a pistil from under their dresses and point them directly at Blackbeard
at that instant
Jack, Will, Norrie, Alex, and Jackson run into the house they stop dead in their tracks they see all 5 wemon, pregnant belllies, dead pirates lying on the floor, and Blackbeard standing with 5 ladies pointing guns in his face
Jack: looks and Jackson, told you they could hold thir own son
Jackson: looks like theyve been holding on to alot more than that, theyr all pregnant! EVEN BELLE
Jack: wispering, son, their not all preganat! they are just extremly SMART
Jack: Blackbeard! whats your purpsoe here!!
Blackbeard, ahh sparrow, call these wenches off of me
Belle: what did you say!
Jackson: you may not want to do that Blackbeard shes a feisty one!
Blackbeard: I see that, they all are, but I am here to settle a score with you sparrow,
Jack: I know why your here, I cannot help hat has happened in the past, Claico Jack was my grandfather, I know he killed your grandfather,Jmaes Bonny, but thats life blackebard, they were pirates
Blackbeard: yes but you see my grandfathers dying wish was to see that all sparrows be killed, for what Calico jacck and Anne Bonney did to him so now its your turn Sparrow
Blackbeard raises his gun cocks it and points it at Jack
we hear a gun shot, silence, Blackbeard falls to the ground
we see Elizabath satnding there with her gun still pointed at Blackbeard, the gun smoking
Liz: looking at Jack,I save your life, you save mine were square luv!
he runs to her grabs her and kisses her
belle: Thanks God this is over, now we can remove these Pillows, they were driving me CRAZY!!
all the ladies remove their pillows
Jackson: Belle, I am so proud of you, you really shock me!
Jack and Liz are still hugging and smiling
Liz: Thank goodness this is all over with blackbeard
Jack: thanks to you, I am so sorry I left you here
Liz: we were ok, we did fine, if I do say so myself she says with a grin
Jack: you always do luv
Liz: Only problem is : who is going to clean up this place?
__________________
Last edited by shannstar79 on Nov 1st, 2006 at 04:44 PM
|
|
Nov 1st, 2006 04:39 PM |
|
|
| |
|
tee_pirategirl
YoHo!YoHo!
 Gender: Female
Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky |
aaaaaaaaaaaw that was so smart ...and funny. lol poor ol black beard.
__________________
My hats off to joanjoan
Freedom...
|
|
Nov 1st, 2006 05:03 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
Thank you so much,
feel free to write some if you like'
__________________
|
|
Nov 1st, 2006 05:14 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Tramps Lady
Blaine
Gender: Female
Location: Jump Street Chapel |
thats good...lol
__________________
<3 Tommy and Doug McQuaid <3
<3 21 JumpStreet <3
|
|
Nov 1st, 2006 08:44 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
Later that evening Elizabeth is resting on the couch while all the men are suprisingly helping clean the house, she hears commotion and opens her eyes, looks around and see's Jack cleaning
Liz: now this is how it should be , she says with a grin
Jack: dont get used to it luv
Norrington: I am used to it, I have to do this at home all the time
Jacky: thats right, got mine trained well ladies
All the wemon begin to laugh aout loud, the men sit down in the living room and begin to pour the Rum, they begin to become slightly sloshed
Liz: well this is dreadfull
Abi: what dear what is?
Liz: she pouts her bottom lip , I cant have rum with you guys
Will: I am sure it wont be long lizzie, you will give birth soon and then you can
Jack: drinking heavily, hey dont call her lizzie, thats my lizzie, shut up you bloody idiot
kate: Jack!!!
Liz: Jack
Jack: sorry luv, looking at his rum bottle, hey Jackson, want some Rum, Its time you tried some
jack: JACKSON?
Jack: hey where is Jackson
Jackson and Isabella have taken a walk and are sitting on the sand along the shoreline
Jackson: Isabella, I am sorry or misjudging your fighting abilities
Belle: Jackson Its ok, no big deal, just dont let it happen again, she says with a gigle
Jackson: May I tell you something?
Belle: sure
Jackson: I am so in love with you
she turns to him and smiles
Belle: Jackson, I am so in love with you too, you kow Jackson we are almost 18 now,practically adults, dont you think its time we start acting like it, could be fun she says with a grin
Jackson: what do you mean luv, I am curious
Belle: Ill show you, she says with a smile
They embrace in a very sexy kiss, fall back into the sand and the scene fades
__________________
|
|
Nov 2nd, 2006 07:18 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Tramps Lady
Blaine
Gender: Female
Location: Jump Street Chapel |
lol!!! rofl!!!! soooo funny! in some way....lol
__________________
<3 Tommy and Doug McQuaid <3
<3 21 JumpStreet <3
|
|
Nov 2nd, 2006 08:00 PM |
|
|
| |
|
shannstar79
Jack's Girl
Gender: Female
Location: Birmingham, Al |
six months have passed and we see Sparrow Mannor on a beautiful day sun shinning, nice warm breeze, we see Elizabeth sitting in a swing on the porch of her house, rocking a baby Jack walks out to bring a bottle:
Jack: how are my two lovley ladies this morning? he says with a smile
Elizabeth: Catherine and I are perfect Jack,
Jack: Elizabeth, i was thinking: I bel;ieve we have had our pirating fun, we have plundered, phillaged, seen the world through the eyes of the Black Pearl for so many years now, we have a family now and now we have baby catherine to raise and I think we should slow down
Elizabeth: what do you mean Jack?
