KMC Forums - My 1st story and its Wolfs Rain

Kiba stared into the moonlit sky and then he closed his eyes. "Paradise is close... I can feel it." Hige turned towards him. "Huh? Really? I don't feel anything." Hige complained. "That's probably because he's got more confidense than brains." Tsume replied. Kiba's smile went away slowly after he said that. Tsume still didn't like Kiba all that much. he still felt as if he were showing off. Tsume got up & began to walk off. "Where the heck are you going?" Hige asked with a bored face. "I'm bored!" Tsume began walking off & said, "Well...find a way to entertain yourself then." Tsume answered. Hige looked to the left of himself. Then to the right. "How CAN I? There's no food or girls around!" Hige whined. "You'll find a way." Tsume replied. Hige growled & laid back down. "Who gives a damn anymore..." he said with a sigh. "Kiba? When are we going to Paradise?" Hige asked. Kiba laid there without answering for a long time. Right when Hige was about to get impatient waiting for an answer, Kiba said, "Soon..."

Quent Yaiden walked out of the bar & untied Blue. "Alright, Blue." Quent said. "Are you ready?" Blue loved Quent. Even if he was an alcoholic, she would give her life for him. Quent had another bottle of liquor & began drinking it as soon as he came out of that place. "I'll always be there for you, Pops..." Blue said to herself.

Hige looked & sniffed around. "What's wrong?" Kiba asked. "Where's Toboe?" he panicked. Kiba got up. "Toboe!" he yelled. The two wolves ran in different directions. Tsume on the other hand, had enough of Kiba's dumbness. "Stupid guy.." he said to himself. Suddenly, he bumped into another wolf he's never seen before. "HEY! Watch where you're going!" Tsume yelled at her. "Same with you, you JERK!" she replied. Tsume had her held to the ground in less than a second. "NO ONE talks to me that way.... Not even a GIRL like YOU." he growled. She got quiet. Tsume got off her & began to walk back. "Back off, kid." "My name's Sedrie."(seh-dree-eh) she said. Tsume didn't care. "What's yours?" Tume stopped and turns towards her. "Why don't yyou lay off before I get pissed off. And you better go back to the rat hole you crawled out off." Sedrie's eyes watered. Tsume began walking off. "By the way, my name is none of your business." Tsume said. Sedrie was speechless. "That way, we don't know each other & we can get back to our lives." Tsume left her behind...After a long day of searching for Toboe, Kiba and Hige took some time to rest. "Damn... When that lil' runt gets lost, I'm tellin' ya, he SURE gets lost!" Hige said out of breath. "Yeah..." Kiba agreed. "But, he'll show up soon. He can't forget our scent." Kiba added.

Tsume came back and walked right past Kiba with a sour attitude as usual. "Tsume." Kiba said. "Watch your backs. There may be another wolf headed our way..." Tsume said. Both Hige and Kiba gasped. "She calls her self Sedrie, and I really don't give a crap." Hige stamped his foot. "How can you SAY that?! Do you know how rare wolves like us are today?!" Hige yelled. Tsume stopped. "Yes, I know, but she's up to something." Tsume said. "I can feel it." Hige stopped arguing. Kiba turned his head off in the direction Tsume walked from. Kiba sniffed the air. "Is that her?..." Kiba asked Tsume. "Why wouldn't it be?" Tsume replied.

Meanwhile, Toboe was lost in some dumpy place. "I'm so hungry.." he whined. "I could eat a horse." Toboe rubbed his stomach. It growled. "OOh... I KNEW I should of stayed with Kiba and the others!!!" Toboe dropped the subject and ran to the scent of his pack.

Sedrie, a brownish-gold wolf stopped in her tracks. She was silent. Tsume butted in. "Well, well, WELL." he said to her, walking around her. "LOOK who it is.." Sedrie felt very offended and blushed from embarassment. "Stop..." she said, tear-eyed with a squealy voice. Hige huffed. "Tsume! Cut that out! She's just a girl!" Tsume stopped and looked at him. "And?" he asked. "Show her some respect! She doen't even KNOW us yet!" Tsume grabbed Sedrie's collar. "LOOK AT THIS!" he said pointing at it. "It looks just like your collar!" Hige got silent. Hige walked to her. "It...is like mine." he said, grabbing his collar at the same time. Hige straightened his face. "Tsume, put her down." Hige orderd. "Hige.." Kiba said... Tsume didn't listen. "Put her DOWN!" Hige growled. "FINE. I'll put the stupid ***** down." Tsume plopped her on the ground. Hige ran to comfort her. "Don't get too close with her..." Tsume said. "She might be a traitor..." Tsume said, looking at Hige with narrowed eyes. Tsume walked off. "I'm Hige." Hige said, trying to comfort her. Sedrie smiled. "You're the first wolf that ever stood up for me..."
The weather become hotter as the pack journeyed further into the dessert.
�It�s so hot...� Hige complained. �I could drink a full lake�� Toboe looked over at him. �You can say�that again...� he replied. �Would you two stop complaining?� Tsume said. �You�ve been complaining how hot it was way before we entered this stupid dessert, and it�s getting old.� Kiba and Sedrie were the only one�s quiet.