Jack: I want to give the pearl to Jackson, with the announcement of their wedding comming up, I think it to be the perfect gift
Elizabeth: Oh Jack I think that is a wonderfull idea, They will be so happy, when will we tell them
Jack : we will tell them tonight,arent they comming for dinner , by the way you look beautiful, Ive never seen you more beautiful than when you are holding our children ..... except for thet one time when you chained me up to the mast and left me to die, you looked beautiful then too
Elizabeth: jack! I have said I am sorry for that a million times
Jack: no luv, no need for sorry, it made me love you even more than I already did
he reaches down and kisses her, walks out to the pearl to prepare it for the evening
later that evening, a knock at the door
Liz: Come in you two
Jackson: hi mom its so good to see you
Liz: you too son, she says as she hugs him.. isabella how are you? you look beautiful as ever
Isabella: Elizabeth, thank you so much ! Is there anything I can help you with
Liz: sure come with me into the kitchen, Jackson your father is in the living room, playing with Catherine go join him
Jackson eneters the family room and sees jack sitting on the floor with Catherine she is sound asleep in his arms, he is gently rocking his body and singing her a lullaby
Jackson: hi dad
jack: Hi son!! I amso happy to see you
catherine begins to wake up, she wimpers a bit and jack holds her up to play with her
Jack: here son take your sister, I gotta pea
Jackson Thanks dad, too much info!!
Jackson is holding the baby and playing with her when Liz comes to tell them dinner is ready
Liz: you know your going to make a great father someday jackson, you know how I know this? because you are just like your father, and he is the best
after dinner catherine is put to bed, and of course the rum has been poured
Jack: Son, your mother and I have a surprise for you and Isabella
jackson: what, your not having another baby are you mom
Elizabeth: good Lord no Jackson
jack: we have been practicing just in case though
Liz: jack!
Jackson: dad !
Jack: what, sorry
Jack: your mother and I are very proud of you, and we wantto give you a wedding present that has been a huge part of our lives and a vital part of how we met. we want you to have the Pearl
jackson: are you serious!!
Isaballa: yea are you serious? Oh my gosh, this is great!!
Jackson: Thank you guys so much are you sure
Jack: we are more than sure
Isabella: Jackson, can we get merried on the pearl?
jackson: anything you want luv.
liz: i haddent thought of that! Thats a great idea
Isabella: so does this mean you two arent pirates anymore
Jack: no way dearie, we will always be pirates, its who we are were like two sparrows in a hurricaine, we will always keep going, but we want to teach catherine a different life, times are changing
jackson: Thank you guys so mucj! This is the best gift anyone could have ever given us!!
they all begin to drink more, laughing, they played a game of poker,
Jack: completly sloshed, jackshun, looks like we get to take the pearl out tonight
Jackson: why is that dad? oh never mind I know
jackson, Isabella, Elizabeth and Jack say all in unison
beacause THE RUM IS GONE they all begin to laugh
scene fades
__________________
Last edited by shannstar79 on Nov 8th, 2006 at 07:19 PM
|
|
Nov 8th, 2006 07:16 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Tramps Lady
Blaine
Gender: Female
Location: Jump Street Chapel |
thats awesome! lol
__________________
<3 Tommy and Doug McQuaid <3
<3 21 JumpStreet <3
|
|
Nov 8th, 2006 09:09 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Pirates-Orlie
I'm the greatest PotC-fan
Gender: Female
Location: The Netherlands |
Why did you stopped? Won't you go write anymore? 
__________________
Orlando Bloom is sooooo hot.....
|
|
Jan 27th, 2007 11:12 AM |
|
|
| |
|
ibd4eva
Ivebeendepped 4 ever!
 Gender: Female
Location: Decreasing worldsuck |
yeah! this thread ttly dissappeared people!! read it again, and write more!
__________________
"Get that out of my face." "It's not in your face, it's in my hand." "Get what's in your hand out of my face." <3 set by yours truly
|
|
Jan 29th, 2007 11:43 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Eveline
I love Orlando Bloom
Gender: Female
Location: In my room |
Oooww I love those self-made stories. Shall we make a new one? I will write too! Please someone react if you want to help me make a PotC 8!
__________________
Hi I'm Eveline
|
|
Mar 11th, 2007 06:49 PM |
|
|
| |
Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
|
HTML code is OFF
vB code is ON
Smilies are ON
[IMG] code is ON
|
|
Text-only version |
|
|
KMC Community Forums