They soon found shelter. Toboe and Kiba went to look for food. Tsume went for a walk. Sedrie was by herself alone in a corner, sitting down. Hige walked to her and sat beside her. �Why the long face?� Hige asked. Sedrie didn�t say a word. �C�mon, you can tell me.� Hige said in encouragement, hoping she would answer eventually. �Hige�� her soft voice let out. �Huh?� Hige gasped. �You know when another wolf likes another wolf a whole lot�but they never say anything?� she asked. �Yeah�� Hige answered, wanting her to go on. �Well� That�s how I feel about you!� she blurted out. �But� I�� Hige was thinking about Blue the entire time after Sedrie answered him. Sedrie looked up at him. �Hige� Am I not good enough for you?� she asked in her innocent voice. �No� It�s just� I�m kind of seeing someone else at the moment�� he said.

Blue sniffed the air. Quent looked down at her. �You smell them wolves?� he asked. Blue suddenly ran off. �BLUE!� Quent yelled. �Come back here!�

Sedrie was quiet a long time after the talk about Blue. �Is she�prettier than me?� she asked. Hige was surprised. �She IS isn�t she?!� she yelled, with slight tears in her eyes. Sedrie got up. �No! Don�t say things like that!� Hige demanded. �I�m leaving!� Sedrie yelled louder. Hige never heard her yells so loudly. Before she could leave from the cave, Hige pounced on her and was on top of her. �You�re not going anywhere�� Hige said with confidence in his voice. Tsume came in just then. �Did I interrupt you two?� he asked. Hige gasped and immediately got off of her. Sedrie made a run for it. �Tsume! Get her!� he yelled. Tsume stood where he was and caught her collar as she ran by. �Let go!� Sedrie yelled. �What�s gotten IN to her?� Tsume asked, a little concerned. �I don�t know. I just started talking about Blue and she totally freaked.� Hige answered.

Blue came across the cave and saw Hige. �Hige�� she said softly. Sedrie growled and bit Tsume�s hand. She ran off. �Sedrie!� Hige yelled. Blue walked over to him. �Who was that?� Blue asked. �Just some other wolf�� he sadly replied.

Sedrie ran as far as the wolf eye could see and tripped, crying. �I�ll never find love! Never!� Sedrie cried. She got up, straightened her face and wiped her tears away. �Hige� was the only one for me�� Sedrie said. �The only one and I�m getting him back!�

A tank-like vehicle came across Sedrie. Sedrie�s eyes widened. Suddenly, back in the cave, the pack heard a mournful howl that seemed to make a shiver down everyone�s spine. �That has to be Sedrie!� Hige said getting up. They were running and came across Kiba and Toboe. �Did you hear that howl?� Kiba asked. �It was so sad.� Toboe replied. �That�s Sedrie! We�ve got to save her! She�s in trouble!!!!� Hige yelled.

The whole pack ran towards the cry for help�
The pack ran as fast as they could. They saw Sedrie being took into the vehicle and Hige jumped on one of Jagura�s guards, causing them to let go of Sedrie. Hige caught Sedrie. Sedrie was out cold. �We need to take her to Cheza!� Hige said. Kiba nodded. They ran away as fast as they could.

Hige gently laid her down in the silk-soft grass beside a river. Cheza slowly approached Sedrie. Cheza smiled. �Where did you find this wolf? This one has never seen such a pretty wolf, other than Kiba�� she asked. Kiba smiled, being happy knowing that he wasn�t left out. Cheza took her hand and stroked her fingers through Sedrie�s fine fur. Sedrie opened her eyes, and seemed to be scared. �Do not fear this one. This one is here to help you�� Cheza said softly. Blue seemed to be concentrating on what Cheza was going to do to Sedrie. �You okay, Blue?� Hige asked her. �Yeah� I hope she�ll be alright after this�� Blue said. Hige looked at her from the corner of this eye. �Yeah� Same here��

After several minutes, Sedrie opened her eyes once again. She looked over at everyone. �She will be okay.� Cheza responded. �Not related to the subject,� Tsume interrupted, �but have you noticed something about Jagura�s troops when we went to rescue Sedrie?� he asked. Kiba looked up at him. Tsume stood up. �Why did we get Sedrie so easily? They�re up to something, so keep your eyes peeled.� Tsume added. Hige got up, and so did Blue, Toboe and Kiba. Sedrie just laid there. �Hey, we gotta get going now.� Hige said to her. She rolled on her stomach and picked her self up with her forearms. �Yeah.� She said. She smiled for the first time in a long time. Kiba looked before him. �Cheza�.� Kiba said. Cheza nodded and got on Kiba�s back. �Kiba?� Sedrie said. Kiba looked over at her. �Can I carry Cheza?� she asked. Kiba nodded and Cheza got on Sedrie�s back.

They ran towards a city�

(thats every thing i got so far i might add on to it but i would like some help